dizzy hommel vs mc aines
 

aup aines cum check in!

sup dizzy.

checkin in. you no da rules so hit me up wit ya shit.

rules:10-15 lines max
no crew votes
you spit first as you called me out

i will holla bak wen uve dropped yo shit

sup ainse wats goin down is it ur mums trousers like last nyt?
R.kelly went 2a rap batte and sat in row A , so d olsen twins had 2 move bak 2 L.A!

aight dawg.

dat shit ^^^ was a little small.

im gonna give u a second chance i will spit first dis time.

yo dawg

beef dis.

Dizzy hommel born september 23rd,its a date we've never heard.//whats this shit about R Kelly?yo ass is as fake as dat bitch jordan off the telly.//i no your lyrics are whack, your better off takin that old shit back.//You no im merkin yo ass, im givin tickets 4 my concert it includes a backstage pass.//my concerts fly,fly as a kite you need 2 learn how 2 put up a fight.//why you sendin me pm's sayin you got sum shit?ive already smelt it comin from ya mums clit.//Dizzy you cant rap it takes 2 much concentration, mc aines spittin like lyrical masturbation.//Dizzys just been ripped like anal penetration, homey start spittin b4 i lose my fuckin patience.//just checked this dudes profile he has no location,a best put a coffin as ur new destination.

Explanation:
take ur old shit back:his little verse he first posted was shit.

dis shit is uppin 4 votes

Dizzy ive dropped ma verse im givin u a second chance so holla at me with woteva ya got.

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mc aines gets this battle
shit had sum gud punches and flow was aight
sum lines were weak
a gud finisher

favourite line:
why you sendin me pm's sayin you got sum shit?ive already smelt it comin from ya mums clit.//

a dope bar fo' sure

dizzy hommel, just...next time, actually put a verse and not just a few lines.....

stay up playa's..............................peace

fuk dis shit dawgs im tird of waitin 4 dis bitch dizzy he is clearly no showin.

hit this thing up wit votes

holla

Look you little bitch you say my rap is Wack, boy please i hav been doing this shit since michael Jackson was Black//Mc aines oh what a great name can't you tell im being Sarcastic ino it aint your fault you are a Spastic//icant believe your family all interbreed my family aint dat close we just Smoke weed//i dont no if you heard my dad drug deals which paid for my new set of wheels// like I sed be for i aint sad Like you getting my lines from WWE wrestling i grew out of that i thougt you had to//Do you honestly think you are John Cena sayin "you can't see me" now people no were your Lyrics are from,you gona be Jeff Hardy on Smackdown and do his finisher a Swentom Bomb?//Wats this you say write up some threads, you look like a puff with your hair in dreads//who do you think you are the Legend Bob Marley hey sack that off ,Big up the USA Army//

close battle between the two but MC Aines got this battle.

Wordplay:almost a tie but Aines killed about the last 6 bars or so.
Entertainment:tie
Creativity: Aines
Punches: dizzy
Overall: Aines
hit this battle up if yall could
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98520

cum on people this shit needs uppin Mc aines cant beat ME He's pathetic and watches WWE. Iappreciate you gettin help off your 2 homeboys Baby boi 11 and fiori!

ayo dawgs.

dizzy yo ass is trippin i aint gettin no help,just cos they liked maa shit and not urs.

anyway dis shit is uppin 4 votes

uppin this shit 4 votes.drop an honest vote and drop a link and i will peek yo shit
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holla

aines gets this battle easily...no breakdown needed...merked
Good verse...hit my BATTLE UP WIT GAZANOVA n I'll battle ya soon AINES

here's the link

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97450

Hit it up cos i wanna merk Aines

Look dawgs out dere dis stuff needs upin. imean cmon my hits r beta dan his Respect d last line. who do you think you are the Legend Bob Marley hey sack that off ,Big up the USA Army//

Uppin this shit 4 votes.

dizzy ur last line was wack.

ppeep dis shit drop an honest vote and drop a link 2 ur battle and i wil drop an honest vote

peace

Yeah, Dizzy Had More Punches In This But Aines Had Harder Hitting And Better Connecting Hits, He Also Had The Wordplay Towards The End Of His Verse, But You Both Need To Fix Your Structures, Paragraph Style Is Hard To Catch

Opener - Dizzy
Closer - Aines
Punches - Dizzy
Personals - Aines
Flow - Aines

Vote - Aines

Sorry I Cannot Poll Vote, But At Least I Gave An Honest Opinion Could Yall Check This Honestly?
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up dis shit were gettin bored of waitin. b honest wiv ur votes and drop us a link ill have a look at ur battle and give my opinion!

ok I vote MCains Fries because.

1. dizzy had no structure in his verse
2. It was not funny
3. He makes fun of WWE, then he goes off say'n all this shit about wrestling like he watches it all day.


THINK BEFORE YOU DROP A VERSE. Don't Rap unless you have SOME SORT of SKILL


Vote = McAines


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On my screen it say's the Poll is closed. Sorry Mc aines
...........................................I'm a 100+ user and I vote MC Aines...................

bitch ass Aines im waitin for ur verse in our battle still from YESTERDAY......................................... ...........................
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u scary ass hurry up and post a whacc verse like u did in here
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