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cr0nix 12-17-03 05:47 PM

Dez diss
 
Quote:
Originally posted by Dez
Ehh..
Work to drop the whole 'gangster' ordeal. It is not fun to read or listen to. Expand your vocab some, youll find that it helps to increase the overall appeal of your verses. And last but not least, DONT RAP ABOUT GUNS.


fucking hypocrit

Quote:
Originally posted by Dez

HERE MA' GAT, LEAVE EM BLOODY AND FULL OF HOLES


you n pot1ent some wack rappers
hope u duel ride my nuts, double sweatage!!
must be fetish, cuhz every time i come on i see u 2 heads' tryin to diss a textee
Must be on some Wack-tacy(exctacy), cuhz u seein colors-after this diss
You come online and talk hard-core,but ur just retarded
Bomb-barted, wit lines into ur chest - im nameless/crewless yet still the best
your added to the shook-list,your as embarassed as a nerd gettin booked-bitch
get off DEZ nuts, PLEASE-SHUCKS i need some toliet paper to whipe off the sweat
he's a cock-blocker, and im a glock-stocker, so im full of lead
your a toliet, cuz u full of SHIT, full of it, bitch, get off this dick
www.GayPorn.com, i saw you reppin' the tight shirt crew
in the winter he snuggles wit is dad to stay warm!! lookin small like the ernie n burt, he even got the dew too!!
Fuck u n the whole 'word perfect crew', buncha faggots BOO
you'd get kicked of the stage, if u read of a real MC's shit
get kicked in the clit, got this shit clicked bitch
only cocks u pumped (shotgun) is the penis
pote1ent, you suck DEZ ur wack - bitch i mean this

cr0nix 12-17-03 05:48 PM

ill get my replies up in alil bit

LoCo 12-17-03 05:54 PM

Re: Dez diss
 
Quote:
Originally posted by cr0nix


fucking hypocrit



you n pot1ent some wack rappers
hope u duel ride my nuts, double sweatage!!
must be fetish, cuhz every time i come on i see u 2 heads' tryin to diss a textee

get off DEZ nuts, PLEASE-SHUCKS i need some toliet paper to whipe off the sweat

www.GayPorn.com, i saw you reppin' the tight shirt crew
in the winter he snuggles wit is dad to stay warm!! lookin small like the ernie n burt, he even got the dew too!!
Fuck u n the whole 'word perfect crew', buncha faggots BOO

only cocks u pumped (shotgun) is the penis
pote1ent, you suck DEZ ur wack - bitch i mean this


ROFL this shit had me laughing fucking hardcore those were my favorite lines ROFL

LoCo 12-17-03 05:59 PM

rofl the tight shirt crew lmfao me n Masta C are having a parade over thsi diss rolf

LoCo 12-17-03 06:05 PM

I dont give a fuck what u say
heres his replies i did it for him THIS SHIT NEEDS TO BE PUT ON A STICKY
TIGHT SHIRT CREW LMFAO
Repped for him:
CrackaBox187
A.T
The Realist

southsideloco 12-17-03 06:12 PM

damn....

dis was a mad diss to whoeva, damn dis joint was mad funny 2 but u betta wacth out cuz whoeva u dissed will come right back!

but it was all good......vocab,multis n structure

Mr.Christensen 12-17-03 06:19 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by LoCo
I dont give a fuck what u say
heres his replies i did it for him THIS SHIT NEEDS TO BE PUT ON A STICKY
TIGHT SHIRT CREW LMFAO
Repped for him:
CrackaBox187
A.T
The Realist


WHO THE FUCK GAVE YOU AUTHORITY TO USE MY NAME??

LoCo 12-17-03 06:21 PM

SHUTUP SLUT
SET UP A BATTLE NOW

Mr.Christensen 12-17-03 06:28 PM

^^ no can do
Chrits on vacation

LoCo 12-17-03 07:33 PM

fag... no more free posting

Jaktheripherbs 12-17-03 07:42 PM

hahahaa that was fuckin sick u dissed the fuck out of em lmnao that shit had me dying yo that was sick dawg just sick got dayum

Ken Dawg 12-17-03 07:51 PM

DAMN! LOL...this was some funny shit...TIGHT SHIRT CREW LMAO!!! This had me laughing through out the whole thing...good shit here man i fucking enjoyed this shit lol....Fucka Dez!!!! LOL!!!

Thrust 12-17-03 08:44 PM

dude...don't feel confident about this...
it was garbage.. ur structure is whackk....
made me not even want to read this...
get some talent... then try n diss some1

Speek.E.Z. 12-17-03 09:49 PM

this was whack..
your whack.. hope you didnt feel pride in that..
cuz dez will rip it, and if he wants i will spit with him..
you whack.. go run into a wall a few times then come back..

cr0nix 12-17-03 10:10 PM

hey look 2 nut riders, lets set up a battle ill get a few kids to sign up at this forum ok? u get 3 people ill get 2 others u 2 fuck nuts an dez shti throw in pot he counts as like a half.. fucking wiggers lets go

CrackaBox187 12-17-03 10:33 PM

If you don't know me
 
If you don't fuckin' know me, don't let my name out cha mouth, ima tie bound and gag then fuck the shit out your spouse, in your house, in your bed, while your daughter give me head, who you pretend to roll with bra, ima have to clean this out like an enema, put ten to ya temple bombs and end ya like December, start over again to the next hoe steppin in, fuck a wide vocabulary, it's simple, SUCK MY DICK like its m&m's, im back in this dope game, baggin up cocaine, I've done sold my frosted flakes, and god damn there grrrrrrreat, and when the price goes up don't think im jinxed, ima flip everything like a game of tidly winks, ya'lls a bunch of faggots in girldles, cuz i done took your girl and oozed her down like ninja turtles, ya'll still think it's a game with the 45 in my hand, look over and notice i've done put 8 in your man, stop and notice i've done evicted ya'll plan, oh CrackaBox please, im sick how you think your girl got herpes, ima sick hustler im sellin HIV, and for 1 time only, a gram a G Yall bitches just can't fuck with me

CrackaBox187 12-17-03 10:37 PM

If you don't fuckin' know me, don't let my name out cha mouth, ima tie bound and gag then fuck the shit out your spouse, in your house, in your bed, while your daughter give me head, who you pretend to roll with bra, ima have to clean this out like an enema, put ten to ya temple bombs and end ya like December, start over again to the next hoe steppin in, fuck a wide vocabulary, it's simple, SUCK MY DICK like its m&m's, im back in this dope game, baggin up cocaine, I've done sold my frosted flakes, and god damn there grrrrrrreat, and when the price goes up don't think im jinxed, ima flip everything like a game of tidly winks, ya'lls a bunch of faggots in girldles, cuz i done took your girl and oozed her down like ninja turtles, ya'll still think it's a game with the 45 in my hand, look over and notice i've done put 8 in your man, stop and notice i've done evicted ya'll plan, oh CrackaBox please, im sick how you think your girl got herpes, ima sick hustler im sellin HIV, and for 1 time only, a gram a G Yall bitches just can't fuck with me

MethodZ 12-17-03 10:43 PM

this is wack

DEZ 4 LIFE :)

agents will get u

WORD~PERFECT 12-17-03 10:47 PM

personally i didnt like the diss i mean you attacked but lacked so much of what makes it a banger this was some lines thrown with fillers.it's like trying to kill a freestyle rapper by taking his paper away.....it wont matter he can staill do it.this was futile to read and though you aint garbage this didnt upgrade you any.

CrackaBox187 12-17-03 10:58 PM

man i just threw that shit together but while i take your constructive critisism, Methodz take your lil young ass back to fuckin school and shut the fuck up

Speek.E.Z. 12-17-03 11:21 PM

hey your whack.. all of you.. even methodz ;) but ya you get your three "illest" emcees and I will grab dez and one more, then we can dance hows that sound.. boy?

Dez 12-17-03 11:44 PM

In case you were blind to my previous showings, I posted 'GANGSTA DEZ' as a joke before the verse. Ha. As for this 'diss', not only was your structure sub-satisfactory, but you lacked punches that home. Nice fake personals.


Expect to be dealt with soon.

MethodZ 12-17-03 11:51 PM

im down speek......by the way get on AIM hoe...u needa give me my money ....

Mr.Christensen 12-17-03 11:56 PM

You guys do know
cr0nix and LoCo are the same person

SAD

Nyte Fire 12-18-03 12:03 AM

Yeah...I read about half of it....the structure is horrible...no offense..try to have all your lines evenly matched...rather then havin one short line and then stretched out lines it makes it look like shit...other than that its fuckin funny as hell, great

Nyte Fire 12-18-03 12:07 AM

back to Crackas post about his rap....shut the fuck up...if you wanna post somin start a new topic..and dont post it again 4 minutes later either....lame

Speek.E.Z. 12-18-03 02:00 AM

you've been served..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99592

Dez 12-18-03 03:34 AM

^ And how.

str8-n-sane 12-18-03 07:06 AM

lmao....ill battle for you guys...lol....NOT CRONIC....... sorry dueche your wack....

LM 12-18-03 07:14 AM

This wasnt any good.
Structure, flow in some parts, punches, personals....everythin were under par and need improvin.
Oh and dez will murder you on his comeback.
Keep droppin but stay away from the disses.
3/10

Theo Ginn 12-18-03 08:34 AM

Watch out for the agency :)

id request yourself banned..you suck

A.T. 12-18-03 10:18 AM

this diss was ok... the structure was hurtin bad...
your vocab could have been upped... but you had
some funny lines in that shit... try not to force your
flow though...
~AshY~

Speek.E.Z. 12-18-03 02:31 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Origin
Watch out for the agency :)

id request yourself banned..you suck


me and dez and method already got him origin, he's dead :)


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