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the moment
My freestyle
The rains falling from the sky of black abis U can never think of nothing as depressing as this Cus its dark and misty like ur soul inside But u gotta march on like its gays pride* Looking at the photographs of broken dreams But looking back then it was more fun then it seams Memories of broken promises and unfaithfulness tears ur heart Just trying to stand up but the world around just falls apart People killing each other because they’re scared of their own reality President bush killing soldiers and fighting over nothing that’s real hell to me Religon is worse its like worship us or ur end up going to hell But have they gone to hell and back? No So how the fuck can they tell Every rapper has his own style and I am always ok with that Its just when u make a profit off everything from mineral water to baseball caps But I will take the fifth and be quite for a moment Another child was born but no one to own it So tonight sit in ur bed and think of those with none Cus before this moment ends u could be just like it son * figure of speach i aint gay and u rnt either unless u really r |
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drop some feedback people
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pretty good, but it is more of a freestyle then an om. this is pretty much u telling the worlds problems and shit and how u see them. some of the rhymes didnt really rhyme lol but none the less made sense. it was pretty good but i say u should make it a little longer and put some more emotion into it. dig deep down and stuff and find wut the hell is really bugging u.
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not bad. better then yo utha shit. nom sizlaxin? werd
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*Moved to freestyles *
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This was iight... nothin special... keep with it man
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NOT BAD, I'M SICK OF DIS DEEP SHIT DOE..I MEAN A POETIC JOINT WITH A MESSAGE IS AIGHT EVERY ONCE IN AWHILE, BUT IT SEEMS LIKE CATS IS FORCEN IT NOW TO GET RESPECT FROM THE HEADS. BOTTOM LINE IS DOE IF YOU AINT FAMOUS OR WELL RESPECTED NOBODY GON' TAKE YA MESSAGE SERIOUS IF YOU JUST DROPPIN ON THE INTERNET, SO IF YOU WANT YA SHIT TO BE HEARD AND TAKEN SERIOUS YOU GON' HAVE TO SHOW MOFUCKAS YOU FUH REAL AND LET ME FEEL MORE EMOTION THAN AN EMPTY PIECE WITH SUBJECT MATTER THATS ALL BEEN COVERED BEFORE.
"Every rapper has his own style and I am always ok with that Its just when u make a profit off everything from mineral water to baseball caps" ^^ FEELIN DAT LINE THOUGH...SOMETHIN ORIGINAL I AINT REALLY HEARD ANYBODY TOUCH ON. |
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