lilbreeze v baby boi 11
 

10 lines min
chekin
no feedin
no dickridin
no crew votes
20 min freestyle after checkin

ill go 1st

checkin in up in this bitch............................................. .................................................. .....................

my fought im in................................................ .
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baby boi, u registered to rb yesterday and already u think you can take me/
guess what u got no chance to shake me/
you best just lay down so i can shit on ya/
cuz im bustin out more speed then mario andretti in daytona/
look i got this bitch on his kneez,sayin lil breeze pleeze/
this baby bitch dont want me to give this trigger a big squeeze/
boi u on muh nerves worse then amebeas to fleas/
watch what ya say, cuz muh gat will turn ya to swiss cheese/
check this out this is ya 1st fuckin battle/
im chillen and ya shook like a babies rattle/
please is that why they call u baby boi/
cuz ur tiny and innocent, and easy to destroy/
im rackin in the cash and ur unemployed/
and all u bitch ass newbies are gettin me annoyed/
now imma put ya ass 6-feet deep/
and im makin sure ya go to perminent sleep/
so when u see this baby boi ya gonna drool, so put on ya bib/
come back and battle me when u get a big boy bed and stop sleepin in a crib/

im typin now............................................... .
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iight hurry up though............................................ .................................................. ..................................

Observe me "breeze" pass u nigga, go ahead and take a seat/
Lighting a barbecue is the only way you can try and fuel this beef/
Like an anchor, ur verse proves u just hit rock bottom/
My feet u follow, filled with hollows, tell me nigga whats the problem/
i may be a rookie, but u just beat by this newbie/
i gotcha "burpin" my back, and in ya face i spit this loogie/
Influenzic lyrics to yo dome, the diagnosis turned ya blue/
And ya punches are like acne cuz there ain't no one to show em to/
That shit was weak, and u knew it before u even started/
Send regards to ya peoples, rest in pieces dear departed/
Be deceased as i release ya dead soul with kinesis/
u different species, whats the thesis, ur beseeched by this "fetus"/
20 minutes this verse a classic, with those rhymes u shoulda fasted/
Collectin' wins like i cashed it, now wipe my ass and watch my rashes/

ummmm.......ok good verse i guess................ uppin for votes in this bicth............................................. .................................................. ................

also baby boi ur in atleast 7 battles which is against league rules but ill let ya slide on this one

i give it to baby boy but was close .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................................

yo even though baby boy is in 7 battles and its agasints the rules....breeze still killed him for better punches and the swiss chesse line and a better opening

my vote-lilbreeze

whyte assasin....... what the fuk u been smokin lately.........................................we uppin for mo votes

upin some more.............................................. .................................................. ...........

lil breeze i feel you in this shit but it was close
____________________________________ and all those battles if u picked me in do a favor once u get 100 posts man go vote
----------------this aint a dick ryd either i feel lil breeze no hate baby boi u threw down alrgiht

ight imma get there soon.............................................. .................................................. .....................

1-0 lets get some more votes up in this...................
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in 2 of the battles the dude didn't even show up. didn't it was against the rules my fought hopefully yall keep votin.

and now he shows up......................................
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anyway if we don't get more voterz i wanna say good battle lil breeze............................................ ...............................................

flow-baby boy
structure-baby boy
humor-tie
opener-lil breeze
closer-tie
rhyme-tie
punches-tie
personals-lil' breeze
entertainment-baby boy

baby boy takes this one
close battle! good job to both of you

thanx 4 the vote man..............................................
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lets get this poll closed help us out i'll try to return the favor..........
............................................need some votez..........................

can yall help me out with these poll votes. i wasn't aware of the rule about 3 battles at a time. I thought it was 3 battles a day or something so pleez help me out with this situation and i'll try to repay yall

i say lil breeze dis battle i was feelin im from the start,baby boi u had some good shit in there,u punches and personals weere tight but i felt lil breeze more sorry dawg

vote=lil breeze

get those 6 posts and get voting man ill check out ur battles see if u got something else worthy of a vote.............................................. ........................

^ try and get them posts in so u can go check out some of my battles see if they good engouh for ur vote.....ace king vs. blend and hound vs blend

k both had an aight verse

but i think breeze came out on top wit harder punches and disses.

vote breeze.

pz

lil breeze, you got this one, but its a close battle, good prize. __________________
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punches: i gotta go with lil breeze

he came more consistant with punches
flow from both was good
creativity eh... coulda been better
and both had good wordplay


vote=lil breeze

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uppin one last time for the final vote.............................................. .................................................. ...................

I think Breeze took this...

Here's why...

He came real simple, limited wordplay and vocab.

So-so flow.

But he hit with almost every line.

Baby clearly had a better format, better flow.

And clearly better wordplay.

But I thought his punches were mostly shit because he also ripped himself in the process.

Asking his opponent to burp him?

Asking his opponent to change him and be careful over his diaper rash?

WTF?

I know ya role played ya name, but I think that was whack.

And it hurt ya punches.

At least to me it did.

Peace

LilBreeze