Word Forward Vs. The Aftermath (PLEASE VOTE!)
 

10 Lines Max.
Due 30 minutes after check in.
I have 30 minutes after you spit.
No D/R Votes.
No Hate Votes.
No Crew Votes.

Good luck.

Man.....we both drop in 30 mins.............................................. .......................

Just PM me when you're ready to drop and i'll pm you back if i'm ready that way we both post same time..

You see your small................. I sit back and im still standing tall
I'd go on about how i'ma rip you.............. but your sig said it all
You're getting a BIG L_____________And I do hate to be snug
But I'll leave your face more spread out than the spacing above
Shit.... You couldn't be number 1 if your last name was McGrady
The Aftermath? Get original Because you're acting rather shady
Now this is nothing personal......... No really....... I want no beef
Because beef would be pointless....... With a man with no meat
You were undefeated.............. Until you fell victim to a non-herb
Your W direction has just hit a curb.... and took the wrong curve

Word Forward's text lyrics leave him behind....whats up with that?/
This kids a joke, ya not that tight 'dawg'...its just 'puppy phat'/
Words forwarded extensively...used so much the letters look worn out/
Weak punches...I'm new but shit....a featherweight bout??/
Like hidden christmas gifts, you'll never 'rip' me but you always 'feel' my 'prescence'/
Ya momma screaming in the shower....Its me.....not herbal essence/
'East to west'...I'm 'casting shadows' on this fool...a human sundial/
Word could empty clips in empty supermarkets and even then, still 'missiles'/
Like peepin ya own face..... ya wins plain impossible kid/
With those played punches ya drops draw more 'blank stares' than ya sig/

Uppin.....

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Opening: WF
Punches: WF
Personals: WF
Flow: WF
Vocab: tie
Wordplay: WF
Structure: WF
Closing: TA
Overall: WF

Merked...

I hate to be a bitch man.....but vote real....you know what wordplay is? Opening......etc...................

nice battle by both cats. both had good punches, and multis, and structure. ta, you came hard and came good for a newb, and like i said you had good multis, and punches.
wf, you had some good punches, multis, and some nice personals.
overall, wf barely edged it out with the personals, and slightly better punches
vote- word forward

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aiight..........

Opener-Wf
Punch's-Wf
Flow-Wf
Wordplay-A
Vocab-Wf
Structure-Wf
Closer-A

Overall-Wf
Vote-Wf

Nice battle!

0n3

Thanks y'all..

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vote WORD
the other cat used a goft/presence line man come on.. word had straight forward punches both had some filler word had a smoother flow, and more consistant so he gets eht vote

HIT MY BATTLE UP

Leave a link homie ^

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Do you actually understand the meaning of it??

Like hidden christmas gifts, you'll never 'rip' me but you always 'feel' my 'prescence'/

It has wordplay/metas/creativity in one line......

straight up...I agree with all the voters 'n votes, but it'd be safe if peeps actually read shit thoroughly....

Still uppin tho....

^ Stop vote swaying.. I could take some of my lines that I guarantee not everyone got and explain further skill into them.. But I have more class than that.

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i felt aftermath more. just more substance

i can't vote but you woulda had mine.

opener: aftermath
flow: aftermath
punchs: aftermath
personals: tie (not much either way)
wordplay: aftermath
closing: aftermath



Jacktheripherbs vs. debaser

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man let me see
overall decent battle
lot of punches come from both sides...i thought word came more with the personals
he got on his name which i thought was somewhat suficient enuff to take this battle

vote=word

big upz to u both

Yo I give this battle to Word Forward.
The Both of you spit it real hot. Structure was also decent. I thin that the edge Word Forward had was the consistency in the strength of his punches. Great battle boys. Vote on the link below!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99542

lol..

Word Forword Left An Ugly Aftermath...Punches Killed Him, Wordplay Sliced Him Up..

One Sided Battle..

You're getting a BIG L_____________And I do hate to be snug
But I'll leave your face more spread out than the spacing above

^^Best Bar From Both Verses..

Vote - WF