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kautious vs canuck
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no hate votes/ biting or recycelying simple rules check in and drop when you can |
^ thats not what we agreed on ^
but now that you pre-wrote, I'll stillserve your ass.......................................... |
yo don't mean to freepost, but yall better read the new rules... 10 line minimum.
pz... and good luck |
He said it 10 line minimum. Due Whenever.......................................... .................................................. ...................................
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yea aight 10 line
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Kautious with a 'K', damn I guess this kids krazy//(1)
but I'm nautious cuz thats played, now he think's he's gon' faze me//(2) How you change'n the rules, so it will benifit your style?//(3) but I'm still hang'n them fools, so admit it, you's in denial//(4) so as you choke on this shit, cuz you can barley even rap//(5) why don't you smoke on this dick, and kiss on my hairy ass?//(6) sorry, jus look'n for laughs cuz I can't take you serious//(7) but you still shook'n shit in those pants, ya moms gonna be furious//(8) I hate to end it so soon, when I was just get'n started//(9) but I ain't gon'elevate battle'n you, cuz your just too retarded//(10) sorry that was like a record for me........5minutes 43seconds |
MY verse
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Description of a killing, my verse prescribes another death... thinking of fatal ways that i could just "steal away your breath" a method where u "get blow(n)" away like inhaling lines of crystal meth... -verse- Why do u north idiots surround me, another canadian rapper to dismantel... you'll get "tuned" to have "flashbacks" like i was changing the channel...:shoot: RB my “home” Page, plz don’t band me for this “domestic disturbance” "my offense"... I get tense to be intense that’s why this kid’s getting burned like Miss.Cleos incense... RB my “home” Page, plz don’t band me for this “domestic disturbance” in my offense... I get tense to be intense that’s why this kid’s getting burned like Miss.Cleos incense... Look Princess if your verse is hot then I must be seeing it as pretense... Don’t give your rhymes “thought”; giving so much “brain” you probably got no sense... explanations: "tuned" means fixed beat up. fucked the link: was a canadian thinking he was the best one on the site y'all should get the rest i dunno if i threw a extra line in their and if i did then you can to also the way i did the verse might hurt the structure, but any way drop it |
what the fuck, why did it repeat it.s self ... lmao i must of put the line in their 2wice,,
i gotta fix dat!!!!! |
MY verse
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Description of a killing, my verse prescribes another death... thinking of fatal ways that i could just "steal away your breath" a method where u "get blow(n)" away like inhaling lines of crystal meth... -verse- Why do u north idiots surround me, another canadian rapper to dismantel... you'll get "tuned" to have "flashbacks" like i was changing the channel...:shoot: RB my “home” Page, plz don’t band me for this “domestic disturbance” "my offense"... I get tense to be intense that’s why this kid’s getting burned like Miss.Cleos incense... Look Princess if your verse is hot then I must be seeing it as pretense... Don’t give your rhymes “thought”; giving so much “brain” you probably got no sense... explanations: "tuned" means fixed beat up. fucked the link: was a canadian thinking he was the best one on the site y'all should get the rest i dunno if i threw a extra line in their and if i did then you can to also the way i did the verse might hurt the structure, but any way drop it |
ok.......................then.
uh.....nice verse uh.....nice verse Votes Please............................................ .................................................. ......... |
man i fucked up my verse... o well, uppinf for votes
also can y'all click that link for my other battle to be voted on thanks |
Opener: Tie
Punches: tie Personals: Canuck Vocab: Kaut Wordplay: Kaut Flow:Kaut Closer: Canuck Close battler but overall = Kautious because he had originals |
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Kautiouse....what u think is wordplay isn't-same with canuck on his first line......
I read thru an felt canuck's verse was very simplistic filled wit childish threats....which i guess u could categorize as punches.... Kautiouse kept quoting "things"....for what reason I dont know....but other than that it had sum decent flow and some O.K. met4's...... to me this is difficult for me to decide...... ....... .......... ..............well....Ima have to go with canuck......as simplistic as it was...it seemed to me that he was geared more torwards a battle verse.....kautiouse....u'r alot better than what u shown here....try an stay on base a lil bit more though...u got all caught up in your wordplay...... vote-canuck |
sup k man.
flow=k closer=tie opener=c enjoyment=k punches=k personals=c overall=k good spit man try include harder punches and mre wordplay........plz put an honest vote on this as i took the time thx man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99408 .....pz |
This was very close. Canuck had a much better format, his lines weren't stretched, and his punches came in a cat and mouse, toying with you style which, didn't make them very hard, but was quite enjoyable and humorous. Kautious had very stretched lines, a bunch of minor league quotation marks, and he split apart his verse, which I personally don't like. With that in mind, I go to the catagories and the major ones; wordplay, metas, multi's, and punches have to go to Kautious. He just had what I've come to expect from a battle rhyme. Canuck was straight forward and while I enjoyed it, there was no style or skill (for lack of a better word) to it. Overall: Kautious. Now vote on mine. Thanks! Tobias vs. K
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plz put an honest vote on this as we took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99408 thx man......................................pz
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Aiight........
Opener-C Punch's-Tie Flow-C Wordplay-K Vocab-K Wordplay-K Closer-C Overall-Tie Vote-C I feel his verse was a little more enjoyable but dis was a close battle good jod!!............keep itup! 0n3 |
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Opener - tie
Punches - tie Personals - Canuck Vocab - Kaut Wordplay - Kaut Flow - K Closer - Canuck Close but overall - K we can read Canuck.....and we can count aswell....u dont need to number ur lines....abit stupid really but no mata! if this battle is still open when a reach 100, i'll poll my thoughts^^ hit this up honestly plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=99723 thanks laterz |
uppin for this
also click the underlined and highlighted line in the forth line for my other battle please!!!!!!!! uppin |
meta/draw
multi/draw open/kaus close/kaus punch/draw person/draw vote/kaus ((((())))))))(((((((()))))))))))))))))))))))))))(( (((((((((((((((((((()))))))( |
well shit i usually don't do this but i go against the majority on this one...he really had no personals at all as far i'm concerned so it seems like a pre-written verse then he jsut threw in some disses on canada...he had some nice wordplay and punches but really i think Canuck is a lil bit more advanced than him despite what the records may say Canuck kept this alive with nice Multis and a couple really good play on words my vote canuck...both y'all hit this up..one..ps there will be a rematch canuck..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...888#post1000888 |
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........... 1. i never pre-write- never have and never will i do my shit on microsoft word before i put it on the post so i can edit it and not flud the thread with posts of the same thing but changed like i did and sorry for that. 2.i had no personals?..... threw disses on Canada im canadien so why would i be dissing canada im dissing the people from canada that think they top and got beat by me "like in the underlined link on the forth line" 3. ive been doing this for a long time, texting-audio, stated when i was 13 so 2 years, i dont put as much time into text so thats why im on and off when i battle, i can spit some nice stuff when i want but at times i just get caught up in shit like a newb. the records arn't shit ive had over a 100 battels and still counting so stop with the dick ride vote "against the majority" your voting against me cuz im up in polls? and you want a rematch with canuk... seems you guys really want each other..... if you wanna battle then set it up uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
ahaha kid first of all stop swaying while canuck isn't online...second of all i don't know Canuck and i want a rematch because he beat and he is the only one...jsut like i think and i gave reasons why..he beat you so fuck yourself and deal with the vote its still three to one and i would tear you apart so go away...
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punches-kautios
flow-tie wordplay-kautious opener-tie closer-kautios overall-kautios canuck..... just needs to elevate... and come harder return tha favor hit this up plz.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...84&pagenumber=2 |
Enjoyment/Canuck
Opener/canuck Closer/Canuck Punches/Kautious Flow/Canuck Wordplay/Kautious Vocab/Kautious Vote:canuck... it was a close decision but i felt canuck got this his verse was stronger and he had more catorgories..... Can ya both drop an honest vote onn tha battle in my sig thanx |
sorry for free posting but kautious..... you forgot to poll vote...so hit that up.......peace
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