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.:FreemaN:. Vs TRUE*D
aight....
these have been agreed on..... RULES ____________________________________ 10 - 15 lines no hate, etc etc etc u spit first must checkin spit 10 mins after both have checked in ____________________________________ here we go... good luck |
come on man......
this is where we battle..... check n drop man :) good luck 100 characters 100 characters |
here we go yo yo yo check it
Clap your handz everybody, if u got what it takez, cause im TRUE*D and Im on the mic and premier's on the brakez// I used 2 guzzle '40's and own a beat up caddy, since the hood still love me I'll turn up the heat daddy// Im about 2 slap rapperz around and bruise the game just cause iv got the game// Bitch u don't know the half bout me I bring it straight 2 ur chest ask ur staff about me// Im just a lil bit younger but im a hole lot wiser, I might advise ya or I might POLVERISE ya// I can visit any city, get respect in the street// While you alone in ur room, shook 2 death of the streets I'll take a second 2 speak but i keep my weapon in reach// Tell these people sumthing they don't know about me! |
ok then...
a dnt think quoting '8-Mile' lines is gona help you...... but good luck newayz...... ima key mine up now.... check it |
here boy da last lil bit sayin tell them sufing they dont kno bout me was jus outta 8mile n it werent in da rap, check4urself bitch
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your the biggest newb on this site, didnt even wana state the rules --
this verse is gona leave you lyin like a kicked you in the family jewels -- a even had to tell you where to find our battle in the 'Front Lines' -- you cudnt even find the place to lay down your severely dire rhymes -- ive had to direct you so far, when a say jump you say how high -- well im not sayin jump, im sayin fuck off, so goodbye -- your verse is gona be terrible, can imagine it now ur gona get merked -- when the votes come in and im 5-0 up, u'll see ur rhymes ent worked -- im gona let you go the full fifteen lines, a only want the ten -- im gona end this like a prayer, cuz everyone agrees, amen -- |
there we go.....
lets get some votes on this......... good luck.............................................. .............................. |
Yo, I know I can't poll vote...But i'll give sum feedback...
First off, True you actually tried to have some type of structure...but Ya still lost....you did better than mine and your battle though.. Freeman your verse wuz good....I think me and you are about on tha same level...I wanna battle you sumtime in tha near future... good luck to both |
ya'll was aight but freeman got u though
i really cant say nothing i havent even battled yet but ya know im still wait'n |
dis was a gud hard fought battle, but freeman was using same shit all da time n tru*d didnt diss freeman really but i think tru won by a bit
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what the fuck....... ur opinon, thats fine
get sum real voters in here! uppin #1 .................................................. ................................ |
can you go back and poll vote on my battle free?? You've already voted
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99890 ..................... |
Freesman took this because he had a better structure. Not only that, but his punches hit harder. The opener had me sayin' "what?!". But you shaped up, and got enough to beat him, not by much though.
Vote: Free |
thanks Ape......
u had to read the 'Bitch-Slapped' call out thread he made to understand the opener... thanks for the vote newayz :) |
uppin #2..............................................
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yo freeman got this for the simple fact that he battled instead of spittin an open mic... i'll break it down anyway though..
punches- free- you gota hit in a battle true'd personals...neither...look up what those are guys they help alot flow- free ..your sturucture <--if i could spell is fucked up there tru'd hit the wackness center before your next battle my vote free..one..hit this up this an opinion even if you can't vote peace.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...621#post1000621 |
yo fool i had u beat in da first line! ur 2 first linez were whack! ur a shit rapper but u cant admit it fool!
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and ur tlkin to me? afta u spit that shit....
ok woteva.....jus shh and let the votes come in man.... dont bitch about it..... |
wth....that whole verse was taken from the 8 mile soundtrack(True's verse)
even if you did make that up. you still lose. try bein original. and ya know wut? biting is a crime. elevate~ vote-Freeman, props for ur verse, at least you made urs up...lol peACE |
freeman had bout every subject especailly punches and flow.The only ones hit didnt have is the ones they tied on lik vocab and wordplay.Still nice verse from both elevation still need to both sides Good luck to ya'll!!!
Vote:FREEMAN plz hit tha battle in my sig with an honest vote ~1~ |
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