A Song from DOA Called "Tha Deadliest Trio"
 

::music intro::


::T.C.K.::
cock back and blow// switch up tha flow// tha deadliest trio knockin at your door// we tha illest and tha newest in tha rap game// been through alot but now we earinin our rap fame// cause we sympathetic poetic thugs// but if you fuck wit us we'll drop u wit our slugs// we gotta enough heat to leave you lookin like fifty// 1 shot through tha face, 7 at your chest and 1 straight through your pinky// niggaz try to come at us with their best// shit aint happenin, cause we come prepared wit 2 gats and a vest// we tha best// straight outta tha west// reppin tha CPT// even when i release a hit record on MTV// still smokin tha weed// still runnin tha streets// shit aint nothin change still makin tthem beats// DOA records straight from tha hood... we don' fuck around// so sit back and listen to this origanal gangsta sound...

::hook - J-Day::
Tha Deadliest Trio Up in tha game
We now here and we claimin our fame
U wanna see our gangsta, then test ya luck
Cause we dem type of niggaz dat dont give a fuck
Tha Deadliest Trio Up in tha game
We now here and we claimin our fame
U wanna see our gangsta, then test ya luck
Cause we dem type of niggaz dat dont give a fuck

::J-Day::
Fuck whachu heard J-Day's claimin spots
Im da big bossman and Im callin shots
Watch ur back. if u got... beef wit me
If its beef wit me then its death u'll see
We'll have a nigga paranoid for tha rest of his life
We'll have a nigga home wit his kidz and his wife
Me, T.C.K., M.B.P.... Tha New Breed
Give us ur bong and a bag of weed
We takin over... So just stop where u at
Whatever? Ok bitch... Choke on this gat (*SE: gunshot*)
New to tha game... Shit we aint new to tha block
Through wit our fame... But we all good wit a glock
We'll stop at nothin until we get our fuckin money
We straight hardcore... Shit, aint nothin funny
(*SE: sirens*) Tha 5-0 know we dont play around
Cause we always have petty bitches dead on tha ground

::hook - J-Day::
Tha Deadliest Trio Up in tha game
We now here and we claimin our fame
U wanna see our gangsta, then test ya luck
Cause we dem type of niggaz dat dont give a fuck
Tha Deadliest Trio Up in tha game
We now here and we claimin our fame
U wanna see our gangsta, then test ya luck
Cause we dem type of niggaz dat dont give a fuck

::M.B.P.::
yes we here you best believe// J-day tck mbp burstin onto the scene, bout to make this green simply fulfillin our drem, we got thug lif runin' though our veins, here comes the rain, floodin' the game with lead drops of pain, i got nothin to lose but everything to gain, sitten here rappin, persuin my fame, So... stay out of our way, with 16 per clip we're prepared to sway, sit back relax and light up your jay, its the group you've been waitin' for all fuckin day, reppin DOA to the day i die, With blunts and jays thats how i get high, and wit a private jet thats how i fly, On 22 sprewells thats how i ride...

::hook - J-Day::
Tha Deadliest Trio Up in tha game
We now here and we claimin our fame
U wanna see our gangsta, then test ya luck
Cause we dem type of niggaz dat dont give a fuck
Tha Deadliest Trio Up in tha game
We now here and we claimin our fame
U wanna see our gangsta, then test ya luck
Cause we dem type of niggaz dat dont give a fuck

::music fades::

Tell us whachu think about it. 1.

uppin ppl....

c'mon yall...........................................

uppin for feedback......

Tell you the truth...
It's straight, MBP's verse is hard, wit a basic chorus.
I might have to hear how it sounds wit music but the rhyme sheme seems too basic, thats just my opinion. Its tight though and I did read it all.

aight thanks, still uppin fo feadback though

well...ya chorus seemed that repetitive to somma ya verses....both of you need to fix ya structure and ya need to be more complex....

overall this waddnt that good...all i saw was use and repeat lyrics in this...come on dukes....ya gotta get it together


igido

c'mon............................

yo, i liked it, i like more kwik rhymes (no pun itntended). Keep up da good work.

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