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Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG vs DRAG~ON
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10-12 lines.. No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting check in dogg Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-03-04 at 02:46 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-04 01:47 PM.
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DRAG~ON has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-04 01:47 PM.
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Da King of Punchlines yo ass is trippin
Da King don't mean how many times yo ass was hittin my opener is eNUFF SAID take ya ass 2 bed u lyrics BULLshit dats why i attack when i RED(read) im taking blows 2 da head no i mean my dick so like 'REVLON' my nigga i 'stick' ya 'lip'(s) make hit backflips wit tactics like gymnastics metaphorically givin u da boot dawg enjoy ya last trip smash diss mash diss cat like IDAHO POTATOES mold n fold every bar ya spit as if its Playdo told u i was rusty u believed get da fuck outta here bitch nigga i call diss battle CRYSTAL kuz da out cum CLEAR Nuff Said is shown in his From slot |
everybody on rv hate's UR TEXT da ppl want dis fag gon.....
look at ya "s/n" u like da "CROSS DRESS" n get ya "drag-on" beef with da king dem heata's a ring all ppl by u a target... y do u use em again all dem bar's u "recycle" is "garbage"... all key'ed dickhead but i could write,so whut if u could fight.. tired of ppl like u held a gun so now "day" fukkin "suge-night" (day..they) play hard...but a box n a grave yard where shook g's is stored drag's a scary dude ya'll "bush" a neva send dis "pussy" da war dis guy is just sweet..fukk it ima tuck then ride with da heat.. fukk "dreamn bout fixin easter eggs" u gon "die in ya sleep" drag suck da fukk just dont kno,y's he discussin his slow flow 10-7 n da only reason u beat r-rated was bcuzz of a no show |
yo we uppin diss battle 4 sum
honest votes ya |
Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
everybody on rv hate's UR TEXT da ppl want dis fag gon..... look at ya "s/n" u like da "CROSS DRESS" n get ya "drag-on" haha nice start... beef with da king dem heata's a ring all ppl by u a target... y do u use em again all dem bar's u "recycle" is "garbage"... ha nice hit..... all key'ed dickhead but i could write,so whut if u could fight.. tired of ppl like u held a gun so now "day" fukkin "suge-night" (day..they) eeeh not feeling it.... play hard...but a box n a grave yard where shook g's is stored drag's a scary dude ya'll "bush" a neva send dis "pussy" da war good dis guy is just sweet..fukk it ima tuck then ride with da heat.. fukk "dreamn bout fixin easter eggs" u gon "die in ya sleep" preety good drag suck da fukk just dont kno,y's he discussin his slow flow 10-7 n da only reason u beat r-rated was bcuzz of a no show weak ending, personal none the less but wasnt a hard hit.... 7.5 *preety decent punches in there.....* ( we should battle) Da King of Punchlines yo ass is trippin Da King don't mean how many times yo ass was hittin wasnt feeling this..... my opener is eNUFF SAID take ya ass 2 bed u lyrics BULLshit dats why i attack when i RED(read) ok im taking blows 2 da head no i mean my dick so like 'REVLON' my nigga i 'stick' ya 'lip'(s) eeeh weak...... make hit backflips wit tactics like gymnastics metaphorically givin u da boot dawg enjoy ya last trip ok that was better...... smash diss mash diss cat like IDAHO POTATOES mold n fold every bar ya spit as if its Playdo repeat? ok hit but played concept.... told u i was rusty u believed get da fuck outta here bitch nigga i call diss battle CRYSTAL kuz da out cum CLEAR better ending the punchline... but some of ya bars wasnt hitting hard ya opener was completly weak and creativeness was a factor here... kepp elevating man, u is getting better..... NO HATE DOGS 4-REAL..... 6.0 |
Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
da king won...drag on's verse did exactly that...dragged on...it made no sense...u wouldve been betta of just postin da first 2 lines... gave it to da punchline king Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Aight Uppin 4 Some More Votes
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uppin 4 more votes
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Voted For: DRAG~ON
dragon took dis by far in my eyes the rhymes was nice as shyt tha flow was HOT! n the punchlines were tight as hell. tha vocab coulda jus bin a lil bit betta but..... vote=dragon |
Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
[font=arial narrow]Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG gets my vote... His punches were harder than DRAG~ON's... tha flow was good..didnt fall a littler or nothin.. And tha wordplay was nice... DRAG~ON yo shit was good to...punches could've been a little harder & you would've gottin my vote..yo flow was pretty decent...and a nice vocab.. |
okay uppin 4 some more votes ya'll
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Voted For: Da PUNCHLiNEKiNG
yo this nigga came hard and tight i like his style nice lines myan |
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