"One Thing" trackjack w/Doomsday
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Track's called "One Thing" trackjack w-Doomsday. There's 2 verses. Enjoy. BTW - there's no links down here in the designated links section since I leave feed on tracks on a daily basis. :thumbup: |
listenin as I type.. beat is kinda weird, first verse, flows fine to the beat, but seems like it lacks energy or something, like its takin all the emcees energy to keep the flow moving, not horrible, just seemed like it could be improved with some more practice- chorus, or singing is arright, not my type of shit, but it dont make it bad... second verse i think sounded alot more comfortable than the first, vocal range was better, prescence was slightly improved- i dunno what it is, maybe its just me... iunno.. not my type of song but it wasn't bad either... keep droppin.
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^^tanks.
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I enjoyed it, i thought, with your voice and style, this track was perfect for you, you carry yourself well on this beat, delivery was on point too, you have a very different style, creative too, its refreshing to hear honestly, i liked the hook as well, again, some different type of ish going on in this track, smooth sounding verses, keep doin your thing..1
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Uuuppers agian.
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aight listening.......
ur voice is nice... good quality as always... you fit perfectly with the beat..although I like hearin ur shit over a beat thats a bit "harder" more powerful...u feel me? lyrical content is good ha! in ur drop i spotted a lot of lines where your using the h8ed "net-flow", but in general good rhymescheme ]good shit man....drop was solid |
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Thanks man. Net flow? Where? :shoot:[netflow] |
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*listening* werd. dope beat. nice flow bro i dont mind ya style. werd the chorus is dope that bitch kinda sounds like MJ. lol. aiiight.....shes still singing. shit, wish the bitch would shut up now. shes hoggin the track. alright i hear you your back on it. lyrics are pretty good. good delivery like i said i like your style. good shit bro. just make ya verses longer. show off ya lyrcism a bit more. werrd.
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^^thanks man. Actualyl, she's not really hoggin the track - I jumped onto hers, lol. It's her featuring me (if anything). I snuck into her pair of 8's and it was all good...;)
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