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Diverse 12-18-03 06:38 PM

Diverse vs. The Aftermath
 
12 lines max
no hate, d/r, crew votes
blind spit
30. min to drop after check in
good luck

Harlem's Finest 12-18-03 06:39 PM

Cool....Checking in man....

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Diverse 12-18-03 07:11 PM

let me key something up real quick

eiyo

my first line seizes you tight, steady clenchin your chest
now your going into shock similar to that of cardiac arrest
i've been bestowed with intelligence superior and far beyond
you shouldn't respond, first time experience for you to be sonned
nobody votes for you, only thing you'll get is an online laugh
a horrible aftermath, i'm goin to ya grave and spittin on ya epitaph
so drop what you want, but believe i'll keep it very personal
rehearse your flow, i'm pissin all over your verse like a urinal
this verse already has you killed, i got a toe tag with your name
but you go unnoticed,not even good enough to be my claim to fame
my lyrics diagnose you with third degree burns, lesson learned
now your so depressed i got both of your parents concerned


blah, not my best but whatever, i'm gonna go smoke a cigarrette and i'll check back

Diverse 12-18-03 07:13 PM

it's been thirty minutes though dude....just lettin ya know you need to drop soon or else it leads to disqualification...but no hate just a heads up...one.

Harlem's Finest 12-18-03 07:15 PM

Straight up... I'm serving this kid my basic sig text/
Asked him his a/s/l/ 'n he thought I was bein com-plex/
Think ya ill? Ya small change... I wouldn't give a penny for those thoughts/
For real....This fool tried getting Jin's album thru chinese im-port/
Why you even chose to step ups a bigger mystery than 'J.R's/
Sure... 'Dallas' got some real 'diversity'........ peeps now own cars/
21 and on the net? Outdone by pre-pubescents considered pros/
Painting ya moms nails is the closest you've come to 'tagging' toes/
This kids nothing...plain wack...< 'n thats hardly critisism/
I mean even his household mirrors comply to the witness system/

Diverse 12-18-03 07:25 PM

aight people that's it lets get some votes on this battle, drop your link too if you need the favor returned

Meters 12-18-03 07:30 PM

Punches-Diverse
Flow-Diverse
Structure-Tie i guess
Personals-Diverse (Aftermath needs to encorporate these)
Style- Diverse
Vocab- Diverse

That's my breakdown. Pretty one sided in my humble opinion. Good battle guys. Check this link, it's been slept on for ages.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=Meters

Diverse 12-18-03 07:34 PM

hey meters you forgot to poll, thanks for the honest vote though, still need more votes blah blah blah blah blah blah

Shady16 12-18-03 07:43 PM

meters says

" Punches-Diverse
Flow-Diverse
Structure-Tie i guess
Personals-Diverse (Aftermath needs to encorporate these)
Style- Diverse
Vocab- Diverse "

I couldnt have put it better myself


Vote = Diverse

Repay favour please yall

Punches-Diverse
Flow-Diverse
Structure-Tie i guess
Personals-Diverse (Aftermath needs to encorporate these)
Style- Diverse
Vocab- Diverse

Slim Thug 12-18-03 07:43 PM

Opening: Diverse
Punches: Aftermath (Kinda felt his more)
Personals: Neither
Wordplay: AM
Vocab: AM
Flow: Diverse
Structure: Diverse
Closing: Tie
Overall: Im gonna give it to AM because I felt his hatred more

Shady16 12-18-03 07:45 PM

sorry i ment to put this link

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99777


repay favour :D

Harlem's Finest 12-18-03 07:45 PM

Cool....theres personals there tho man......

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Viscosity 12-18-03 07:53 PM

no hate, but diverse took this easy- lemme break it down
nice battle tho
Open: Diverse
Vocab:Diverse
Punches: Diverse
Closer: Diverse
Structure: Tie
Vote = Diverse..

Viscosity 12-18-03 07:54 PM

o shit my bad
forgot bout the 100 post rule =\
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MOD PLEASE DELETE MY POSTS
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TheProphet777 12-18-03 07:59 PM

ok heres the breakdown.....
Vocab:diverse
Flow:diverse
Complex:diverse
Structure:diverse
Punches:uhh tie
Personalls:diverse
Overall Vote:diverse

Do i need to explain....Diverse took this in every category!

hit up my battle to diverse since ur 300 posts.....Vote honestly!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99337

Diverse 12-18-03 09:11 PM

uppin 1x.........................................drop an honest vote and leave your link if you need something voted on

Diverse 12-18-03 09:47 PM

uppin 2x, don't let this shit get slept on......................honest votes only please, and only vote if you can poll

baby boi 11 12-18-03 09:57 PM

this was a good ass battle although i think Diverse won this shit i really think Aftermath came with it but if u woulda came a little harder than u woulda won

Diverse got this with his wordplay mostly

Diverse 12-19-03 02:44 AM

uppin 3x...............come on this shit is gettin mad slept on..............................................

Harlem's Finest 12-19-03 12:31 PM

Uppin man............................................... .................................................. ...

Diverse 12-19-03 01:58 PM

uppin 4x come on peoples lets get a couple more votes............................................. .................................

Diverse 12-22-03 08:56 PM

damn i've been away for a few days and this battle still isn't finished.....peep this battle and vote (if you can poll) honest votes only....................drop a link if you need a battle to be looked at...

Quelude 12-22-03 09:15 PM

Struc=diverse
person=diverse
metas=diverse
wordplay=diverse

Aftermath I was feeling the agression but your faults are more technical than anything. No hate. Real Talk.

Quelude 12-22-03 09:15 PM

i need the both of you to votes in this thread. Honesty is the BEST policy.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100579

HOLSTER 12-22-03 10:54 PM

flow-tie
personals-diverse
structure-diverse
punches-diverse
overal-diverse

i think diverse took this in every category, but i put tie for flow cuz the aftermath had a ok one too! my vote goes to diverse!!! nice spit to both ya!!!!


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