Crooked Comical Vrs KrakaJack
 

Alright Man

10 Bars

You Spit First

Peace

i thought 5 bars tho, which means 10 lines. sorry, thas all i have time for. i'll spit in a min. g'luck

yeah alright 5 bars is kool


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Good luck

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lil tagger this aint ur battle man what u talkin bout im waitin for krakajack to spit

peace

lil tagger set up anotherbattle for us if uw ant

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i thought krakajack wanted 2 battle mee??*****
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mah fault denn........ill watch*******
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im settin one up 4 me n u crooked comicall************
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sorry it took so long, i had something i had to do. this was really a quick key tho:

i'll 'rake u through' faster than gardeners 'scrapin in the grasses'
ur not fantastic, ohly time ur 'name is true' ius wen ur 'rappin in italics'
like bargin animal catchers, u can't have cats on lock cuz ur 'bars r too weak'
u off ur feet cuz mixin drugs with beer is the only way ur 'bars r E-lite' (elite, think about it)
like forgetful generals, only way u won't lose ur battles is if they 'ever get slept on'
only reason ur tight is ur still a virgin so u have 'never sonned no one'
only reason u touch mics is workin at mcdonalds so to claim ur 'super nice is jus lies'
cuz the only way u wrap (rap) like biggie is wen u 'super size my french fries'
like 'liftin a hollow spleen' im *crakin up* comical with all the 'wisdom i speak'
cuz like 're-giften on halloween' against me ur best strategy 'is to re-treat' (retreat, get it?)

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uppin for votes

i think u have to spit first :D

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My bad man what the fuck is wrong with me lol ... sorry i was thinkin this was another battle i got 2 goin at once..ill spit right now

Alright,

I Dispatch Words That Bash And This Bitch Is Gettin Smashed //
This Battle Is Like The Outcome Of A Blind Person Dressing Themselve, A Missmatch //
You Can kiss Ass And Suck Dick And Still Wont Get A Vote //
Ill Mute Your Shit , Im Hip Hops Fuckin Remote //
I ~Run The Game~, I Got A ~Ton Of Fame~ //
I ~Won Before You Came~ , Your ~Dumb Do You Know My Name~ //
Its Crooked Comical You Bitch , Say My Name But Dont Wear it Out , Your Poor //
And To Broke To Afford Buying me A New one If You Say It once More //*
You Never Know What in Store When You Battle Me , im The Champ //
Your Ryhmes Are So Crap When You Say Em You Get Shit Cramps //


*Thats My name Dont Wear It Out or you gotta Buy me A New one ( lil Kid Saying )

ite, vote it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Crook took this 1 easily kraka i didnt enjoy ur shit it got boring u had 1 good line:
cuz the only way u wrap (rap) like biggie is wen u 'super size my french fries'

anyway heres ma breakdown
punches:crook
Personals:crook
opener:crook (didnt get urs kraka)
Finisher:Crook he had 1 dope finish
Boredom:Kraka

Holla

wat didn't u get?

i'll 'rake u through' faster than gardeners 'scrapin in the grasses'
ur not fantastic, ohly time ur 'name is true' ius wen ur 'rappin in italics'

his name is crookid-comical. italics r crookid so im sayin if he raps in italics his name would be tru cuz his raps r "comical" aka wac

im thinkin u prob didn't get a lot of my punches, really don't care tho. still uppin.

Krakajack dont make excuses man its all good


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Lol aines, he didnt take it easily lmao. I have to go wit crooked here tho, His structure was better and the multies n wordplay really did make a difference, even tho I felt that kraka had the better punches

Punches by Kracka
cuz the only way u wrap (rap) like biggie is wen u 'super size my french fries'
cuz like 're-giften on halloween' against me ur best strategy 'is to re-treat' (retreat, get it?)

Those were funny as hell, but i think ur multies need work, close battle tho, kracka gots talent lol, keep workin hard man.

vote- comical

i gotta go wit krakajakc on this one better overall verse his metas, multias, n punches hit harder....
there wusnt no personals in this battle at all that i noticed...
crooked had better wordplay n thats about it his structure wus poor flows were equally as good
My VOte-KrakaJack... dorp a honets vote on the battles in my sig errybody.... ThanX....
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can u put the vote in the poll please, i would vote on ur battle but according to the rules at rapbattles.com im not aloud to cuz i don't have enough posts. still uppin anyway.

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crooked loses for excessive uppin. good job, dumbass. . . . . . . . . @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@