Jo-we vs Silverwolf
 

10-15 lines
u spit first
check in
no d/r
no hate
no crew

due by 9:00 p. m. PAC time

checkin in.....spittin now............................................... .................................................. ........

ahhhhh hea it goes...

Tha only reason this cats "silver" cuz he's scared of dark//
He aint a "wolf" hell I wouldn't call him a dog cuz he lackin a bark//
Ya lyrical guns spittin blanks, while mine's throwin grenades//
I ambush ya house, betta close tha shades//
Wanna put me on ya "beat" list, hell you be on mine//
"Beatin" my "dick" just to get a peace of my time//
"Howl" to this, i'm tha full moon, get on ya 4's kid//
I'm like Pringles, once I pop, there goes tha lid//
It doesn't stop, just like every rhyme you "cop"//
Somebody call "911" his heart about ta drop//

aight...it's a start....spit

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Jo-we.. i suppose that is ur name/
To bad its gonna be burned in my lyrical flame/
My names silverwolf cuz ill tear u to shreds/
My teeth will drip with blood, itll scare the other thouroghbreds/
Y the hell do u compare urself to pringles/
Once ive popped ur lid, ill eat ur lines in singles/
Look at my avatar it says Fuck u im thinking/
im not thinking anymore im just ginving u an ass kicking/
Im already know ur in my demolished list/
i blocked ur weak punches and i punched u back with iron fists/
Now ive demolished ur wack ass rhymes/
Go back to ur mom, cuz she only charges a dime/

k now we can get some votes

sorry i took so long i had HW and dinner............................................ .................................................. .................................................

Hate To Say It, But Honestly I Think Jo-we Got This, At Least He Had A Good Meta In There, But It Was Annoying To See Useless Quotes, You Both Had Basically The Same Structure, Silver Flowed Better But Jo Had The Vocab And Wordplay, Silver Had A Few Personals But None Even Hit Hard, Sorry But Its My Opinion

Vocab - Jo
Flow - Silver
Punches - Tie (Jo's Were Indirect And Silver's Didnt Hit Hard)
Wordplay - Jo
Structure - Tie
Personals - Silver

Vote - Jo-we

Sorry I Cannot Poll Vote, But At Least I Was Decent Enough To Reply With An Honest Opinion, Think You Can Do The Same Here?

FuE-xIoN vs. Toner

silver took this one fairly easily in my mind!!!!!!!!! but i cant vote srry
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Both verses were pretty weak, but silver got it barely, JO got the flow, Silver had harder disses/punches. Note silver you used a line with ass kicking in the last verse i saw from you, try not to do that. Be more creative. Vote=silver

if you can hit my battle up with j-yo-b
that be coo.

this was a sorry battle but if i could vote i would give it to silver because he had better punches
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aight 1-0....letz get sum votes in here yall.............................................. .................................................. ...............1st up

uppin number 1 for me................................................ ......
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id say silver took this, only just tho.....

he used words that are more than one syllable, unlike Jo.......

and he was pretty much, generally better....

vote - silver

hit this up please....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=99723

thanks

laterz

uppin 2 for me..........don't sleep............................................. .......
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jo-we wins

punchs
personals
ohhhs..... all go to jp-we

the other cat talked about hislef....NO USE of meta by any of u.thats rotton.elevate p-lease...........


IVOTES so u guys vote on my battle

uppin 3................................................. ...............................
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uppin 4................................................. ........................................
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flow-silver
punches-silver
wordplay-jo-we
vocab-tie
humor-tie
personals-silver
entertainment-silver
structure-silver
opener-jo-we
closer-tie(both were odd as fuck)
vote-silver
nice battle
~peace~

uppin my 2nd time.............................................. .................................................. ...........

Aiight......

Opener-J
Punch's-wolf
Flow-wolf
Vocab-wolf
Wordplay-J
Structure-wolf
Closer-wolf


Overall-wolf
Vote-wolf

J u need to elevate more!!.......silver gets dis cuz atleast he had punch's!........but elevate too!..........

0n3

3rrrrrrrrd time uppppppppin....................................... .................................................. .

uppin 5 time.............................................. .................................................. ............................

4th time upppppppppppppppinnnnnn...........come on yalll.........don't sleep on this pl.zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Last time uppin.............letz get sum votes.......this shyt wuz slept on baddddddddd....................................... ..........................................

I'm usually a wordplay/ meta kind of guy so therefore I would vote Jo We

BUT

Silver had way more consistent punches and harder hits... Punches is what wins battles and Silver won.

Both of you need to work on mixing the 2 together though.. Elevate.. read battles and keep shit up.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100161

Opener - wolf
closer - wolf
punchlines - wolf
enjoyed - none
rhyme scheme - none
wordplay - wolf
structure - wolf
flow - wolf
overall - wolf

vote on this battle in return.

cannabarz vs feakyjay

thank you.