50cal. feat Nate Dogg
 

hit the link.1st song on the page

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cf...endid=469753676

l o l

i stopped when he said u aint gotta listen

I like the hook.
what beat is this?

also..
your flow is a little boring.
but i like the overall feel of it.

just need to be more comfortable it seems.
cuz your presence overall is like your reading it with a little attitude.
get to the poitn where it sounds like your just doing it natural.

good beat though.
good flow to it.
just work on uppin the energy/attitude.

lol @ ur about section

"28 Year old Poet,writter and musician 50 Cal. "

classic.

1

Rofl..

Hes a no name poet and a no name rapper..

i wonder if his rapper ghostwrote for him.

lmao

It's Jack The Ripper, lets battle hoe

If I were to guerilla jack a Nate Dogg chorus, it would be this one
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wBQXWnhhPRk

lol ...........