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.Iknoevel. 12-18-03 06:58 PM

(DOI vs Executives)Cata_Strophix vs B.I. Detained
 
DOI Vs The Executives

15 lines max...no feeding...

Due Date - December 25, Christmas

5votes
no dk
no crew
no hate

All votes must be explained in detail

B.I.Detained 12-18-03 07:09 PM

CHICK CHECK

this cat betta fuckin show
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Cata_Strophix 12-19-03 09:56 PM

chech check .................................................. ................i'm here

i'll drop in a few days got x-mas shoppin to do and shit
./......................................g/l pz..............

B.I.Detained 12-22-03 07:51 PM

Crew battle..so Only Peeps who understand the shit..VOTE

*COUGH* chea..hello..Crew battle? way to rep D.O.I LMAO

We got a Victory Repper..check his Sig..Nitro defines his Glory..
..his RB career says a lot about Strophix..its his Life Story!!!
he tried to Ignore me..but I PM'd this fukin Coward to Show..
..I fucked you up b4 its Finished..like Brandon Lee in the Crow lol
Avater is Rockin Nas!!..cool..but you're STILL-makin no Sense..
..still Reeling bout the Nitro line?? use the Explicit win in Defence!..(LMFAO)
Du realise how Dissed D.O.I. is? this Chump must need Iconic Aid
the Facts av been Layed so Cata' must still think he's gettin Paid
..Fukin Dumbass..
..how'd it come to Pass that theres so many Nmenomics for D.O.I..
I've heard Dicks.Only.Invited n countless others...
...................but your jus a bunch of well Insested Brothers who lie

Cata_Strophix 12-23-03 12:40 AM

kid don't know who he fuckin with.......ask Token he knows...shit i beat him 2x with tha same verse... aka 1liner

NAw playa let me LAUGH MY ASS Off..wack ass bitch
check it..............

You step to me..only to get knockd down like a narkaleptik usein the stairs
shit..i'll knock this kid out faster than a blind def kid.playin musical chairs

i'm gunna show the world what it looks like for a kid to be loosin his hair
it's like i caused u to molest ur rosery- the way i left u.. abusin ya prayers

i'm procliamed insane to change ya frame.from.the way i bring the pain(window frame and pane of glass)
cuz its hard to move forward when your restraind and B.e-I.n Detained

i'll smash ya neck.n.lips- and wreck ya legs.n.hips- with a teck.n.clip[
and disrespect this Bitch and reminis of spilttin tha wig of this executive

u beg.2.live but i beg.2.dif so i cock the 4-5th and let the lead.n.swift
i said 2 quit..u didnt..so i left u like prey swollowed alive. DEAD as Shit

take one second and Rewind it-ur blinded from Wall to wall- confinement(he lost to WalterWall)
how can u beat me when you loose to a FAG and a idiot thats feeble minded(and feeble)
///////////////////////Finsh HIm//////////////////////
Bitch tryin to write like NAS with a Book-a-rhymes behind it
but with his lines it looks like he just aint had the time 2 find it

B.I.Detained 12-23-03 08:31 PM

1st_______________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _________________

Cata_Strophix 12-24-03 09:12 PM

upppin............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................

Quelude 12-26-03 01:36 PM

Whoa! Hot battle boy's...
Struc-tie
wordplay-cata
personal-cata
creativity-tie
multi's-cata (B.I was a lil stretched toward the end.)
sust-tie
original-Tie
overall- cata

Fuck, I didn't even really want to vote on this shit. It was a phenomenal battle.
I have to say that Cata had a small edge toward the end. He really started to act bad.
B.I. came with a remarkable drop but just lacked the complexity that cata pulled off cleanly.
Complexity isn't always good but Cata made a good drop.
Props to both of you Mu fucaks!

Quelude 12-26-03 01:37 PM

Won't let me poll.............................................. .....................

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B.I.Detained 12-26-03 01:50 PM

LMFAO^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
1st_______________________________________________ _______________________

Slim Thug 12-26-03 02:50 PM

Opener: Tie
Punches: Cata
Personals: Cata
Structure: BI
Flow: BI
Vocab: BI
Closer: Cata

Cata took this battle with the personals...I also enjoyed it more...No hate BI just a vote...If yall dont mind return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100884

1liner 12-26-03 08:21 PM

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It 12-27-03 12:19 AM

structure/b.i./cata your structure was poor for elavated...
flow/Cata
style/b.i.
wordplay/both
punches/Cata barely pulled this off.../b.i`s was right with yours...
personals/both...
meta/Cata
multi/both
opener/Cata
closer/both...
vote/Cata but not by much just overall better verse...
nice battle...keep elavating...

Cata_Strophix 12-27-03 09:30 PM

up................................................ .........................it 3-0 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

.::Narcotics::. 12-27-03 11:39 PM

damn clean battle..

u both got different styles.

Bi u said u are ten times more talented then me..
from this verse i dont think your twice x as talented as me

u got wordplay...lots of it..
props..but 1 liner has metas out his ass..that killed u this battle was fukin clean B i no hate or beef..im trna battle u when u down..

Vote- 1 liner he just has better punches i wasnt feelin ya outro bi it was complexed but it was a bit choppy..

B.I.Detained 12-27-03 11:41 PM

Nope you know that aint gonna count..i got more beef w/ you than ne1 on this site
watch out for your diss track
lmao...you gettin sonned you fag

Roots 12-27-03 11:44 PM

Vote= B.I
Clearly He Had Better Punces And Dint Have A Herb Style..
Quote:
We got a Victory Repper..check his Sig..Nitro defines his Glory..
..his RB career says a lot about Strophix..its his Life Story!!!


that was nice

but because this n00b who made this thread will say im hating NOOB i will do this like they do in FL :)

Punches=BI
Flo=BI
Personals=None really
Creativty-BI
Wordplay=Bi

....Plz Can You Click Chrit Vs Tox And Vote Failry Break It down If You dont mind i just got herbs like CD making no sense just make sense and thats cool

Pz.

1liner 12-28-03 12:02 AM

boy ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^thats not a fuckin dick rydin vote that shit will def. be cut the fuck out
.............................what a bitch i'll fuckin merk u 2................................................. .................................

Roots 12-28-03 12:23 AM

no it was not n00b..
lol you talking to me ?
heh go kill yoursef hurb..
go to FL and go dickride there nobody can tel me you won your verse was so weak ROFL
Quote:
You step to me..only to get knockd down like a narkaleptik usein the stairs
shit..i'll knock this kid out faster than a blind def kid.playin musical chairs

B-Kast 12-28-03 03:45 AM

Quick, Simple and no shit...

Punches - B.I,Cata had alot, but B.I's came alot harder

Flow - B.I, obviously...
Personals - B.I, his personals were like one word... ILL
Structure - B.I... obviously, some of other cats bars were stretched
Originality - B.I, personals are more original, because obviously they've never been done, unless the person always gets merked...
Vocab - Cata, jsut had a bit more better vocab...

All Up - Over-All, despite my break-down this was a very close battle, punches came every-where from Cata, but some were played, and seemed forced, and the personals that came from B.I were ill as fuck. He also took flow and structure easily...
So over-all i think B.I took this with harder punches, dope personals, good structure and better flow...

My Vote = B.I.Detained

menolin 12-28-03 10:12 AM

B.I Detained
Crew battle..so Only Peeps who understand the shit..VOTE

*COUGH* chea..hello..Crew battle? way to rep D.O.I LMAO

We got a Victory Repper..check his Sig..Nitro defines his Glory..
..his RB career says a lot about Strophix..its his Life Story!!!
nice personal an punch

he tried to Ignore me..but I PM'd this fukin Coward to Show..
..I fucked you up b4 its Finished..like Brandon Lee in the Crow lol
aiight punch

Avater is Rockin Nas!!..cool..but you're STILL-makin no Sense..
..still Reeling bout the Nitro line?? use the Explicit win in Defence!..(LMFAO)
lol, ill ass personal

Du realise how Dissed D.O.I. is? this Chump must need Iconic Aid
the Facts av been Layed so Cata' must still think he's gettin Paid
lol, nice

..Fukin Dumbass..
..how'd it come to Pass that theres so many Nmenomics for D.O.I.
this the setup for the next punch im guessin

I've heard Dicks.Only.Invited n countless others...
...................but your jus a bunch of well Insested Brothers who lie
meed to come harder in the finisher, but aiight




cata strophix
You step to me..only to get knockd down like a narkaleptik usein the stairs
shit..i'll knock this kid out faster than a blind def kid.playin musical chairs
aiight punch

i'm gunna show the world what it looks like for a kid to be loosin his hair
it's like i caused u to molest ur rosery- the way i left u.. abusin ya prayers
second line was ill, but first was wack

i'm procliamed insane to change ya frame.from.the way i bring the pain(window frame and pane of glass)
cuz its hard to move forward when your restraind and B.e-I.n Detained
nice multies, an ill punch

i'll smash ya neck.n.lips- and wreck ya legs.n.hips- with a teck.n.clip[
and disrespect this Bitch and reminis of spilttin tha wig of this executive
not your best punch

u beg.2.live but i beg.2.dif so i cock the 4-5th and let the lead.n.swift
i said 2 quit..u didnt..so i left u like prey swollowed alive. DEAD as Shit
not much ryhme scheme, but aiight punch

take one second and Rewind it-ur blinded from Wall to wall- confinement(he lost to WalterWall)
how can u beat me when you loose to a FAG and a idiot thats feeble minded(and feeble)
ill ass finisher



aiight,
B.I
structure,
vocab,
an some nice personals,

cata
you got the complexity,
punches,
wordplay


so my overall vote gotta go to cata stophix.


plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99197


///////////////////////Finsh HIm//////////////////////
Bitch tryin to write like NAS with a Book-a-rhymes behind it
but with his lines it looks like he just aint had the time 2 find it

The Jett 12-28-03 08:44 PM

personals- BID....thats all he had...short stubbed hard personals
punches- BID...contineously hard and on key....no rambling
flo- BID....more structured evenly layed up....not choppy at all
meti4's- Cata....very played...none the less there were more
multi's- Cata....good usage of multi's
overall- BID...to me...he jus took the more important categories in a battle

vote- BID

Cata_Strophix 12-28-03 10:28 PM

if a mod sees this plx note that this battle should be closed

awhile ago
anyways great battle Bi
............. detained ........................................

Tupac55 12-28-03 11:06 PM

Structure-tie
wordplay-Cata_Strophix
personal-Cata_Strophix
creativity-tie
multi's-Cata_Strophix although this was close....
original-Tie
overall- Cata_Strophix
Punches...Cata_Strophix

So over all .. this was a close one but... real rec real.. and
Cata_Strophix gets my vote...

Vote not counted. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe

.Iknoevel. 12-29-03 07:47 PM

Opener - Tie
Punches - Cata
Personals - Cata
Structure - BI
Vocab - BI
Closer - Cata
overall - Cata

B.I.Detained 12-29-03 07:53 PM

fuck you"^^^^^^^^^^^
you were just in his crew fag..and were the leader of it...
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vote not counted
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Cata_Strophix 12-30-03 07:27 PM

up......................this should be closed and the mods no but anyways rules are rules even if there droppped after the battle began

Yu Bin SunD 12-30-03 07:40 PM

Hmm Nice Battle I Liked Both Verses

Opener=Cata His Was Funny As Fuck
Structure=Bi.
Punches=Cata His Punches Were Nicer I Liked It Cause It Was Funnier
Metas=Cata He Took The Metas He Was Straight Wit This
Enjoyable=Cata Cause He Had MY Ass Laughin Durin The Verse
Creativity=Bi Just THe Setup Was Creative
Consistency=Cata He Came Punch After Punch
Closer=Bi

Vote=Cata He Took This No Doubt

That's Explained Enuff

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