Silverwolf vs Cyric
 

5-15 lines

my lines might be really late cuz my mom might want me off before then

no hate votes
no crew votes

din din ill try and post my lines before i go to bed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

check check...ill post tom. mornin then
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checkin in
ill spit first............................................. ......................
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hear it is:

Yo what kind of name is Cyric, it sounds pretty gay/
Sounds like i can find that shit in a shakespearen play/
Go back and play with the fuckin sandbox kids/
Thats where u belong, with the other faggots/
Im sittin here taken your the little gold out of ur coffer/
While Romeo is saying no to your blowjob offer/
Are u stayin or leavin, can u even decide?/
The way im kickin ur ass, there ain't no place to hide/
Ur the worlds biggest garbage dump/
They waste their shit on u, cuz ur a grade A chump/

romeo= from romeo and juliette (duh)
coffer= its like a chest

i messed up on line 5, i ment to delete the "your" its an extra word there............................................. ...............................

cyric where the hell are u??????????????????????????
yo if any of u guys see this guy, PM him about this battle
he might of forgot...eithere that or he's a pussy

he definatly got schooled and he knows it
Thats why hes 2 scared to post his shit

Come on lets at least see how weak u are
Doesn't matter if itll leave a fuckin scar

lets go bitch and get this shit over
Romeo is still shakin his head at ur blow job offer

But juliette pay atteton to her
she offerin but ur to gay to confer

im awaitin for ur lines to be spit
Ill have to coclude that u are a fuckin clit

what happened to tomorrow
Did u forget it in ur bone marrow?

just a little fun
while im WAITING

those texts show no threats kid wat were you thinkin/
ill break ya breathes in sets & leave ya vital signs sinking/
like havin i's in each word,kid watch wat you say/
my punches disguised and slurred but still put ya life in the gray/
im spittin knives through ya verse to help vent your anger/
then disperse cursed words & put ya career on a hanger/
each verb immersed slurred this herbs speech.../
no arms,im disconnected each to put your puns' out of reach/
like sleepy days on the beach,ya laid down to get burned/
you show no flows to be seen as if like the tide has turned/

blah...

wow nice drop~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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my vote would go to Silver he spit the hardest on this one
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my vote goes to cyric for multis and metaphor and a better structure i suggest that Silverwolf goes to the whackness center just to learn a few things it can really help alot so... anyway he just punched you harder and had a better flow..the romeo and juliette stuf.......i onno winner..cyric..hit that up with an opinion thanx

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Opener=Cyric (vital signs was ill)
Closer= Cyric
Personals=None
Punches=Cyric
Structure=Tie

Both were alright, but I think Cyric came off way nicer to get the win.

Vote = Cyric

yo cyric took this, close though, both need to work on structure, wordplay, punches, ect.

but cyric took it with better punches, less queer vocab...

no hate, no beef

shakesperian? c'mon G elevate

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uppin 5...........my last up.................lets go people don't sleep
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Opener: cyric
Punches: cyric
Personals: cyric
Flow: cyric
Wordplay: cyric
Vocab: tie
Closer: tie
Overall:

Cyric easily took this one srry cant vote though
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Aight i got to give this to Cyric!! I feel had a better flow (wit multis) better punches and a better overall verse (consistancy)

Favorite Bar:

"im spittin knives through ya verse to help vent your anger/
then disperse cursed words & put ya career on a hanger/"


VOTE: Cyric

Keep elevating!

Rise
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cyric takes this will harder punches...silver...your verse just didnt hit hard at all, nothing really dissed him that bad. how hard can telling him to go the sandbox with the otehr faggots be??? not very in my opinion. cyric also had the flow down pretty well and a multi or 2. nice job.

my vote : cyric