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Fuck God
Walter Wall
N-Demik Geezy this is a quicky Conrtibuted to the world to pay gods dues// Deminished the lies; on my own i unscrambled the truths// Clutchin my balls; middle finger to the air// Fuck you god and ya angels// Gave you a death wish but ya just dangle it above my head// To where i cant reach it// all the pain you have caused i rise above to forget that shit// Christmas can suck my dick while i piss// God didnt die i killed him on the cross// then killed his bitch ass virgin mistress// this is prob whack but im pretty messed up right now so sorry......... |
Cool man...you just write that today?
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ya its not that great i just put it up
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Look through the topics and look for one I made named Dropz...I wrote it last night and put it down
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pretty cool man.. keep it up
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ya i read it
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Man fuck GOD mothafuck you Dropz
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I thought this would be a diss to my alias. Was dissapointed after i read it.
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This was cool. Sticking your balls out there and diss God... What a topic. That's what it's all about.
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dont be goin at god like dat man dats fucked up don ur lyrical skillz are alrite but u gotta consider wat ur rappin about.
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Slimmey i dont think you need to be fuckin preachin...does this look like a church to you?
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i think this was a good original idea....nicely executed......different but yeah i liked it.....pZ......all you saying ya shit piss off...hes fucking made uo anyways...lol
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LMAO...I thought this was a diss to Cam as well
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yo homie u got some balls to be dissin god like that....but it was still tight...wordplay was good...structure, vocab, n rhyme was all good
return de favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99504 |
fuck u dont ever diss god like that again asshole
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yo i kno what u mean by fuck god but it was jesus that died on the cross god is jesus's father lol ne way good job but yea i think u could choose a betta topic
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every one has their own opinion, hurts me to read it but thats your choice not mine, anyway, it was a sorry drop, flow was sorry, if it was a poem, drop in poetic scriptures, it had good vocab, but thats it, lacked consistency...... 3/10 late
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You little pussies need to shut the fuck up and quit preachin
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i give you props for what you did but dawg on these street no matter how many fake ass people give up on you at least you know you got the man upstairs cuz many of times thats all ive had
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ya ive tried to rely on him but its not worked for me so i gave up on it
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if i offended anybody.............good cuz i dont give a fuck
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what goes around comes around, im going throught all the hell i done put others throught, i aint seen sunshine in over a year, but im still here and theres gotta be a reason, just keep your faith and walk with your head held high
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God damn, I feel like im on fuckin oprah
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striaght, but i didnt like the concept tho
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I didn't like this. Concept sucked, and you sucked. And for acting like a dick throughout your thread to people who are trying to give you constructive feedback this is what you'll get from me:
A Knife, a rope, and a gun are on the table. Pick one to kill yourself with |
bitch she cant get u off member that shit u told me guess beyonce's just ya front skiddz
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^ even though i dont usually agree with SkiddZ, you are one cocky piece shit. I didnt like the topic either, but judging on your performance as well, you werent all the hot shit you act like you are. You didnt really have consistent syllable rhymes, vocab was weak except a bit towards the end, and your flow needs work. it get 5.5/10 for performance, but it was a pretty crappy concept to come out with - i respect you for doing whatever your feeling, but many people arent going to feel you and it is pretty stupid to say fuck god... if you even believe in god, then you should know that he put you on Earth (remember i said IF you believe in god) and saying "fuck God" is pretty stupid
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