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Verdikal 02-23-05 01:18 AM

••••Dice•••• vs Zeus'
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 02-23-05 at 01:48 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 02-23-05 01:30 AM

Zeus' has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 01:30 AM.

Verdikal 02-23-05 01:33 AM


Opener
Name=Dice? This Kid's Nothing He's Barely Bigger Then Rice
He Could Be Nelly's From Pimp Juice And Still Wouldn't Be Nice

Body
He's On A Review Mirror, Coz Defeat Is Closer Then They Apear
The Only Way He'll Get More Wins Is A No Show By Will A Peer
He Tryed To Scare Me By Making A Name Like Cali's D-Iced(Dissed)
But He Dissed Himself, By Thinking He Was Twice As Nice
Your Elevation Is Like Parallel, So Your Provide Your Humiliation
Blurred With Smoke You Couldnt See Defeat If Troop's Your Affiliation

Closer
This Kid's Shaking Like He Was The Star In A Jello Commercial
Step Up Or Step Out, Now I'm Abusing You With Ya Verbals

*C.A.L.I's Old Name (D-Iced=Dissed)
*Will A Peer Always Do No Shows
*He Was In A Crew Verbal Reformatory

System 02-23-05 01:45 AM

••••Dice•••• has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 01:45 AM.

••••Dice•••• 02-23-05 01:54 AM

TYPE YOUR WHOLE VERSE LIKE THIS, ONLY WAY YA GOT KEY’S ON LOCK.
Tried to drop a hard-bar so he started write’n his verse up on the cock,
But pack’n 2 inches get’s you bout 1 sentence so he settled or another loss,
Yes sir, your in desperate need of elevation, someone call Dr. Spock

Fake and played, couldn’t get your nut’s off, if ya last name was planters,
Last time I saw shit like that on paper, MF I was in pampers!
My post’s produce a finer thread that mean’s I’m better attired, just better retire
Cause your “battle’s” should come equipped with rattle’s and pacifiers
Ya edible like cookies ya crumble-son, in text, I’m incredibility cumbersome
So who’s next? I got this one wrapped up like fuck’n cumber-bun


Cumbersome- Difficult to handle because of weight or bulk.

••••Dice•••• 02-23-05 01:55 AM

Check the registration date on your big hommie D-Iced, mine was before, way before.

Verdikal 02-23-05 01:57 AM

He Had D-Ice Under His Name On Member Title Way Long Before You Kid

••••Dice•••• 02-23-05 02:00 AM

Lmao... no he didn't. I joined Sept 2004 He joined a few days before that, Empire didnt' have that until the end of October.

Get your facts straight.

L.A. 02-23-05 02:02 AM

This was feedback posted for Zeus'
 
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••••Dice•••• 02-23-05 08:43 AM

up'n.............................................. ...........

Da_Throwdest 02-23-05 09:26 AM

Voted For: Zeus'

this was an 1-sided battle all the way out:
opener: zeus'
vocab: zeus'
structure: zeus'
multis: zeus'
closer: zeus'
zeus' hit wit much harder punches thru out this battle & came harder in his verse; dice u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & work on wordplay
make sure 2 return the favor

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Verdikal 02-23-05 06:47 PM

I'll Return Your Vote In A Minute Bruh,.......................

••••Dice•••• 02-23-05 07:59 PM

One sided my ass, your next.


up'n....................

Red Stroke 02-23-05 08:02 PM

This was feedback posted for Zeus'
 
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Verdikal 02-23-05 11:08 PM

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