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Killer Krazy vs >>G1ft
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Aight we we go:
I take ya basic rhymes and hit ya with acidic material/ A chemical reaction, more common then milk on cereal/ With the tip of a finger, I can let your tongue linger/ Hitting you wit “fastballs”, U can’t be a virgin and a “swinger”/ I’m dropping this kid, so he should prepare for impact/ Just half way there and this gift is barely intact/ I embarrass this fool, so he keeps his “gift under wraps”/ I leave “footprints” too, running wit thunderous “tracks”/ You’re just a bundle of crap, with a bow for a cap/ The problem wit this present, is I’m kicking its ass/ Peace dog, i'll check this up later!! |
KillerKrazy likes to make the big bucks but his prostitution sucks//
Your rhymes are like Austen Minis gettin run over by my Mac trucks// He cant spit his mouth is dry and he thrives for rhymes to burst// I will spit fresh rhymes and quench your thirst// He wishes he was a Killer when it comes to hip hop// You couldnt visualize your victory if you made it on photoshop// You accepted and spat so you cant duck my hit// He lost this battle as soon as he clicked submit// now its a habbit, I cant help myself from murkin you// So when i say, this nigga has gone krazy, its true// |
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I take ya basic rhymes and hit ya with acidic material/
A chemical reaction, more common then milk on cereal/ ^^^ favorite line by Killer Krazy He wishes he was a Killer when it comes to hip hop// You couldnt visualize your victory if you made it on photoshop// ^^^ favorite line by wrapped gift killer took this with ease, he had better/more punches, better opener and closer, and way more entertaining. wrapped came up short, but it wasn't horrible nice battle vote-killer krazy |
oh yeah, for a favor,
can you guys hit up my battle with anaconda or lil c', i don't care if you can poll vote or not ~peace~ ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????? ???//////////////////////////////////////,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,, |
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Close:killer Puches:killer flow:gift structre:gift overall-killer nice drops by both of you guys vote on this battle plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99100 |
I'd like to say it was a good battle but it was more like a slaughter. KillerKrazy was the over all victor but I have to give props to Gift for
"He wishes he was a Killer when it comes to hip hop// You couldnt visualize your victory if you made it on photoshop//" Good line just needed better ones to back it up. |
Both had okay flows, killer you had good structure couple aight punches, i liked the under wraps line. Gift you had not as good structure, a better flow, and to me harder punches. So vote=gift
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wow......no one given killer credit he deserves.....he str8 ripped this kid....
hella nice meti4's......solid punches.....an nice flo- obviously not a newby....who is he? we'll soon find out..... i jus personally thik its hysterical how if he had a 1000 posts these comments would be he str8 merk'd this kid insteada.... Both had okay flows, killer you had good structure couple aight punches, i liked the under wraps line. Gift you had not as good structure, a better flow, and to me harder punches. So vote=gift ne ways.....jus my observation.....an utter merkin..... ^^its just the under 100 post plaugue^^ vote- killer |
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Yo, i got 2 battles going and i want to start another one, just finnish this up aight!! K.O.S |
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Im giving my vote to gift.
the one punchline that i felt that even hit, was from gift and it was that photoshop line. The rest was filler and/or played punches. Vote-Gift |
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instead of uppin, why don't you two just vote on this battle for us!!
just asking!! UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
this was a decent battle...kinda hard to judge...but here's how I see it....
flow=gift punches=killer structure=both(but not much from either of you) wordplay=gift thats how I see it...my vote goes to gift...nice battle both of you...keep elelvatin... Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -strobe |
killer took this, his verse had better lines and structure.. i also liked the multi's and flow you could follow a beat in my head..
anyways gift or w/e you did alright.. not a bad drop you just not at that level yet.. vote = kk hit this up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101949 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102049 |
yo i vote on killer crazy because his ryhmes were structured nicer was read easier and was more creative.....if i had 100 post i would vote killer.....gift was kewl too though
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KillerKrazy: "You're just a bundle of crap, with a bow for a cap"
That was crazy...non-stop punches, u stayed focused on your target. Wrapped Gift: "You couldn't visualize your victory if you made it on photoshop" That was hot...but I felt like you didn't even try on the rest. It was like a $20 dollar bill surrounded by pennies. MY Vote=KillerKrazy |
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punches both: With the tip of a finger, I can let your tongue linger/ Hitting you wit “fastballs”, U can’t be a virgin and a “swinger”//You couldnt visualize your victory if you made it on photoshop// metas gift: KillerKrazy likes to make the big bucks but his prostitution sucks// Your rhymes are like Austen Minis gettin run over by my Mac trucks// personals both: I embarrass this fool, so he keeps his “gift under wraps”/ I leave “footprints” too, running wit thunderous “tracks”/ wordplay gift: You couldnt visualize your victory if you made it on photoshop// killer yours was tight too though consistancy both: stayed dissing eachother throughout flow both: wasnt stretched bars overall i gotta go with gift no hate just opinion ............................................ ............................................ |
i have to say that um....killer won for having better punches....
structure wasnt great from either.....flow was good from both... just thought killer came harder with his disses and shit, i agree wit da rest of da board...... vote killer |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102244
wack battle didn't really like it Gift=Verse He NEeds To Elevate work on ur vocab and punches but the structure was straight Killer=Need to Work On Ur Punches Make It More Original But U Came Hotter U MurkeD This Dude I LikeD The Photoshop Line GG Vote=KK |
the photoshop line was mine aka gift
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yea...rock1n that photoshop line was dope but u just didn't have the rhymes to outdo killer...he just had better rhymes to me...+ his punchlines were pretty nice too....u can both use improvement though...
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Rockin Flames took this looks like more so out of experience.
Good punches like that one about "photoshop" good stuff Krazy u had some good stuff like about the whole thing with him being a gift and having a bow but u stretched it too much. Opener----Flames Closer----Krazy Punches----Flames Overall----Flames return the favor please im getting slept on and this battle is almost over http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102450 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102450 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102450 |
ok herez my breakdown
flow-i'd say killer structure-killer punches-gift, this punched caught my attention and it stood out the most to me...You accepted and spat so you cant duck my hit// He lost this battle as soon as he clicked submit// personals-neither metas-both multies-neither cuz i didnt see none really complexity-killer creativity-gift vocab-killer humor-gift overall-gift good battle i think keep up the good work |
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