BrOTheRP.A.R.A. vs daillest1
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-02-04 at 02:57 AM

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BrOTheRP.A.R.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 03:03 AM.

k hurrs mine

I'm tryin to understand why im not in the band//
caught you in your room wackin it you jizzed all over your hand//.

you called yer gurl asked where she was all as she gave u was the finger//
the last time you seen her was a singer//.

you went out after you got payed//
from the gurl you layed//.

you went out side and bought some bling//
i told you that you got a nice ring//
and asked you where you got that thing//.

crazy thing you are i wanna get you back for what you are//
and crack you in the sack//.

just cuz your a crossdresser//
dont make you any lessor then me or her//.
Now How About That!

daillest1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 03:07 AM.

aiight, yo

see im causin devistation, hurt, pain n elaberation ,
to this manz mental deformitation, u got no rime stabelization,
dog wut im really sayin, iz that yo rimez is nuttin but lyrical laxitation,
ima spiritual- more like a godly rap-creation,
wit tha evilization of satain,
now he persperation, prayin that a few pitty votes ill get em out of tha
self dug grave that he now lays in,
aint i tell u 2 bring it, maby u sholda tooka second 2 listen
so tell me, u called da best... i mean u really aint even that hot
i mean im tha 1 packin tha burners n glocks,
tha moste this man be packin is thermal socks,
turn on tha A/C n cool him off, n thaw heated soft,

battlin me... yea kid u got some balls,
but leave it 2 daillest 2 chop them bitches off,

this is daillest1 baby(girlfriend)im uppin this battle for him...i think my baby won....that other guy doesnt know what he is doing....just incase you dont know....thats me in the~~sig i think its called~

waiting for votes any one read and holla back at us

hey...i need people to vote up on this battle....please....i want to win a battle on here....

Voted For: daillest1

This is the only verse where I see punches thos battle lacked punches but I have to sa this was 'da illest' out of the two Brother you're lackin in the attack this is a battle yea your rhymin but u ain't punchin it's different from an audio battle even then ur verse still was weak ur structure looked newbish so I suggest the pro look bting it together. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043

vote up..

i need some votes...vote up vote up vote up

wheres the votes come vote for me ????????????????

VOTE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!tryin 2 get this battle closed and another win on my record..........dont just look at da battle and leave....vote on this shit~~~

This was feedback posted for daillest1
 

Daillest did it...............................................