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StackMann 08-03-06 03:02 AM

Raw King vs StackMann
 
Battle Rules:

8 - 10 lines
drop 30 minutes after check
3 - 0 = ko
4 - 1 = TKO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-06-06 at 03:02 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

System 08-03-06 11:44 AM

The Creator has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-06 11:44 AM.

The Creator 08-03-06 12:06 PM

Yo...
... I'll son you, you aint new to rv - just hip hops inoguration
Stack is sick?... 'Coz he put 2 N's to exclamate his occupation
dowg you need to quit rapping like you failing the class
'Coz you see potencial in yourself . . .
. . . When I shoved your head in your ass . . .
dawg... there's a small limit to beatings, but I aim to uppen barz
'Coz your rhymes are as played-out as 'Stackmann nameplays are
So speak your logic, you're not creative at all so heck... dont bother
you lack flows, so I'll toss your body overboard . . .
. . . Just so you could test the waters . . .

System 08-03-06 11:57 PM

StackMann has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-06 11:57 PM.

StackMann 08-04-06 12:09 AM

so you call your self the creater..creator of what
because the verses that you drop, got me stuck//
my punches hit u hard, like a hokey stick and puck
my ryhmes will have you spinnin like what the fuck//
youve been in this rap game longer than me
and my shit still sounds better like ocean breeze//
so you accepted as a guest man why was that
maybe your were to afraid that your shit was wack//
or maybe it was cause your afraid of the big man stack
cuz my punches hit like thunder when they come intact//

The Creator 08-04-06 01:06 PM

uppin............

GKillaz05 08-04-06 01:41 PM

Voted For: Raw King

The Creator:
... I'll son you, you aint new to rv - just hip hops inoguration
Stack is sick?... 'Coz he put 2 N's to exclamate his occupation
4/10 - Decent Opener.
dowg you need to quit rapping like you failing the class
'Coz you see potencial in yourself . . .
. . . When I shoved your head in your ass . . .
5/10 - Good Punch.
dawg... there's a small limit to beatings, but I aim to uppen barz
'Coz your rhymes are as played-out as 'Stackmann nameplays are
4/10 - Decent.
So speak your logic, you're not creative at all so heck... dont bother
you lack flows, so I'll toss your body overboard . . .
. . . Just so you could test the waters . . .
4/10 - Decent Closer.
17/40

StackMann:
so you call your self the creater..creator of what
because the verses that you drop, got me stuck//
2/10 - Weak Opener.
my punches hit u hard, like a hokey stick and puck
my ryhmes will have you spinnin like what the fuck//
2/10 - Weak.
youve been in this rap game longer than me
and my shit still sounds better like ocean breeze//
1/10 - WTF.
so you accepted as a guest man why was that
maybe your were to afraid that your shit was wack//
2/10 - Weak.
or maybe it was cause your afraid of the big man stack
cuz my punches hit like thunder when they come intact//
2/10 - When they comin intact?
9/50

OVERALL: The got this no doubt, his punches were way better, the other was was to simple and didnt really have any punchlines to bring to the table.


RTF - in SIG or Vote be Removed.

The Creator 08-04-06 06:57 PM

Uppin..............

The Creator 08-07-06 10:54 AM

Uppin.......... .............

The Creator 08-07-06 05:56 PM

..........uppin bitches.........

Lyrically Gifted 08-07-06 09:17 PM

Voted For: Raw King

so you call your self the creater..creator of what
because the verses that you drop, got me stuck//

vs

... I'll son you, you aint new to rv - just hip hops inoguration
Stack is sick?... 'Coz he put 2 N's to exclamate his occupation

meh weak battle.. i think creator took ot for commin less wack...and not as much self glorry just..elevate

Lyrically Gifted 08-07-06 09:18 PM

return the favour vs infuelentialwun werd................................

The Creator 08-09-06 06:09 PM

Uppin please .. .. ..

Valor 08-20-06 11:51 PM

Voted For: Raw King

dude rawking came illy as fuck son,the ounches were hard hitting and occasionally funny lol,the structure a little choppy,the personals um all i seen was 1 and it was cool.

vs stackmann which i seen ok punches but the rest seemed like filler,the structure was better than raw kings though,the flow was ok and thats all yo.

v/raw k


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