A minute is a short lapse of time to blast a rhyme some
 

A minute is a short lapse of time to blast a rhyme some
Take an hour to try shower a microphones so they dumb
You in the wrong life if you face long strife just to rhyme
Bust mine on the spot and drop it like its hot and divine
Some cats thinking clown and sinking down into stupidity
A Town committee along with the mayor couldn’t be witty
Enough to save them but they crave to stem with right recipe
Make a slight mistake end up in a fight great with destiny
Born with hope crook like a torn notebook my pages
Don’t turn well

Dawg..really this is your last warning..either make longer Open Mics and put some effort into it or im gonna have to bann you ..

u gon battle merkage
nigga

and yo drop was aight

bonecollecter show me a ruule which shows how long a om must be or is this something you're making up come on man that's ten bars get off my back

maddrapper: i was feelin this a lot, good word play sick multits good rhyme scheme vocab was iffy...but it was madd good i liked it 8/10 keep writing, ill keep given feed back i like ur shit.......rtf on my om in my sig please

thanks for the props and critique on this one

my link(http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=201962&page=2)