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D.Zaster 12-18-03 11:36 PM

Cannabarz vs Freakyjay [-PINK SLIPS-]
 
no dickridin, crew, or hate votes
5 votes to win, u spit first
due tomorrow nite, bannin of IP address if u lose
12 lines max, checkin in..

fuckin check in HERB!

MC mami 12-18-03 11:40 PM

waiting for a good verse to be dropped........................................... ..............................................

freakyjay 12-19-03 12:10 AM

When I spit my lyrics, It's like spitting gold, they got the power to make yours go cold, yo on the microphone i get spitting so fast you'll be standing there watching me trying to keep up while having a heart attack, yeah i crazy on the mic when you spit you make everybody feel lazy. you fucking homo don't take your anger out on me because i fucked your old lady, so the next time you wanna battle me son remember yer not gonna win i second ta none

TheProphet777 12-19-03 12:12 AM

dude ur shit was whack and i didnt even hear cannabarz shit yet......man dont waste good verses on him canna this is a major newb..for real

D.Zaster 12-19-03 12:56 AM

oh........mi.........god.

this kid is ridiculous..when it his text
with a stretched shit..
emmit smith could kick a 7th inning stretch
No elevation, waiting for metaphor bars'
but the pussy ain't goin blow..
like puttin a gun w/ empty bullets in pornstars!
your no har', your text final chapters r wack,
so u need to back off, like chiropractors on wax!
past-experiences, nah..this newbie jus startin
pissed on my flowers,
n this herb just grew from a garden!
this dude is jus starvin, plus i got the skills
freakyjay ain't headin up like seniors w/ viagra pills!

blah...fukkin herb..ain' even comin hard this time..let the votes roll in.

AUSTISDABOSS 12-19-03 12:57 AM

Freaky jay got his ass kicked, no doubt in my mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant vote though srry

Slim Thug 12-19-03 01:09 PM

Opening: Can
Flow: Can
Vocab: Can
Punches: Can
Personals: Neither
Structure: Neither
Closing: Can
Overall: can merked this nigga but fix that structure can ;)

Read new rule.. Vote gone -Token

eMiNeM MiNis 12-20-03 05:44 PM

M E R K E D

hahahaha
Freakyjay got torn up
Can got this in ery category and didnt even try..........................damn................. ..........hahahahaaha

Explain your votes -Token

D.Zaster 12-20-03 08:23 PM

upping...someone needs to pollvote.

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t-west 12-20-03 08:32 PM

Blocked IP address for jay lol, and cannabarz does it again!!!
lol, man, i gotta learn how 2 rap like dat, i cant fynd a style dat ppl fukkin are feelin on dis site. anyways, merked in every category, other guys was whack, espically hsi structure.

Vote- Cannabarz

If ya can, hit me up wit honest votes in the battles in my sig plz. thx.

Read new rule, Vote Gone - Token

Petrafy 12-20-03 10:04 PM

omfg this freakjay fuck is wacker than my worst shit thas awful.....canna merked this fuck so bad thas funny as hell...explanation- cmon theres no need mann

Vote gone.. Explain your votes no matter what -Token

OneMeanSaltine 12-20-03 10:12 PM

His structure was in paragraph for which is off because you would never write a song and spit it like that, pluss you need to show where your bars end. Neither battle verse was especially touching or good, though, but I give the vote to Canna cuz his was all together better than Freaky's...both need to elevate, even though it sounds like Cann was just droppin enough to win...Ill check more of your shit out before I judge, yo.

SyaNidal 12-20-03 10:59 PM

merking without a doubt by cannabarz n his verse wus weak (becauz he didnt wanna waste good punches etc on the fucking herb) but yea.... cannabarz took flow opener closer metas punches i didnt really see personals or multis or wordplay and probly cauz cannabarz didnt wanan waste his tyme or rhyme son this herb....
My VOte-Cannabarz.... ThanX.... Return the favour(dorp a honest vote on my battles in sig....) not vote for me HONEST vote sonly please...
Peac3__________----------------_______________........................

Crooked-Comical 12-20-03 11:04 PM

Opening: Can
Flow: Can
Vocab: Can
Punches: Can
Personals: None
Structure: Can
Closing: Can



REPAY FAVOUR PLEASE


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...886#post1003886

Read new voting rules.. Vote gone -Token

prophacyz 12-30-03 02:49 PM

this was quite a one sided battle.

can, you didn't even spit ya best shit, and still merked tha fuck outta this nigga. oh well.
freaky, too bad you weren't on this site long enough to make a name for youself...

D.Zaster 12-31-03 12:02 AM

upping for votes..

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D.Zaster 01-02-04 08:52 PM

re-upping for votes.....

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LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1 01-02-04 09:00 PM

wwwwwwwwwwooooooooooowwwwwwwwww

ok freakyjay it was nice knowing ya cuz u got MERKED!
opener-can
closer-can
punches-can
flow-can
structure-can
enjoyment-can
EVERYTHING ELSE- CAN
can didnt try n still had erything needed to win............................................fre aky jay no need to elevate cuz ur banned wun...............returnt he favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...............ill poll in this once i get 100 posts

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

TRIBAL 01-02-04 09:03 PM

freakjay verse

When I spit my lyrics, It's like spitting gold, they got the power to make yours go cold, yo on the microphone i get spitting so fast you'll be standing there watching me trying to keep up while having a heart attack, yeah i crazy on the mic when you spit you make everybody feel lazy. you fucking homo don't take your anger out on me because i fucked your old lady, so the next time you wanna battle me son remember yer not gonna win i second ta none

not bad but try to work on your structure no flow no pounches pulled that would hurt...no personals

cannabars verse

this kid is ridiculous..when it his text
with a stretched shit..
emmit smith could kick a 7th inning stretch
No elevation, waiting for metaphor bars'
but the pussy ain't goin blow..
like puttin a gun w/ empty bullets in pornstars!
your no har', your text final chapters r wack,
so u need to back off, like chiropractors on wax!
past-experiences, nah..this newbie jus startin
pissed on my flowers,
n this herb just grew from a garden!
this dude is jus starvin, plus i got the skills
freakyjay ain't headin up like seniors w/ viagra pills!

better verse but expected more
better overall harder pounches
better structure and flow but could use work
better metas

overall vote goes to cannabars for better category

vote my battles in sig peace

TRIBAL 01-02-04 09:05 PM

yo it says i've polled voted but didn't get it checked dawg

outtie

read and vote battles in sig

i took the time

you should to

(i think this text is enough but)

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waiting 60 secounds

........60

Eki 01-02-04 09:26 PM

We all know Can killed this J person. That could have been one of the worst things iv read in front lines.
Can get this with punches, flow,personals......Structure was a bit errr errr. But good work man.

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress


Its getting slept on for ages

Cuthroat 01-02-04 10:59 PM

well Jay did a true freestyle i respect him for that but Can took it with better flow and punches. Jay you just need to come with harder punches.

OniGod 01-02-04 11:05 PM

Openere = C
Punches=C
Vocab=C
Multis=C
Creativty=C
Personsls = None
Closer=C

this battle was blah but the other guy freakyjay was wack as fuck i think anyways you both were lacking hard hitting punches good by freakyjay but of course its only ur nick that is getting baned u can come back after

Pz.

OniGod 01-02-04 11:07 PM

the fuck this poll closed for?.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................................

D.Zaster 01-02-04 11:26 PM

Don't worry..once I get the five-votes from people over 100 posts then im' going to send this to Feeble Minded to get this kid banned and me declared the winner.

PaDDyMaN 01-03-04 02:23 AM

Canabarz got ruled.....LOL HAAAAAA did i surprise anyone?
Opening: Can
Flow: Canabarz
Vocab: Canabarz
Punches: Canabarz
Personals: None
Structure: None
Closing: Canabarz
FreakyJay you need to work on PUNCHES BIG TIME, its ok since your new that u dont know. But please work on structure as well, set it up nice and pretty so that no one will HATE your verse right off the bat, get more complicated, refrain from MOTHER jokes and dont get into the GAY jokes either nigga that shit jus dont fly
Canabarz what can I say you won, Ill check out your next battle when you get challenged good verse
VOTE CANABARZ

krakajack 01-03-04 03:36 AM

yea this was an obvious one. cannibarz by 10 miles. i wish i could poll vote but i can't.. but don't listen to em freakyjay. that shit was wac but stick to it and ull improve eventually, although u def got a lot of work to do.

D.Zaster 01-03-04 05:17 PM

upping for votes...

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Ambitious 01-03-04 05:31 PM

wow........easily said? cann wins....bye bye freaky jay.....
do i have to explain!?!?!?!
punches vocab metas struct personals blah blah blahb cann's were ectremly better
vote - cann

PostMan 01-03-04 05:41 PM

This wasnt much of a battle. cannibarz took this... i liked his punches actually.. that back off line was nice...... pornstar line was coo. im liking.
freaky jay. umm i didnt see one quotable in your verse. it was more like ryhming shit talk.(you wanna stay away from that).

vote-cannibarz


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