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Slim Thug 12-17-03 05:51 PM

Yungheadwrecka vs Sphere
 
10 lines
30 min to drop
no freeposting
no d/r crew hate votes

Drop asap

Sphere 12-17-03 05:56 PM

Check

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Slim Thug 12-17-03 05:59 PM

Yo this foo sphere-shit bites my lyrics like it’s a skit/
makin you slit-wrists just so you dont have to hurt when my fists-hit/
cuz you know when you do wut faggots-do my punches hit wit great magnitude/
and crack ya back-in-two,you didnt want me to post cuz you know when i attack-its-threw, all you thinkin is you bout-ta-lose/
try to make yaself a copy of this rhyme and my sentences will put a virus inside ya printer/
Lyrically I got iller lines then a medical center /
you couldnt be ill on outer space even the aliens would laugh-at-you/
they spit back-at-you hittin you wit blows that send you back to earth black-and-blue/
the only way you win is by gay-disqualifications, ill ingrave-ya-whole-face-in, send you to da hospital to get ya neck-brace-in/
ill make ya entire waist-bend, until you feet conect wit ya mouth and make you taste-shin, and then beat you again until ya heart rate-became-slim/
ill set you up against my girl Ja$per and shell rip you so hard youll begin-ta-date-men, i spit rhymes so hot for battles that i start fights even god wont engage-in/


Weak verse but i didnt need a long one
10 min verse

Sphere 12-17-03 06:27 PM

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Wrecka winnin a battle..nope..even ya names outa ya reach*
Ya gettin pissed on..see..its clear..like i been guzzlin bleach
Its over..you suck..this dick cant even give himself head**
Beatin me about as rare..as blondes wit no air between legs
Imma kill ya ass in slow motion..cus im maxin the payne
Museum of worst breaks..only time ya disks get in a frame
This fags so wack theyl use his spinal cord for tennis rackets
Then his videos at home..can show the pros how to wack it
To be honest..i cant be fucked..way this wins cumin so easy
Jumpin this fool..cus he called me a rat..n his styles cheezy

*Avy
**Name

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Slim Thug 12-17-03 06:33 PM

Uppin fa verse good luck .

Sphere 12-17-03 06:42 PM

uppin for some votes

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Young P 12-17-03 06:44 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99278
Peep dis battle real quick while I break it down for ya'll ...

Thanks....

Will post a vote in a second....

Young P 12-17-03 06:53 PM

Sphere. Definitly had some hard hitting punches, personals, and meta's. Verse was well written and werded nice. Flow was on da point. Best newb i've seen in a while.

Yung. Had decent punches, but just wasnt at da level dat sphere wuz. He didnt have any personals, and flow and structure wasnt great.

So. Sphere takes this one.
Sorry.

Sphere 12-17-03 07:13 PM

thanks

uppin

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Canuck 12-17-03 07:19 PM

Opener=Tie (headwrecka, why would you beat a dead guy?)
Closer = Head (yo, don't use cheezy in rap music)
Flow = Sphere (nice flow meng)
Personal = Tie
Punches= Sphere
Structure= Sphere (just easier to read)

Vote....cuz of overall points = Sphere

Slim Thug 12-17-03 07:44 PM

Uppin fa votes............................................. .................................................. .....

GaZeeBo 12-17-03 07:51 PM

yo actally i think yung won this because of better punches and struture

both were nice but i think that yung pulled thism one out

yo sphere u got alot of talent bro use it wisely

my vote-yungheadwrecka

hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99309

Slim Thug 12-17-03 08:14 PM

2-1 lets get some more votes /

alias 12-17-03 08:19 PM

opener: tie
closer: yung
punches: tie
structure: sphere
vocab: tie
wordplay: tie
overall: yung

aiight, nice battle, very competetive, but yungs opener did it for him


PLZ WILL YOU DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS, SEEMING AS I HAVE TAKEN MY TIME TO VOTE ON YOU BATTLE, THANKS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99418

Slim Thug 12-17-03 08:20 PM

2-2 uppin yet again for more votes .

Meters 12-17-03 08:25 PM

opener: yung
closer: yung
punches: tie
structure: sphere
flow: yung
overall: yung

This is my breakdown. You came hard Sphere, congrats. Yung, i know that you can come harder than that. Don't underestimate all n00bs! Heh. Anyhow, you have really good flow man, i think you still took this one.

Check my sig and copy and paste and vote on that battle if you hvae the time.

Slim Thug 12-17-03 08:32 PM

3-2 lookin for a couple more votes....Comeon people ! lol .

Silverwolf 12-17-03 08:37 PM

Opener=Tie
Closer = Head
Flow = Sphere
Personal = Tie
Punches= Sphere
Structure= Sphere

Vote = Sphere
hit this up plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99100

Slim Thug 12-17-03 08:47 PM

Can we please get some more votes on this so we can finish it? Thanx /

Ambitious 12-17-03 09:11 PM

hmm.....good battle...........cant poll cuz of crew............but i'd still give it to young..................since sphere is origin.............and was scared to take a loss on his own name i guess.......

breakdown
opener - young
closer - tie
struct - sphere
punches - tie
personals - sphere
vocab/complex - yung
metas - tie

overall i wouldnt give it to either..........tie ball game


peace

Slim Thug 12-17-03 09:28 PM

Still 3-2....can somebody please vote .... .................................................. ...........

AUSTISDABOSS 12-17-03 09:44 PM

this wuz close but young took it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Silverwolf 12-17-03 09:55 PM

dude u gotta make ur votes longer othere wise you'll get DQed
and its kinda gay u gotta give reasons why someone took the battle or not

Quelude 12-17-03 10:05 PM

I think that young had a better verse in the tenacity depatment
Sphere was hot, he had great structure.
Creatively wise I give it to Young for the sheer amount of metas he came with.
So overall I gotta go with young. He had too much packed into his verse.

Slim Thug 12-17-03 10:10 PM

4 - 3 me over sphere....Lets get however many more votes in that this takes..... Btw I know who u are Sphere :)

TheProphet777 12-17-03 10:27 PM

heres the break down...

Opener:young
Closer:young
complex: young
Flow:young
Structure:yougn
Punches:young
Personals:young
enjoyment:young

Do i need to say more....................................?


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