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Ambitious 12-19-03 06:54 PM

-Technician- vs Crooked-Comical
 
rule:laugh:

10 lines
check in now
u spit now
no recycling, feeding
no c,h,d/r votes.........
check in......
good luck
peace

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 06:57 PM

Alright ,

Ill Type My Verse Right Now

Ill Be Done Very Quick

Then You spit






!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

peace

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 07:09 PM

Yo ,

No matter Where Or How I Rap , Im Still The Best //
In Person, On The Internet , In Audio or Text //
Bitch your Just A Bitch , You Cant Put Me To The Test //
You Got A Better Chance Drawin A Circle On An Etch-A-Sketch //
Dont Even Try To Rap No More , Your ~Speech is Wrong~ //
Youll Get " Smoked " Worse Then A Bong In The Hands Of ~Cheech And Chong~ //
In Your Sig It says " Ghetto Sig " But Your From Miami You Fool //
Only " Projects " You Know Of Are The Ones From School ! //
Put That In Your Pipe And Smoke It , Your Gettin Defeated //
And If Thats To Hard For You To Fukin Swallow , Then Eat it //

Ambitious 12-19-03 07:20 PM

I aint got nothin but a keystyle for this fuckin Crooked Comic
You belong in the poetry league the way you cookin' sonnets
Dats a battle verse? vocab lacks you need hooked on phonics
Ya words would be ill but I doubt you hold books who vommit!
My Wins are On Stereo, you'll never get one it in Windsor Ontario
Nationwide flurrys ho, sorry we basically leave Canada buried yo
Only 4 more lines to try n show, symptoms that u dont fit in hoe
Control your bars? no, you'd need to be on the Simpsons as Moe
Your shit's real comical ass, you Talk shit like Im'a hail to ya fast
Faggot I burn ya drama ta ash, K-Spratt jus the alias of ..Bash..

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 07:23 PM

Good Spit Man This Was A Good Battle


Uppin for Some votes From Serious voters

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Peace

Ambitious 12-19-03 07:23 PM

good verse..................upppIn this bitch//////////////////////////

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100.

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 07:34 PM

UPPIN FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK KKKKKKKKKK

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 07:46 PM

COMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
ONNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
YALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
DONTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT SLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEP

-->FreeBasE<-- 12-19-03 08:23 PM

honest voting............................................ ..

flow-tie
metas-tech had a fe mor
punches-crooked really
wordplay-tech
vocab-none
open-teck was wack...none
close-crook

so tech.. honest votin man...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98212

hit that 4 me wit honest votes...

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 08:33 PM

UPPIN********************************************* ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ***********

The Jett 12-19-03 08:36 PM

I can poll.....not a 100 posts plus Im in Tech's crew but.....

wordplay- Crook
Punch- Tech
structure- Crook
meti4's- Crook
multi's- none
enjoyed- Crook

vote- Crook but i couldnt poll vote even if i had 100 posts
Crook**u'd be alot better if u killed all the self hype also**

Crook-cus only he can**Hit my link's up wit sum honest votes-even if u can't vote...opinions like this are ok as well...

pc*1*

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 08:38 PM

K thanx man


that sucks how it couldnt count

oh well thanx anyways ...

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GaZeeBo 12-19-03 08:41 PM

aight yo tech wins this for better flow,wordplay and personals
my vote-technician

hit these up with votes-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99309

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99542

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 08:53 PM

UPIIIINNNNNNN

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Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 09:07 PM

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ****

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 09:19 PM

VOTE COME ON MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

.:FiorZ:. 12-19-03 09:42 PM

Crooked chemical took this shit....his punches hit harder....
was a close battle tho and both y'all had nice verses....
no hate but i think punches won this 4 crooked....

both y'all stay up.....................peace

peep ma audio engagement battle with honest votin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99073

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 09:46 PM

THANX MAN ...... UPPIN

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Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 09:51 PM

UPPIN********************************************* ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** *********

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 10:04 PM

UPPINNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mc aines 12-19-03 10:19 PM

wordplay- Crook
Punch- Tech
structure- Crook
metas- Crook
multi's-
enjoyment- Crook

crook you cleaned the floor wit dis dawg except tech had a few harder hittin punches that i liked.

vote-crook

brian2488 12-19-03 10:19 PM

i liked the battle guys, i would vote if i had 100 posts but unfortunately i don't.. = ( .... both of your flows, structures, and vocab were good.... but i think Tech away with the match.. he'd get my vote

Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 10:22 PM

ALRIGHT THANX YALLL

UPPINNNNN

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Crooked-Comical 12-19-03 10:57 PM

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TheProphet777 12-19-03 11:56 PM

yo heres the breakdown.....No hate just honesty

Opener:Tech
Closer:Couldnt find one
FLow:tech
Structure:tech
Personals:Tech
punches:both
Overall Vote:tech

Close battle in a way..If you had more punches Crook

My vote is Tech....

Up my slept battle please!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97328

Jo-we 12-20-03 12:12 AM

nice battle....

I liked both verses

Opener: technition
Punches: Technition
Personals: technition
flows: tie (both had good flow)
meta's: i didn't see too many
Closer: Technition

I thought this wuz a close battle....I think Technition just took ya with experience....but I see a good future for Crooked.....

hit this battle up...tha kid didn't even have structure....I wanna actually get sum close battles in....so if yall could poll vote on it..it'd be greatly appreciated...by tha way..sorry i can't poll vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99890

Ambitious 12-20-03 01:40 AM

hmm.......ya'll mafuckas is d/r or suttin........this kid sux.........no offense...........elevate that verse was elemtary garbage........

pz

Ambitious 12-20-03 11:04 AM

uppinm............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............................

Freeman 12-20-03 11:18 AM

not gona draw it out unneccesarily.....

technician wins with better flow, wordplay and personals............

vote - technician

Ambitious 12-20-03 11:33 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by -Technician-
uppinm............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .............................
:wtf:

Crooked-Comical 12-20-03 12:07 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by -Technician-
hmm.......ya'll mafuckas is d/r or suttin........this kid sux.........no offense...........elevate that verse was elemtary garbage........

pz



BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH you suck buddy

FUCK YOU

Feeble Minded 12-20-03 01:29 PM

crooked criminal lfor uppin to much #@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@


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