Tökën (Executives) Vs. Born To Kill (Murderous Methods) (300 posts to vote)
 

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hey before yall battle can you all vote on
hotrod vs mcnookie
hotrod vs matt dillion

then i will rip which every one of you who wants it

thanks

^ Dq'd..

Anyways..

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*We battled a couple weeks ago, I won


Tha lead Exec is here ta suck my dick and taste my game...
But, Toke you've been there before so it should taste the same.*
Ya soft and fake, couldn't rap tha truth if I notarized ya tongue...
So I'll drown ya in molten metal, so can come hard with iron lungs.
That'd be an improvement, cuz ya skills are shot after being beat...
Kid, you could make a deal with tha devil, and still not spit heat.
You and ya crew, tensed senses that can never unwind...
Gimped too, a perfect example of tha blind leading tha blind.
Twice beaten by Born, so ya ego's gotten up and taken flight...
Shamed in front of ya peeps, like Saddam givin up without a fight.

S-Killed =De- Supermodded (Bruk's a super mod)
His Occupation says Headhunter in his profile

Half Assed but here goes..

You'd think you starred on MTV the way your diss-missed
I enscript hits poisen your liquor and you still dont spit sick hits
You're simply not s-killed.. Like Bruklor being de-modded
I threw away your wack concepts but you just saved and caught it
You changed your name to Visa.. Just to get a little credit
After this Win I'll have you takin anti-ginko just to forget it
Your verse couldn't be striking if your lines said thunder
You didn't beat me kid.. Your occupation did.. It says Head Hunter
..Are you gettin the point now
Or shall I explain it farther..
..You've been sonned so many times
There's not even room for Darth Vader to claim father..

S-Killed =De- Supermodded (Bruk's a super mod)
His Occupation says Headhunter in his profile

Half Assed but here goes..

You'd think you starred on MTV the way your diss-missed
I enscript hits poisen your liquor and you still dont spit sick hits
You're simply not s-killed.. Like Bruklor being de-modded
I threw away your wack concepts but you just saved and caught it
You changed your name to Visa.. Just to get a little credit
After this Win I'll have you takin anti-ginko just to forget it
Your verse couldn't be striking if your lines said thunder
You didn't beat me kid.. Your occupation did.. It says Head Hunter
..Are you gettin the point now
Or shall I explain it farther..
..You've been sonned so many times
There's not even room for Darth Vader to claim father..

I assume that's you with an alias, Token...

Ok...

Verses dropped...

Let's get some votes in here, peeps.

Much appreciated.

Peace

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Yeah I get a bad memory sometimes..
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uppin 1.....

wow close battle here i really enjoyed both....And believe me this is hard as hell to vote on....Both opened with similar style hits in the begining and they both were dope... I think what it came down to is which i liked better....B2K took the nasty sucky dick kinda stuff which is cool but sick as hell....token came just plain hard and level headed....Im givin this to token overall was better...but wow great battle i must say...

= token

opener toke
closer born
punches toke
personals born
wordplay toke
vocab toke
overal toke

good battle yall fo sho

Thank you

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^^isn't Emerge about to join ur crew??

ummm...no hate Token....but some of ur lines were weak in this battle duke.....i've seen better from u.....Born had harder punches in my opinion....and more direct hits.....Token had some decent metas....but Born got this in my opinion with just having harder more direct hits...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Token
Metas - Tie (Tokens Had More...But They Were Old...i.e. Visa line)
Wordplay - Tie (same as above)
RhymeScheme - Born
Personals - Tie (u both had some personals)
Punches - Born (his hit harder)
Vocab - Token
Flow - Born
Structure - Born
Creativity - Tie
Complexity - Token
Overall - a close battle indeed....but like i said in the begining....i've actually seen much better from u both....but Born gets this just with having simply harder more direct punches....good read from u both though....no hate...just a vote...

Vote - Born To Kill

peace
4:20

Hmm.
I hardly remember 2 metas in his verse.
And NO Emerge is not joining my crew at the moment.

uppin 3....................

im feelin token in this battle overall
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Opening: Hmm Close right here but ima give it to BTK
Punches: Token
Personals: Tie
Flow: BTK
Wordplay: Token
Closing: Close but Token for the originality

Good battle

thanks uppin 4................................................. .................................................. ......

breakdown,

flow-b2k
punches-tie
structure-b2k
personals-tie
creativity-token
overall-b2k

just! real close but i think b2k got this 4 an all over beta verse!

Breakdown:

Punches: Token
Flow: B2K
Creativity: Token
Vocab: Token
Enjoyment: Token
Opener: Token
Closer: Token
Personals: B2K

Really close shi', dawgz...fo real, I enjoyed this shi' alot....fuckin' close, buit Token won it by jus a pubic hair...anyway, good fuckin' battle...

Hit this up:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99213

Overall:

uppin 5................................................. .................................................. .........

Re: Tökën (Executives) Vs. Born To Kill (Murderous Methods) (300 posts to vote)
 

^i'm going to assume that you mean a line by line breakdown...and if so, then none of the previous votes should have counted...but here ya go...


All scores out of 10


Born-
Tha lead Exec is here ta suck my dick and taste my game...
But, Toke you've been there before so it should taste the same.*

bad opener....5

Ya soft and fake, couldn't rap tha truth if I notarized ya tongue...
So I'll drown ya in molten metal, so can come hard with iron lungs.

first line ok...second line pretty good but you lost points cuz it was pretty stretched...7

That'd be an improvement, cuz ya skills are shot after being beat...
Kid, you could make a deal with tha devil, and still not spit heat.

cmon man.....played...5

You and ya crew, tensed senses that can never unwind...
Gimped too, a perfect example of tha blind leading tha blind.

eh...this was pretty decent I guess..6

Twice beaten by Born, so ya ego's gotten up and taken flight...
Shamed in front of ya peeps, like Saddam givin up without a fight.

nice...but going to get played quickly....8.5


Total=31.5


aight Token-
You'd think you starred on MTV the way your diss-missed
I enscript hits poisen your liquor and you still dont spit sick hits

very weak opener...played too...5

You're simply not s-killed.. Like Bruklor being de-modded
I threw away your wack concepts but you just saved and caught it

ok saw where you were going with the first line but wording was bad...second line was the same...good idea but horribly worded....5

You changed your name to Visa.. Just to get a little credit
After this Win I'll have you takin anti-ginko just to forget it

ok...this is better...7

Your verse couldn't be striking if your lines said thunder
You didn't beat me kid.. Your occupation did.. It says Head Hunter

ohhhh-damn....nearly everyone who's battled born has said something about headhunter.....but you flipped this nicely as hell....9.5

..Are you gettin the point now
Or shall I explain it farther..
..You've been sonned so many times
There's not even room for Darth Vader to claim father..

lmao...played but stil nice...8

Total=34.5


numbers don't lie so....

Vote=Token