.Deva.[V].Malcolm X.
 

Ha ..

10 lines
House rules
Due: 30 mins

:gfy:

lets do this...check ~1~........................
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Wow Ya Joined In December 2003, No Wins And 12 Posts
Are Ya Scared To Battle? Or Have You Lost Ya Fuckin Ghost? (writer)
You Must Be Half Asleep, Way Too Slow On Ya Feet
Just Call Me The Jap’ And This ‘The Pearl Harbour Defeat’….
No I Don’t Mean To Boast, Cos I Aint Won To Many
But This ‘X’ Couldn’t Win With A Double-Sided Penny
Herbs Like You Fuck’n The Site n Leave 1 Line Replies
So I Got 1 For You, “Ya Write Like A Retard With No Eyes”
Seen Some Names Before, But Yours Is Just ‘played’ Stupid
Ya Couldn’t Write With Meaning With An Arrow From Cupid
1 last thing to say that’s the real Malcolm X was respected
Your detested and word for word ya verse jus got molested

Dev will elope so not much longer do i gotta cope with this fag
Ya equipment sealed? & yeh, bitch told me he has tha dope in'a bag!
Kill him besides paintings .. leave him dead before creations
& women love you? GOOD! .. i'm in favor of lesbian relations!*
Public hates you .. never had it, or even sounded this good
& punishment for beatin round tha bush gets you pounded in wood!**
Not wrestling pac but you still got caught onto tha x-factor
Daze & leave you tryna catch tha stars .. like a fuckin press actor!
In this battle yuh get tossed .. believe, tha nazi's near you
& "lets do this" is not a typical response,
publicity is a no no .. when tha paparatzi fears you!***

* - Check his custom title .. "Women Love Me"
** - beatin round tha bush/pounded in wood .. trees/wood
*** - Sig says "i don't need publicity" .. he checked into tha thread with "lets do this"

VOTES! .. if you don't understand anythin, DON'T VOTE!!

Uppin for votes .. don't sleep

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pretty good batte i think deva took this..

Flow: Tie
Personals: Tie
Punches: Deva
Creativity: Tie
Opener: Deva
Finisher: Deva

Good battle but i think deva took this props to both of you pz

Blah @ you .. god, FL doesn't know shit ..

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Break down

DEVA - I liked your stlye easy to read good vocab and orginal shit like it was so fucking easy to follow props to yah

X- lots of force multies and child vocab but i like the line about actors and the tupca on

But overall DEVA just open a can right here. Props to yah hopefully i can battle you later for fun..

MY VOTE DEVA PLEZ BOTH OF U HIT ME UP HERE http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98427

PLEZ VOTE THIER TO GET IT OVER PEACE

Blindness . uppin ..

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there we no multis - how wack are you voters.

Punches: Malcolm
Flow: Doesnt Matter
Enjoyment: Malcolm ..

I cant vote but malcolm obviously took this .. prolly voting deva cus he can vote.

Ha .. somebody with one post knows what tha fuck's up ..

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dev won this battle
x ...umm go back to sleep and think of some new shit
she got you on this one sorry

My vote goers to Deva.

This battle was better than most on here. The open about the Ghost writer was dope, and the personals were on point.

MalcomX dude came hard, but just not enuff. I liked his shit, but he didn't really connect on anything, but the wordplay was there, flow was aight.

Over all

Deva is my vote.

Aight Breakdown---
Punches-X..Deva had some played..Eg..The ghost one
Flow-Both
Structure-Both
Enjoyment-Both
Sustainment-Tie
Origanality-X..but you dont need to exoplain everythin..
Complexity-Tie
Vocab-Deva..Experience of Topicals etc
Metas-X..not bad..liked the finisher
Overall-X
dint contain too many hot punches but X did take this due to harder Punches n Origanality pz

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98704

Thanks B ..
UPPIN !

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what the fuck are niggas stupid, x won that shit. deva is garbage and if diva or deva whatever you wanna call yourself holla at the kid!!!!! NUKKA

:gfy:

?? .. thanks ..
Blah .. 1-2 Deva ..

float

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^`in ..

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This Is A Clear Signal Why The Sites Goin Down Just Cuz U Can Vote Doesnt Mean U Get The Win...

Punches-X
Flow-Tie
Wordplay-Deva
Overall-X

Yeah The Newb Took Dis 1 Both Need To Hit The Lab No Doubt...

ha .. true .. 2-2 .. uppin __ 4 !

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this one was deva all the way, good rhymes and entertaining...................................... .................................................. ................

^werd man i agree this is fucked up x took this his punches were batter and aslso personal(need more tho man),
also flow was close but x took it.
enjoyment= x to.

deva took worplay but man you need to hit harder ive seen you come alot better,

put an honest vote on this as i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6958#post986958 ..thx.....pz

^`in ..

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6958#post986958 cmon man just some feedback will do................................................ ..............................pz

Blah .. uppin ! ..

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Goddamn it doesn't get more obvious than this. Malcom slaughtered him in comparison with the punches. No explanation really need

Vote-Malcom X

uppin ..

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get this over with ..

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Blah .. i'm uppin more than 5 times cus ya'll sleep too much

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Honestly this battle was weak
I See alot of D/R's

Malcom X....
I wasn't feelin ya verse
Ya need more vocabulary, flow, and multies
Ya punches came sorta weak, Need elevation a lil
And tha IM'n me for a vote thing.... -'s points

Deva
You also need to work on flow, vocab, and multies
Ya punches were ok, Also need a lil elevation
But overall ya verse was a lil edged over Malcoms
But next time, dont use explinations by ya lines
It doesn't help none

Vote-Deva

She simply had a lil more creativity

Deva took it simply with complexity. The majority of Malcolm's verse was pretty played in my opinion. With that being said, Deva's punches also landed better in my opinion and he/she certainly won for personals. So this is a pretty obvious choice in my opinion. Win goes to Deva. Vote on this battle being slept on if you have the time, either of you.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=Thrust

Flow: Tie
Personals: Tie
Punches: Deva
Creativity: Tie
Opener: Deva
Finisher: Deva

Vote:DEVA.... can u return a honest vote in tha battle below

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straight up b.i.detained and roger moore are high on weed. 1st of all b.i detained looks pretty respectable so mayb he knows what hes talkin about but roger moore should hang himself. he dont know his ass from his elbow in the rap world. deva destroyed malcome x.

vote=deva

deva do ma a fav and return the

favorhttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=987492#post987492

i gotta gvie it to x .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............................................

Ok this was one sided battle.

Breakdown.

Punches-X
Personals-D
Meta's-X
Multi's-X
Wordplay-X
Flow-X
Creativity-X
Overall-X
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Malcom X DQ'ed For Uppin This Battle 14 Times. Read The Rules.
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