MeNTiLL vs Celestial Dialect
 

10 Lines
Regular Rules
Due 2Morrow

i said 14 lines in the thread.....

and due tomorrow night at 10 Pm Eastern Time...

^^ That cool wit you?

Yea watever ... Go 14 ... Im still goin' 10 ... Peace ... Grr ... I hate this 100 character shit ... Enough ?

Hmmm ... Let's see wat I can come up wit ...

I'll murder you !! ... Um no wait that's been played for some time
But fucc it I seen ur skills and figured I could waste a couple of lines
Hope U prayed a couple of times - Cuz Dia your gonna need it
U got good chances receivin' votes for ur verse ... As long as people don't read it
Defeated ? Not yet cuz I told myself I'd spread it out in ten bars
Cuz kid drops so much horse shit Im startin' to believe he's a centaur
Im surprised U got this far Kid still has trouble stickin' to the basics
His crew is The Agents ... Guess U can call me Neo from the Matrix
Man juss face it - Dialect, MeNTiLL ... Dialect, MeNTiLL - There's no comparsion
And seein' ur custom title backwards -
Is the only way people would bother readin' ur nareteV's

There U go ... 10 so drop ur verse man ... Peace

Haha...You Funny....Heres Alittle News For Ya Ass

This dudes personals are fake like him actin big
The agents...I aint wit em, dont u see DOI in my sig

iight...

Yo Look...

Spit ya fake fabels,my blade'll leave your face labeled
Beat me!jus like superman naked your not Cape Able
Mentill ya cant win, so don't take it hard when u lose
Cuz sportsmanships not a tennis game Carnival cruise
Mentill is Mentally ill, shook ya so bad I caused turrets
U be scrambling 4 u life like imprisoned breakfast chef
The fact is, Dogg I could kill you wit ya own wackness
Herb, u more turncoat then da nike reversible jackets
Already dead, you would still get killed if u prewrite it
Ya punches are like the college BCS,wit out the C in it
DD'd,Dead from Drop,rainbowed too like his blue balls
Jacked ya thinkn cap but useless,it wa 5 sizes to small
You aint goin back home,like a captured secret assassin
I woulda droped sooner,but I cant type when im laughin

Oohhhh....
Nice Battle

Punches-MeNTiLL
Personals-Celestial Dialect
Wordplay-Celestial Dialect
Vocab-Neither
Enjoyable-Celistial Dialect
Originality-MeNTiLL

Overal Vote-Celistial Dialect

No hate
But I was simply Feelin Celistial's verse more

"This dudes personals are fake like him actin big
The agents...I aint wit em, dont u see DOI in my sig"

HAHAHA

Dont kno why
But it didn't let me poll vote....??
Anyways I'll talk to Axe or Feeble
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opener C
closer C...made me laugh good job
punches C harder
wordplay Mentill
personals C
overal C

no hate
peace

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Aight ... I'll take it away for you ... I was juss sayin' ... Well U read ... So fucc it ... Let the people vote ...

hate vote. . it doesnt count. -feeble
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I took it away

Mentill thank you for takin away ya swaying and Feeble thank you for takin away deacons hate vote

UPPPIN UPPIN UPPINN UPPINN UPPINN UPPIN UPPIN

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^^^ umm where was there hate....do you think im would lower myself to your level and have actual beef over a computer screen...hahha funny my vote remains....give me an aim we can chat....friend

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Dont really know both of ya'll cats but Deacon's vote dint look too clever....
anyways
Mentill-you had some really nice concepts etc but they really dint hit that hard..you obviously can spit heat but it looked effortless in this battle and you dint come hard enuf..

Celest-Looked a bit scripted but you did have some nice wordplay and your flow and structure was well kept.

BREAKDOWN---
Punches-Tie
Structure-C
Flow-C
Enjoyment-Mentill
Metas-C
Effort-C
Sustainment-C
Overall-C
Nice battle but Effort and Metas took it for me

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ..SEEN AS THO I HIT THIS UP PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99336

^^^^clever.....you must not know me well......

good day-----note I am the agents---make a note on that......

I know you well, your a dumb ass... You say that you dont beef over the computer but wrote that wack ass diss to me... LOL

so Fake... and Didnt I rip you? LOL... I think so
That vote was hate straight up and you know it, BIATCH...

^ UPPIN ^

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

Opener: M
Punches: M
Personals: CD
Wordplay: CD
Vocab: CD
Flow: M
Closer: CD
Overall: CD By a very little.... Good battle
Overall:

^^^^^high class im everything you wished you could be....RAPPER you lets do an audio battle...how about it emcee....yeah thats what i thought wanna be...become a musician then talk to me until then keep writing pointless rhymes...

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rhymes arent pointless... numerous songs by rap artist are WROTE... THEN put into AUDIO... so keep shit talkin deacon...
~AshY~

Mentill took this easily
His punches were..wittier and more complex
Celest...had a nice line

Jacked ya thinkn cap but useless,it wa 5 sizes to small

^That was about it
Mentills flow, complexity was far more superior
Cest sometimes had lines that didnt rhyme at all
like...Turrets and chef or Wackness and jackets

So V. Mentill

Yo ... What's up wit all ya'll postin' in this thread with out them bein' votes ? Damn ... So fare it's 4- In favor of Celestal ... So let's get a vote (or votes) so this can be done ... Peace

Multi' = C
Punches: M
Personals: C
Wordplay: Mentil
Vocab: Mentil
Flow: M


Punches And Flow Is What Matter In A Battle Mentill Dont Battle In Evualted Frontlines You'll Just Get Dickriders And Herbs Hitting Him Up

Pz.

I dont do audio over the internet you lame ass. See there is a diffrence between me and you...
I got studio time in florida and in scharlotte. So no, I dont even fuckin worry about audio on a damn computer. I use to, like 2 years ago, when I was 15 or so. And your ass is 21 and still has a huge life on this computer. Make yourself looking more and more lame everytime you talk. And I already know your wack at audio, I heard your bull shit. You not only look, But sound like a Backstreet boy. So stick that mike up your faggot ass, and stop actin like your somthing. Rap came from the streets bitch, somthing you would never be able to fathem.

ohh yea, and my whole point...
UPPIN THIS BATTLE...

Breakdown..

Punches-Dialect
Personals-Dialect
Wordplay-Dialect
Multi's-Mentill
Flow-Dialect
Meta's-Tie
Creativity-Dialect
Overall-Dialect
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