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Dropz 12-17-03 09:01 AM

Fuck God
 
Walter Wall
N-Demik
Geezy

this is a quicky

Conrtibuted to the world to pay gods dues//
Deminished the lies; on my own i unscrambled the truths//
Clutchin my balls; middle finger to the air//
Fuck you god and ya angels//
Gave you a death wish but ya just dangle it above my head//
To where i cant reach it//
all the pain you have caused i rise above to forget that shit//
Christmas can suck my dick while i piss//
God didnt die i killed him on the cross//
then killed his bitch ass virgin mistress//

this is prob whack but im pretty
messed up right now so sorry.........

Nyte Fire 12-17-03 09:14 AM

Cool man...you just write that today?

Dropz 12-17-03 09:15 AM

ya its not that great i just put it up

Nyte Fire 12-17-03 09:17 AM

Look through the topics and look for one I made named Dropz...I wrote it last night and put it down

g3n3sis 12-17-03 09:19 AM

pretty cool man.. keep it up

Dropz 12-17-03 09:23 AM

ya i read it

Se7eN 12-17-03 10:24 AM

Man fuck GOD mothafuck you Dropz

Baron Mynd 12-17-03 12:52 PM

I thought this would be a diss to my alias. Was dissapointed after i read it.

skitten 12-17-03 01:01 PM

This was cool. Sticking your balls out there and diss God... What a topic. That's what it's all about.

Slimmey 12-17-03 03:01 PM

dont be goin at god like dat man dats fucked up don ur lyrical skillz are alrite but u gotta consider wat ur rappin about.

Nyte Fire 12-17-03 05:16 PM

Slimmey i dont think you need to be fuckin preachin...does this look like a church to you?

Dev 12-17-03 05:27 PM

i think this was a good original idea....nicely executed......different but yeah i liked it.....pZ......all you saying ya shit piss off...hes fucking made uo anyways...lol

N-Demik 12-17-03 06:26 PM

LMAO...I thought this was a diss to Cam as well

*Sigh*

southsideloco 12-17-03 07:44 PM

yo homie u got some balls to be dissin god like that....but it was still tight...wordplay was good...structure, vocab, n rhyme was all good

return de favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99504

Jaktheripherbs 12-17-03 07:51 PM

fuck u dont ever diss god like that again asshole

bospitta 12-17-03 07:55 PM

yo i kno what u mean by fuck god but it was jesus that died on the cross god is jesus's father lol ne way good job but yea i think u could choose a betta topic

HK The Great 12-17-03 09:05 PM

every one has their own opinion, hurts me to read it but thats your choice not mine, anyway, it was a sorry drop, flow was sorry, if it was a poem, drop in poetic scriptures, it had good vocab, but thats it, lacked consistency...... 3/10 late

Nyte Fire 12-17-03 11:06 PM

You little pussies need to shut the fuck up and quit preachin

CrackaBox187 12-17-03 11:25 PM

i give you props for what you did but dawg on these street no matter how many fake ass people give up on you at least you know you got the man upstairs cuz many of times thats all ive had

Dropz 12-18-03 10:38 AM

ya ive tried to rely on him but its not worked for me so i gave up on it

Dropz 12-18-03 10:50 AM

if i offended anybody.............good cuz i dont give a fuck

CrackaBox187 12-18-03 10:53 AM

what goes around comes around, im going throught all the hell i done put others throught, i aint seen sunshine in over a year, but im still here and theres gotta be a reason, just keep your faith and walk with your head held high

Nyte Fire 12-18-03 06:23 PM

God damn, I feel like im on fuckin oprah

Viscosity 12-18-03 06:38 PM

striaght, but i didnt like the concept tho

Accelerate 12-18-03 09:08 PM

I didn't like this. Concept sucked, and you sucked. And for acting like a dick throughout your thread to people who are trying to give you constructive feedback this is what you'll get from me:
A Knife, a rope, and a gun are on the table. Pick one to kill yourself with

Dropz 12-18-03 09:34 PM

bitch she cant get u off member that shit u told me guess beyonce's just ya front skiddz

wogzta 12-19-03 12:10 AM

^ even though i dont usually agree with SkiddZ, you are one cocky piece shit. I didnt like the topic either, but judging on your performance as well, you werent all the hot shit you act like you are. You didnt really have consistent syllable rhymes, vocab was weak except a bit towards the end, and your flow needs work. it get 5.5/10 for performance, but it was a pretty crappy concept to come out with - i respect you for doing whatever your feeling, but many people arent going to feel you and it is pretty stupid to say fuck god... if you even believe in god, then you should know that he put you on Earth (remember i said IF you believe in god) and saying "fuck God" is pretty stupid


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