BombZ vs. Ntbrave1tN
 

10-15 Lines
No D/R votes
No crew votes
No feedin' off lines
No pre-written shit, etc..

Yea Check Check ........Newtestament"""
Feel it .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........................

yo, who is gonna go first?
dont matta to me..
hurry up nigga............................................. ....................................

yo if dis fool dont show, i take his spot 2 battle u, bombz. aight, kool.............................................. ....................

you can take his spot right now, he's frotin dawg. if you want to battle, just set it up cuz..........

letz go its set up just check in aight dawg.............................................. ..........................

This Kids -Weak- Like A Baby ''Punch'';
In the -street- less the the Brady ''Bunch''\
Just -face It-,He's-wasted- or crazy ''Dumb'';
-AmaZing-Not from the ^matrix But I am The''One''\\
Gods Second ''Son'' the net prophit Arise like the ''Sun'';
Quick To the ''pun''Quick with Da''gun''--Blast-off And''Run''\\\
A *D.C*''thug''Only having''Fun'' Till my -Chapters- ''Done'';
After ''Funds''Paper chaseing Till the day my -Casket-''Comes''\\\\
I Don't -AsK- for Much Just Some |votes| to |roast| This ''Chump'';
So Its Time to say *Good Night* Hope Your Mom tucked your ''bed tight''........................................... ..............
Cus Right now Your Takeing ~Hits~Like a Paris Hilton ''Web sight''
NeVer Been In A ''lead Fight'' You dont -Tuck The Jake-;
Your Ride My 'Rymes''The way you just -Cut and Paste-\\\\\
So Ppl, Is that enough To get a F()c&ing Vote..........

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You probably neva met me before, but Ima make you remember me,
ima hit you so hard that ya' computor will loose memory..

That shit you wrote up there looks like you took your time and mastered it, But you still wont beat me if you fell asleep and imagined it....

Like a dream catcher, I captured it, and added it to my `merked` carrage, realizing that your rap-game is as fucked up as Kobe Bryant and his marrage...

Fuqin' wit niggahs who you cant stand up to is a bad habit,
Honestly, you wouldn't go home with this win if you plotted to kidnap it....

Pussy ass niggah, he's from "Washion D.C", soft like "Recees", bout to be tossed and released from this site, seriously, you don't desearve to be seen,
your rank aint higher or below, bout to be squeeze from between, I couldn't call you a niggah, wouldn't even be placed as a queen', cuz "nt" be type of niggah who'd get cut from a girls team....

uppin for votes, lets do this dawg.............................................. .................................................. ........................................

Big Shit right Here ------------------Holla at your boy Newtestament productions,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Yo Vote for this One'''''Its the reals
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damn herbs..work on your structure and i'll vote....fuck all the "----&*(^%&** type of bullshit...fuck a stretched bar..sorry for freepost....

wass wrong wit a girls team?? lol jplayin took that one to

heart..this was a decent battle yall both had some good punches,

but that was all i really found although bombz was really

simple..yall both could up. but i cant

say but so much when i aint got shit to prove myself sorry icant

poll vote but goodluck guys...i call NtBrave1tN ..gone..

IP: E2E6 2BC2


uppin for votes, lets do this dawg.............................................. .................................................. ........................................

opener: bombz
closer: tie
punches: Tie
structure: brave
vocab: bombz
wordplay: Tie
overall: bombz

aiight, nice battle peeps,
bombz only took this because he had nicer wordplay, adn his opener was a lil better.
bombz fix ya structure.
brave, take all the '', //. - -, and you dont have to censor yourself.
e.g fu()k,
just write fuck!!!


PLZ TAKE YOUR TIME TO DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS BATTLE, AS I HAVE TAKEN MY TIME TO HIT YOURS UP. THANK U
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9440#post989440
aiight
peace

Damn Cuz One Vote calls It My man Double-0-seven.............
Nothing but respect fo judgement.................THe opener was HOt But...........So Its Time to say *Good Night* Hope Your Mom tucked your ''bed tight''
Cus Right now Your Takeing ~Hits~Like a Paris Hilton ''Web sight''

i would say bombz got this 1................................................. .................................................. ...........

^^^ thats a fucked up vote..


well it was a close battle, not a good battle, a close battle... first dude, cant write ur name and shit cuz its all complicated, had some good shit in his, wasnt half bad... bombz kinda... bombed, structure was fuckin everything, but good, had an ok line or two, both was real simple, stretched bars need to be fixed and shit....
breakdown:

the brave dude got every catagory but it wasnt all lopsided, both of yall didnt do horrible and shit

Vote:brave

if yall can hit up the battles in my sig it would be greatly appreciated... and hit it up wit an honest vote since i hit yours up wit one

nether had structure
both had punches that seemed redundent
B wrote more talk then spit
vote - brave
his verse was funnier and had better rhyme scheme

COME ON LETS UPPIN FOR SOME MOTHA FUQIN VOTES DAWG, DON'T SLEEP ON THIS, LETS END THIS PEOPLE!!

i'LL RETURN THA FAVA

up up up for some fuckin votes its tied break dat stuff please............................................ .................................

my vote on this one is bombz, but it was a close battle, both good,
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Uppin for some votes Help out with the tie ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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opener bombs
closer bombs
punches tie
personals tie
wordplay tie
vocab brave
structure brave
overall bombs

hit this up honestly please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99109

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One sided as fuck....

Punches: Bombz
Flow: Bombz
Creativty: Bombz
Vocab: Bombz
Enjoyment: Bombz

Overall: Bombz

Bombz got this shi', no question 'bout it...

man, all these votes and i only got 2, wtf, people please don't forget to POLL VOTE! come on, don't sleep on this, uppin for some votes

yo that was sick______________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _____________________

bombs took this hands down in every aspect____________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ______________________________________
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UPPIN' FOR SOME MOTHA FUQIN' VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! don't sleep on this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

opener: bombz
closer: tie
punches: Tie
structure: brave
vocab: bombz
wordplay: Tie


a think bombz mite have forgot to press enter to go down to the next line methinks.....

thats it basically.....

vote - Bombz

opener: bombz
closer: tie
punches: Slightly Bombz
structure: Both sucked..
vocab: bombz
wordplay: Ntbrave1tN
overall: bombz

Vote- Bombs

don't use -'":;-~ or any other wack shit like that EVER. lol.

Shorten your bars.

opener: bombz
closer: tie
punches: bombz
structure: neither...like token said
vocab: bombz
wordplay: Tie
overall: bombz

both fix structures please.....NT...elevate**alot**

vote- bombz