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italy vs Mental Flowz
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you first no bitch votes |
when yall gone spit
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u seen dis pistol? dat's y yo head's ghost
u done ran yo grizzle, now yo life's toast popped 36 missiles, from yo head 2 yo toes screamed, "italy mothafucka", so everybody knows now yo bitch is cryin n a pile of mental flowz uppin |
u garbage italy i would rip you in half herb!
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fuck u bitch, bring it................................................ .................................................. ..........................
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dis is a no-show.............................................. .................................................. ................
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aiight bitch u askin 4 a death sentence ill set up.....................
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lmao.....
yo if this is a no show get it closed freeposting bitches.... lmao should i be talking???? well vote on my battel, kautious vs exp |
lol this is no no show ill spit in a little bit
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Aight
Give your neck a bend, fists like AIM convoes, direct connect and then send// Dont pretend, im the administrator for your organs and your life reached The End// Punching Italys lights out like bad electricians on basement circuts// Your eyes shut, tight like spandex that squeeze tightly on Fat Joes butt// Get off this site like terrorists on the net, this kids vet?// Thats like Eminem watching B.E.T. to earn money just to pay off a bet// You dont read me like blind kids looking at books// This kids shook, put his organs in a school recipe just so he could "reed cook"// (a school) This nigga stick to gay guys like hes wearing their shirts// You flirt. with death, my punches send you to Dallas with Dirk// |
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flow-italy structure-tie(both shit), wordplay-blah punches-mental personals-tie opener-tie closer-mental overall-mental(work on personals and structure..........................)............ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...233#post1008233 ..........pz |
italy didnt even meet the required limit, and his verse was totally whack, punches were weak. votin mental here. no need 2 break dis down.
vote- mental flowz |
flow-mental
structure-tie wordplay-mental punches-mental personals-tie opener-tie closer-mental overall-mental (i cant vote on this 1) |
aight man just poll when you reach 100 please up
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opener-tie
flow-italy structure-tie punches-mental personals-tie closer-mental Overall- Mental Wack! |
YO mental please vote on my battles:
TRUE*D VS JAKRIPHERBS TRUE*D VS XL4REAL TRUE*D VS SKITTEN THANKS |
AYT I VOTED AND IV ALREADY EXPLAINED WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Struc-ment
punch-ment wordpl-ment meta-ment sust-ment Do I have to continue? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100579 Vote if you got 100 posts. |
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uppin for votes 4
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up for votes 5
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flow-italy
structure-tie(both shit), wordplay-blah punches-mental personals-tie opener-tie closer-mental overall-mental |
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