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Dropz vs. Nyte Fire
10-20 lines...no time limit since i know you dont got the internet at home...check in and do your shit when your ready
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i'ma go ahead and lay my down J
Dropz drop what? I'll drop a load on your chest Out of the rappers in school you may be the best Your lines outlast the rest, when you rap everyone stay Just to hear the lyrics of a white boy that cant get laid "Fuck your parents", "Fuck God", why don't you just say Fuck everyone it doesnt matter cuz at the end of the day Your lines dont compare to the ones that I lay "Beyond Pissed"? the truth is this, your beyond bein verbally dissed beyond slittin your wrists beyond a lot of things I could list Your not the only kid who came from a broken home Beaten and left alone, self esteem in the danger zone Addicted to gettin lifted to ease the pain of the abuse Gettin low grades in all your classes, usin ADD as an excuse Dont take this rap personally though, I just let my rythym flow and my words come naturally like a big ass comes to J-Lo |
dat shit was not all dat tight but lets see what the other dood has to offer
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Go head taunt me bout bein adhd and scrawny//
Put me down push me pussy just to make ya look better// Bed wetter emcee better check what bed ya in// I think ya just pissed in michaels bed again// Forget usin complex words this homosex checks// his sexuality on a regular basis basically hes as// Parallel to that kid that got fucked by Michael// At his Neverland mansion on his carasel// Iight herb loosen up and elevate ya verb use// Ya cant beat me at this shit so quit and call truce// ya never be famous so quit talkin bout getting j-lo and her anus// and start working on critiquing and twirking ya structure// Stop fantasizing bout J-lo cuz ya neva gonna fuck her// not tha greatest |
iight dont sleep on this one.... ikno i checked in late but i dont got internet at ma house uppin fo votes
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c' mon peepz uppin 2x!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i hate that damn text thing i have to type this shit so i can post |
c' mon damnit need some votes on this one uppin3x~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
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this was truly a newbie battle, neither came hard, both lacked
punches, drop had a weak opener verse, and barely rhymed,at least he had betta disses nite seem to compliment dropz on his first bar, did'nt feel his verse at all, was'nt even a battle verse, both need to elevate a lot vote drop for effort |
dam! shit sayin session invalid and not lettin me vote, what tha deal$$$$$$
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Aiight...........
Da Breakdown Nyte:shyt was weak,flow was aiight,punch's were corny elevate more!!....... Dropz:dis too was weak barely dissed alls u really did was feed off of what he saidtry harder next time! aiight...... Nice Lines..... Dropz-didnt really like ne of dem! Nyte-same here Opener-dropz Punch's-tie(both were weak) Flow-nyte Structure-dropz Vocab-dropz wordplay-nyte Closer-dropz Overall-Dropz Vote-Dropz I feel both verses were weak,both need to elevate n try harder!!........i guess dis was an ok battle! 0n3 |
dropz took this one
better wordplay nice vocab better punches better closer the other dood had some tight shit but dropz took this one HotRod vs Matt Dillon HotRod vs Mc Nookie votes needed thanks |
iight uppin4x dont sleep on this 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
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Da Breakdown
Nyte:shyt was weak,flow was aiight,punch's were corny elevate more!!....... Dropz:dis too was weak barely dissed alls u really did was feed off of what he saidtry harder next time! aiight...... Nice Lines..... Dropz-didnt really like ne of dem! Nyte-same here Opener-dropz Punch's-tie(both were weak) Flow-nyte Structure-dropz Vocab-dropz wordplay-nyte Closer-dropz Overall-Dropz Vote-Dropz I feel both verses were weak,both need to elevate n try harder!!........i guess dis was an ok battle! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=98906 ^^ HIT IT UP>>>>>ITS MY FIRST BATTLE IN A FEW MONTHS^^^HEAT |
iight last time uppin fo votez~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~
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uppin fo votez last time !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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muh vote goes to drops, just cuz of that ''fuk god" comment u made!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
vote=dropz |
yo nyte fire up fo some votes i cant ne more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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flow:tie
punches:dropz (barely) personals:dropz vocab:tie structure:tie multis:ehh.... you both need to keep elevatin....this was a kind of weak battle...you guys used to many basic, predictable punches and shit...be more creative and make sure your verse flows nice. drop an honest vote on the link below please and don't forget to poll... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99757 |
yo thanx fo all tha votes and input im workin on elevatin my shit i am tryin different things and seein what sux and what has potential.......
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2 more votes
dont sleep on dis one~!~!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~ |
Vote-Dropz
i cant vote yet !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
much appreciated anyway problem c hey man can you get people to vote on this fo me i got to get off tha comp
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Nice battle....Nyte you had good structure...acouple nice punches...this battle wuz actually pretty even....So i looked for stand-out punches...this wuz one of tha best
Bed wetter emcee better check what bed ya in// I think ya just pissed in michaels bed again// hottt but besides that..I thought Dropz had a consistint verse....I know i can't poll vote...but my vote goes to Dropz |
SmokeEater....
stop freepostin u bitch u wont get ur fukin posts up like that, the only way u will do that is by losin in every battle u go into..... fukin idiot |
goddamnit nyte fire upp fo some votez before this shit gets slept on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Shit, sorry J...i'm grounded for a week and i dont get on much....all you little fuckin cocks who repeat yourselves over and over to try and get more posts shut the fuck up...and dont even post anything unless you have the posts to vote....to those who said I didnt come at him hard enough...I wasnt tryin to, we're pretty tight and I was just comin week but tryin to get everything else including multis, wordplay and structure
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You'r about a fuckin dumbass bud...you dont vote for someone based on raps they've put down in open mic...you vote for them on te battle ;) |
its iight man get on wheneva possible though
dont worry bout this battle cuz its gonna get slept on |
Yeah probly so...might as well just be a topic for these little bitches who freepost and just say shit like Dropz............ or i cant vote...but i vote Dropz....you did kick my ass tho, gj
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not by much man i didnt come that hard
so it was close>.................................................. .............< |
im really fuckin tired of u people sleepin this shit
its almost over~~~~vote~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
hell I really dont give a fuck...just give teh battle to Dropz..he kicked my ass so 2 people over 100 vote for him
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ok heres teh break down....
This battle was very weak and i really didnt wanna read more of them Got bored...so i jut read anyhow.... here it is.... complex:dropz Punches:didnt find that many but dropz personals:dotn even ask flow:both Structure:both Overall vote:dropz ok yeah weak battle....But my vote is dropz... hit this battle up slept on! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97328 |
someone vote so i can battle someone else~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????
leave a link ill check ya shit |
From what I seen, this battle goes to Dropz, he had better wordplay, vocab, and just an overallflow. Nyte fire didn't come as strong.
Vote= DropZ Good shit ya's Return da fava! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99796 |
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