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ben hated \/ handcuffs
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no bull shit votes (no hate, crew, d/r) spit by tomorrow at 9 pm. i'll probably spit tonight, but whatever. |
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you've been hated(ben hated), and discriminated,/
but i bet you've never been terminated, then incarceraded/ that's what happens when you talk gangster before you battle me/ when the only time you've been sent to jail is in the board game monopoly/ battlin' me? urine(you're in) over your head/ you get pissed on more than a 2 year olds bed/ my rhymes cause a very big hole as i spit them at your chest/ take out your lungs and throw them at ya, so you can catch your breath/ i can tell you've never got pussy, by all the porn you got/ when you ben-hated, you'll almost always get shot/ ~peace~ |
upping for ben hated to post, you have until 9:00 beotch!
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ayo i'm here homey!!! yea i'm late but lemme post quick
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yo handcuffs got sick verbals but don't get it
twisted like weed )( cause what i mean is he spittin sick like he flossin with anal beads)( you beatin me wait lets check ya weak stats)( i'll leave you flat on a mat folded like an ignored nordic track)( i got you shook from verbal abuse similar to how you git rape)( plus my punches SLOW you down like a TEXAS MIXTAPE)( call ya self HANDCUFFS but do you really keep the mic lock)( cause the way you hold it to ya mouth i assume you like cock)( ya text sucks, you write what kids don't like)( while my PUNCHES eye opening like Klitchko fights)( homeslice |
finally, lets get some votes
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vote - Handcuffs
felt that his wordplay was more visible and the play off the name was aiiiight, not worded-well put it was aiiight nevertheless...his punchlines were better than ben hated and his structure was aswell... cannabarz vs light-out vote on this ^ |
ahhh ok well my structure is a lil fucked up
but it'll get betta!! $$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ |
iight uppin for some good votes$$$$$$$$$
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I feel handcuffs on this one_______________________________________________ _________________________________________--
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^^^dam what that rule said bout one line votes,besides what do
you feel? kid can't break down a verse ha! yep $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$ |
helll yeah
hand cuffs merked ben hated's ass 2 bad ben hated losses my vote |
yo dogg don't hate in my battle$$$$$be real with ya shit if not
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hand came more consistant
and had better punches and wordplay vote = hand .................................................. .............................................. |
i gotta agree handcuff's took this one...the punches were jus harder hittin and it was set out better...but it wasnt the best battle ive seen...both could use some work....aint gonna bother with a breakdown.....dont thikn its needed...vote=handcuffs
...pZ..... |
dam this nucca beatin me with played punches lmao!!!!dam
it's good good, i can take an unnecessary loss on my first battle, lmao! hahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah lmao!!!! |
For your first battle you came out alright. You've got the same problem as me, ya just start flow'n but forget to start punch'n.
I'ma go with Hands oin this cuz he punched flowed AND connect on his swings. But yo, Hated, keep ya head up and elevate to get those punched to hit (I'ma take my own advice too) Vote = Handcuffs. |
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flowHandcuffs punches-hated multies-hated metas-Handcuffs finalvote Handcuffs please repay the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=98529 |
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hella real than tha others, thanks for the advice |
Are kids really that sick an dien these days??? Cats can't real between the lines???... i'm mean seriously...
do yall not know how to grade a verse or somthing??? who teaches you dumb fucks???.... ben hated had more punches more an better wordplay...meta's FLOW... damn... don't get me wrong handcuff... ya shyt was coo too.. this is why nigga's dien an shyt... dickriders .... kids is sick BH won this battle kids... Caesar On3 |
^^^^^^ *laughing histerically*
shut the hell up beotch!! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> ?>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>???????////// |
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c'mon people only one more vote
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1 more fucken vote people
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good battle but handcuffs hit harder he had a better rhyme sheme and a little more creative wordplay and punches was feelin his more good battle though for a quick key from B.
Vote HC |
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