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19. Phil Benjamin (2-2) vs. 20. Ace Heratoga (1-1)
G.B.A Gimmick Battle Association Dead Celebrity Picture Battles This week, we will be resurrecting the lives of many great individuals. Diss your opponent on their picture and on the life behind that picture. Do your research and be witty. Good Luck. ============  Phil Benjamin as Johnny Carson vs.  Ace Heratoga as Kurt Cobain ============ Verses Due Monday at 12:00AM Pacific 10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit Biting = Ban Feeding = -2 Votes Swaying = DQ Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links Votes Due Wednesday Night New Battles Up Thursday Morning For Full Rules Click Here |
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check check... just match whoever
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ight trus this is dif this week
dear kurt, you maybe a legend, but now ya band aint holding up ya name last time anything blew up for you....the cops where cleaning fragments of ya brain johnny'll end the grunge era, my uppercuts'll put you to rest i'll put out a nirvana, that'll have cortney love telling me to cut her a check i hate you along with the world, so just kill yaself kid but you really ended yaself with the heat faster than chicago did i'll just tell the true facts, that'll close ya tomb when you said it smells like teen spirit, .....you just ment ya expirence's in the boys locker room you look dirt poor, in high school everyone bullied this slut so then you made long hair a grunge style, ..............only cause you couldn't afford a hair cut idk how you got a deal, cause your apparoch was really funny singing how much ya parents an others hated you would make some money man end it, we don't care how much you wanna see the gate's so april 5th '94, was probably the best day you lived up to date from johnny |
ayo imma need till tomorrow... workin on 3 week long MLA research paper that i put off untill last minute... i got you though phil... dope drop homie
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Here's some feed for ya:
you maybe a legend, but now ya band aint holding up ya name last time anything blew up for you....the cops where cleaning fragments of ya brain lol, nice way to open, wordplay was good johnny'll end the grunge era, my uppercuts'll put you to rest i'll put out a nirvana, that'll have cortney love telling me to cut her a check fresh concept, well executed, good shit i hate you along with the world, so just kill yaself kid but you really ended yaself with the heat faster than chicago did alright, but the setup to this really didn't go with the punch i'll just tell the true facts, that'll close ya tomb when you said it smells like teen spirit, .....you just ment ya expirence's in the boys locker room ehh, like the punch, i thought this was kinda gay you look dirt poor, in high school everyone bullied this slut so then you made long hair a grunge style, ..............only cause you couldn't afford a hair cut too obvious of a flip. For shit like this, u gotta brainstorm more reasons for why he possibly has that long hair until u get somethin' really witty n' creative idk how you got a deal, cause your apparoch was really funny singing how much ya parents an others hated you would make some money concept here was good, but u didn't word it well. Just say the punchline to yaself without the setup n' hear how it sounds. Its a bit awkward. man end it, we don't care how much you wanna see the gate's so april 5th '94, was probably the best day you lived up to date ehh, this was too simple of a punch really, wasn't effective Phil, u started nice my man, but u really fell off after that. A few concepts which were too simple, but most were aight. Some of them u didn't develop enough and went for the obvious way to use them rather than bein' more creative. Better than last week for sure tho man, good shit P.S., you really should start addin' multies in ur setups. Doesn't take long n' makes ur verse read much better. |
Phil Benjamin WINS 3-2
Ace Heratoga NO-SHOWS 1-2 |
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