GaZeeBo vs Word Perfect
 

aight 10 lines

u spit first

no dickriding
no feedin
no hate votes

honest explained votes

20 minutes to spit k?

hey we get 20 mins soo we spit at the same time okay?
that way its fair onb both parties just post here when your ready

aight no problem but no feedin ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

are you ready ???????????????
im done.............................................. ................................................

are you ready ???????????????
im done.............................................. ................................................
10 lines is too short bu okay

I'm god's maker, you worship a false god? I'm far greater/
Everything you speak's a metaphor, so I fight them off with salt shakers/
Should I battle you, I'm probably the only guy that will bother/
We should take this to Family Feud, since I'm your Biological father /
I'm that type of beast to leave you deceased..or instead/
I'll expose you,cou cause you're just like yeast, you in-bred/
How could you destroy me, when even an Expidition can't crush me/
You could hang me, but your noose would still be the only thing tight to touch me/
Dismantle the wack, meetin your end like I slammed through your back/
Why speak of punches? You gonna throw less hooks than a Canibus track/
So good luck but you'll neva beat my persistance/
Im gonna win this shit VIVA LA RESISTANCE/

thats 12 lines sry about that didnt realize^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

in one bar i can beat the plaseebo out of gazeebo-
anything he spit's "gay produced" like sperm donars in speedos'.
i earned a battle but the site failed to deliver their best-
yeah i'll sleep on GAZEEBO, he only reps a place to relax and rest.
i'll hit you in the dick with punches and spit till it splits to a wet clit-
cause your verse is like your avatar that script and the writters a bitch........do i need to switch? .........
nah im carnivore eating through your bone marrow-leaving it hallowed-2-2 means you spit 2 ill rhymes barrowed-
from what you contracted the 2 times you swollowed-
wrote a throw away rhyme, tossed it and told you to fallow.
if you have to ask_ that metaphor for your trash.....

aight lets get some votes in here^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

in one bar i can beat the plaseebo out of gazeebo-
anything he spit's "gay produced" like sperm donars in speedos'.
i earned a battle but the site failed to deliver their best-
yeah i'll sleep on GAZEEBO, he only reps a place to relax and rest.
i'll hit you in the dick with punches and spit till it splits to a wet clit-
cause your verse is like your avatar that script and the writters a bitch........
do i need to switch? .........
nah im carnivore eating through your bone marrow-leaving it hallowed-
2-2 means you spit 2 ill rhymes barrowed-
from what you contracted the 2 times you swollowed-
wrote a throw away rhyme, tossed it and told you to fallow.
if you have to ask_ that metaphor for your trash.....

sorry the other needs to be eraced it printed bad not how it was intended sorry bout that.............................................. .....................................

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yo gazeebos was pretty tight, sorry word i just wasnt feelin urs. if i could vote i would vote gazeebo.

peace

yo uppin1 this bitch^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

vote on this shit^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

wack setup by word perefect and his sentences were to long and stretched out with no point to em but it was aite punches but for the posts he has he needs to elevate
gazeebo your flow was better and nicer worded i liked it no doubt so you get my vote on this one

vote on my battle on sig really need one on vrs 1liner

ok lets narrow this shit down Easy eh....????
Punches=Slighty hardly But gazebo had a few
Personals=only a couple...gazebo
Complex=Gazeebo Words was to stretched.....
Structre=Gazeebo Liked it very simple
overall Gazeebo

Vote on my battels also plz there being slept on NO HATE VOTES!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98186
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97328

What ups GaZeebo had
the flow, punches, meta's
and structure was nice.

Good battle to both
>>>>> PEACE to Ya'll >>>>>

who ever said my bars were stretched and off beat with no point hasnt read my verse 3-0 you gazeebo........................................... ...

this one goes to word fa sho in my eyes....i loved the first line...beat the placeebo out of gazeebo...tight...nice shit from gazeebo too but i was feelin word on this one...respect...holla back on my battle too v.s. optical illusion...peace

Gotta give this to Gazeebo, he hit with the harder personels and punches and his structure was tighter. His lines were a bit streched from time to time but he also had wordplay and complexity which word lacked. Battle goes to Gazeebo, you've elevated a lot man, keep it up.

hey meters thanks for that last comment. hopefully we could abttle again sometime. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

gazibo did it up sry cant vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

yo uppin this bitch again ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

upin for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

yo gazeebos verse flowed better i felt u kinda lost it a little towards the end Word~, but u had a good opener.
Overall Vote goes to Gazeebo wit better structure and floetry

word perfect shit was almost better.............but gazeebo....a little better..........vote gazeebo




















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uppin for the last vote^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

uppin for the last vote********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ********

gazeebo got this one, bette structur and it made more sense and had reason, someone get him the final vote.............................................. .................................................. .......

got gazeebo even tho that shit was hot from both.............................................. ....................................

i believe he beat me and im of honor so i to end this quicker i vote him as voctor............................................ .................................................. .........................

yea but i still need another poll vote^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

GaZeeBo Is DQ'ed For Uppin 10 Times... Read The Rules... Thank You.
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