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~Rythmic Hints~ .:V.S:. 007
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no crew, d/r b/s 1 ;ien etc etc votes good luck no hate |
mic check one two............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......
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take your time................................ im just makin me tea............................................... ...........................
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I Hate To Say This But Your Wackness Is Outrageous
Dont Want To Attain This So Im Movin Down Incase Its Contaigeous . . . . . . *Ahem* Right-off the bat, I can tell ya rhymes are “watered down” n tasteless know your places kids.. don’t bother bluffin, I know ya hand is ace-less ya played phrases wont getcha nowhere wit me.. givin u the cold-shoulder putting the mic through torture, battlin the master, guess hes grown-bolder like old-stoners.. ill make da 007 senile, through a memory lapse to be retired no doubt, hip hops a concept this dick choker barely grasps you’re ill fitted as an emcee.. like marathon runners stuck-on-crutches my hunch-is, u like getting bullied, the way u love to munch-on-punches |
yo yo im keyin up right now, sorry i was eatin i got proof i'll take a pic if you want i'll drop as quick as i can!!!
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dowg just drop i aint no whinny bitch..............drop so we can get deez votes in good luck playa................holla
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words seperate your hearts chambers, split the pulmonary veins,
expose your anemic brain, n the 'matter of facts' which it contains, 'hint', erase you merk list, they the worst 6 cats on rb alltogether, yous like weak wrists, stand no chance after being freshly severed, a reasonable doubt, needs to be proved to convince the RB jury, evidence, even gods, and mortal men couldnt take my fists of fury, rythmic attempts, to throw a punch leaves himself, in a confused state, police leave him exempt, because judges cant charge, for verbal rape, intricate precision, to take out this 'hitman', theres some advice,(sig) left life-less, the tunnel which u see shinin bright, signifies the end of a life, |
uppin...........................for votes............................................. ...................................
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ooohhh not a bad battle..
both have elevated immensely especially 007 w/ his structure BREAKDOWN-- Punches-tie Flow-tie Structure-Tie Metas-007 sustainment-tie Complexity-007 Enjoyment-Both Multis-007 Overall-007 jus had that air of complexity which gave a good set up 4 punches Props to both MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99336 |
opener R
closer 7 punches R personals 7 wordplay R overal R blah |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||| |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||| |
wow emerge you have such a crazy votin system,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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second time uppin............................................. .........................................
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Opening: R
Punches: R Personals: 7 Flow: R Structure: 7 Vocab: 7 Closing: 7 Overall: Damn a close battle but I gotta go with 7... Repay the favor by voting on my Battle(s) in the sig thx- |
uppin............................................. for the 3rd time.............................................. ....................
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Breakdown...
Punches-Tie Personals-7 Wordplay-Rythmic Flow-Rythmic Multi's-Tie Meta's-7 Creativity-Rythmic Overall-Rythmic Vote on this battle yall its been up for a week with only 1 vote. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98550 |
4 th tome uppin...........drop honest votes............an one of us will return an honest vote..........if a link is provided.......................
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opener - tie, both more rhyming than punching
punches - 007 - rhythmic didn't really punch personals - none really mutis - rhythmic structure - 007 closer - tie vote = 007 both yall can do better, but 007 takes this one pz.......... |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99772
yo I hit this up b4 so can ya'll check this out plz... I'd really appreciate it pz |
Opener - Hints
Punches - Tie Flow - 007 Effect - 007 Closer - Tie Structure - 007 ~VOTE~ 007 Conclusion - This was a very close battle. Everything was pretty much even. This took me a while to really think of who im ganna give the vote to. But I think that 007 brought more effect with the punches. This was a nice battle, good effort to both... ( Please return the favor and make an honest vote on the battle in my sig. It would be much appriciated, it is 4-3, so it should be good to look at. Aight hommies, return the favor. ) |
i voted on loatsa battles................. i upped 5 time now......................... i waited a week nearly...............peeps sed they would vote........... an its still fuckin open!!!!
drop a fair votes an a link, an one of us will return a fair vote on ur battle.... an he wont up it!!! |
personals- 007
flo- tie punch- 007 meti4- hints multi- 007 structure- tie overall- 007.......way hints started off was ill...but it faded miserably |
SUP...i liked ya verse 007 but i think Mental is goin to partner me now.....I've already hit this up so can ya make sure ya hit this up w/ an honest vote in return plz??
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101388 |
I Would Breakitdown Verse By Verse But Im Gonna Have To Leave A Comment and not a N00b Breakdown Like ^ He just did..
Hmmm BOTH VERY NICE.... for your level. But Your bars were both to stretched keep them tidy 2... nice punches.... best two lines Quote:
blah this was the only decent line i could find you just keeped on goig on about shit no body unstands or cares about memory lapse?... other hand.. Quote:
after thaty^ lie i got bored rest were blah that as a solid punch V= Double... because the other guy had weak punches very weak... |
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