MindKilla .:VS:. 007
 

aiight 10 mins
i get 11, to prevent you no showin
10 lines
aiight waitin on your check in...........

im here lets get it poppin u first
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aiiyo.......................................... read the rules............................................. ..... 10 minutes, if you aint up to it, i'll battle sum 1 else

thats cool
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so you spittin or not............................................... ...............................................
or shud i battle sum 1 else

yeah im spittin wait a second i cant type dat fast
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aiight i just asked a mod to close it........i edit it out my post....................................spittin in a minute..............

I'll murder you then bury you on ya front lawn/
don't think you gone get out this situation copying someone elses name like James Bond/

my guns make an applause when they start clappin/
you said you can rap so i give you a grammy fa actin/

i'll smack you then jack you/
cuz i keep two nines at all times just like warren sapp do/

im shynin like the neckless dat Baby flosses/
i see you got 14 wins but you got the same # beside ya loss/

so you should leave unless you want to get roasted/
the only way you is gone lose quicker is the faster you get your rap and post it/

peace out cuzzin

this peep been blessed, because it like rappin to a reverand,
leave peeps stressed, you lifes like money, im out to spend,

spit lyrics of mindless violence, make your body rest in silence,
leave ya with closed eyelids, cause more deaths than science,

punches a-plenty, you's gettin hit more than google.com
mynd killa be a loner, i bet his right forearms way strong,

i dont spit ill, i spit disease, that leaves your life decreased,
an my wins increase, i catz ya so hard, they faces creased,

you should lament this unthoughtfull act, accepting this loss,
it went wrong at bitch slapped, kill you like im the halocaust.

up for votes
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yoo this battle was prolly the best i have ever seen. mindkilla u spit sum ill shit. but i think double o seven came away wit it at the end.

vote=double-o-seven


double return the favor with an honest vote


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98419

dats cool we still up 4 votes
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007 man im feelin u on this 1 but the rookie gave u a mtach
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aiight first time uppin............................................. .................................................. ...........................

up for votes
i need to battle some more cats so let the voting begin
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fuck y'all stop not votin............................................. ...................................i aint had my last four battles closed............................................

^^^i have, i meant not by votes, just expiring^^^....................................... .................

3rd time uppin.................................................. .................................................. ................

3rd time uppin.................................................. .................................................. ................

okie batttle
Structure and flow 007
Metas and multies 007
Punches and personls 007

okie battle but mind killa needs to elavate...good try but not as hard...Vote 007

both styles compared well
except for finished punches
Breakdown--
Punches-007
Flow-Same
Structure-007..little tidier
Sustainment-007
Complexity/Wordplay-007
Enjoyment-Both
Metas-007
overall-007

Was an easy merking overall but Mind is
finding his feet....

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ..SEEN AS THO I HIT THIS PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98437

OO7 took this wit no problem better strucure punchs and word play nice job

vote = 007

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98793

4 th tme uppin................... last time i upped it posted two................ check the times if you dont believe.........................................up

i think 007 won this because of better personals punches and multies.....

my vote-007

hit up the battle im in with cannabarz.....HOTT ASS SHIT.........

007 won it with multies. Other guy, advice, u have sum ill ass punches but ur problem is that u need 2 learn how 2 write rhymes. Try adding more multities becuz then ur punches will be more effective. U got some really good ones in der that kinda go un noticed like the warren sapp line with 99, elevate on that. Good battle both of u's.

Vote- 007