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blackwell vs. phatmic vs. miss. lyricist
deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. |
Checkin in... :thumbup:
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ite checkin in................................................ .........
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check the mic
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I wonder if it's okay to spit early... cus I'm itching to do somethin. Patience was never one of my strong points, y'all...
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im about to blow away the line max....peace and good luck...
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you can post now if you want all of you have checked in
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Using // represents the end of one line.
*takes the mic, and signals for the DJ to SPIN THAT SHIT*
What kinda nigga has farts so strong that egg foo yong is more pleasant that the shit that tags along// With these dudes, cause it seems as if these two like to stew in their own stench, cleansing is long overdue// Y'all damaged, any nigga who messes with me is bound to get ravaged// They'll find y'all, but your shitty verses won't be salvaged// You beg for mercy but I ‘decline to acquiesce’, I can’t suppress the brutality within my sentence stress, nevertheless, I’ll leave enough excess for them to identify your body with and repossess the man made mess// I don’t need a shovel, my verses strike hard, I will bombard and send yah fat ass lards straight through the core and into China- charred // 谁是这减速? (Who is this fucking retard?)// You cop yah verses from Kroger greeting cards, but “It’s always Pleasure” to leave you scarred, and I’m always strikin my “Target”s hard, yah albums are on a WalMart discount discard, sold for “always low prices” if you have a membership card// Seven Eleven, they got you in the back- Musiq Store- they got you in the back- Dollar General, they got you in the front on the .99$ stack- WHEW-WEE YOU ON A ROLL JACK!// I’m takin’ yah punches and returning ‘em sevenfold, though I’m sure you’ve been told the seven deadly sins but get ready to behold them again:// Pride in yah abilities when you know yah ain’t worthy// Envy of someone that ain’t nothing compared to my glory// Gluttony, trying to acquire something more than you require// Lust, I know I’m fly, but you can't satisfy my desires// Anger, don’t get mad at me because I'm smoother n silk// Greed, try to obtain that win, but that rut you’ll never bilk**// Sloth, these heathens better start believing in my powers, cus this chick can pound you on end for hours and hours// *Flings the mic at one of them fools...* **means to escape |
You'll probably be ah "No Show" Everytime I Decide I'ma Write-My-Diss,
black well get smaked well and i I r-o-c-k-s and socks this bitch yall still working in the past an im killin yall in the present tense hannibled ya mind and your full mentals so how yall tryin to make sense Gotta Stay-Vexed,It's ah Test,always been Known to be in Fued thru the Fire Telegraph ya Spits is tha Only Time this foo is Ever Spittin this Threw tha Wire i see i have to divide these two an work em like a threesome ignorance is bliss so battlin me will only make these fools even more dumb When this murder to this 2 sided man, he'll be on mac.....11 bites are hell i'll leve this dude on dicks more then lil kim, then dub him Jockwell* she comes through here lines streched like a tall bitche's north to dirty south she loves ludacris word of mouf, only lines cuming the flow to her baron mouf Ya’ll keep ironing your rabbit’s, you’ll continue to be pressing the luck You used Virt's phat mic to come, but still didn’t get those Star Bucks You punches and personals were sketchy and ya flow Probably Gone, Cuz Mathmatically 95.7% of ya Lines are More Out of Shape than Polygons *(rocks+blackwell) and i kept the line limit.....uppin for cockwell's verse |
start the voteing smackedwell's verse is late...
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Upping...
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breakdown for miss lryicist:
flow:all over the board strecthed bars for sure but some of them had a good use of internal rhyming hard to grade this 6/10 volcab:good use here maybe too good though with your touchy flow 7/10 puncheS:not too much for direct lines and alot of played ideas, shit i've already heard my fav,"yah albums are on a WalMart discount discard, sold for “always low prices” if you have a membership card//" alright 6/10 overall:19/30 breakdown for phat mic: flow:nothing too special but it was working 6.5/10 volcab:pretty average worked for your verse 6.5/10 punches:better punches for sure my fav,"Cuz Mathmatically 95.7% of ya Lines are More Out of Shape than Polygons" you got it here 8/10 overall:21/30 vote--close battle one of the better ones this week but my vote is for phat mic |
its all about the closer...uppin for more votes
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Watch this nigga come at me a whole bunch of flamboyant Sh*t/
When his rhymes is like masturbation…. cos he the only one enjoyin' it/ Fuk this dyke its just polite, my true facts proceed to kill those foes who lust to fight/ ceelo’s eating dust tonight, you remind me of jackson's Kids Masked and scared to TOUCH A MIC/ (mike) everytime i drop-barz im blessed with perfection, your hits couldnt be *rock-hard* if u dropped with lead erections/ popped an cocked this faggot right threw the rectum sayin u should fear the text son, cos last time i heard sumthin ill from u…. i had an ear infection/ so step back before i break in ya head man, I’ve seen it all but this is the first time I’ve seen naked dicks on webcam/ head jam now watch the lead cram so far up this P*ss*’s vag he’ll be lookin’ like one of reds fans/ (redman in his Porn movie all I got to say) your styles bleak im known to murder the weak, rap their bodies up an’ toss em down in the creak/ u fear peoples criticism, it hurts when they speak, thats why you’ll be too P*ss* to name yourself HERB OF THE WEEK/ (sigh) Ex-P |
c look wot happens wen u try battle bitch???
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