PhreeNapdizzle vs Peace Back
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 lines.. no more no less
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-10-05 at 04:19 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Peace Back has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 05:05 PM.

Bring on the competition. You're about to be peaced

This isn't a freestyle, its an attack
Let me introduce myself, Peace Back
I'm about to give rise to a whole new scenerio
my words will infect you like you got malaria
I can't refrain from issuing the pain of my lyrics that go from your feet to your brain.
This is my weather but its not your season.
Your lyrical game has no rhyme or reason.
Its treason the way you claim to be the best
Step up to me, I'm the ultimate test
Admit your defeat just like all the rest
Your rap is crap and smells like diarrhia
just like the food you get at pizzarias
If the best things are phree then the better are expensive
while you talk small, I speak extensive
You remind of soda thats flat with no fizzle
when I think weak rapping, I think of Napdizzle

PhreeNapdizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 10:08 PM.

**background info on this Peace back kid.. he goes to school for chemistry.. he doesnt know rap.. this verse goes around that.



First comes your mom.. later comes in ur dad
they let off a bomb and created somethin-real sad
and while they sit and ponder this messin with much emotion
this punk, faggot chemist comes for a 2nd explosion
and while nobody knows-it its true, he just aint showin
he sits and writes equations.. but rapverse just for commossion
im expecting something big tho cuz hes chemicly inclined..
hes regreting fucking with me cuz im sure that hes lyin..'
you suck.. but wait.. peace back to what?
unleash the fuss.. is it cuz u eat a bag of nuts?
tell these people the nutritional value is protein
dont get mad my subliminal mal-view shattered ur whole scene
it goes deep.. this bad-ass met somethin badder
your show's cheap.. im changing ur state of matter
but i got. one. bigger.. cuz u stepped into a bind
try to reconsider the need to reconfigure your mind.


Explanations.. hes a chemist so that explains most of the equations.. explosions.. that whole bit..
key words in chemistry.. "state of matter".. gas, solid, liquid..
since hes good with working with equations.. the last line has to do with reconfiguration and the human brain ( his mind)

like i said.. i expectin something big from you.. better than i thought i guess.

Voted For: PhreeNapdizzle

Structure:Phreenapdizzle, peace back, ur shit was whack and ur lines were fucked damn kid......try and make ur lines end up at the same spot...sorta like phree....PHREENAPDIZZLE GETS THIS

Multis-Both lacked multis nothing good was goin on wit those up on multis it will enhance ur verse a lot.

Personals:Just read Phree's verse it had a couple good personals.....peace back was whack fa sho......no doubt who got it

Punches:Phreenapdizzle had better attack points and better punches overall that hit hard. Peace back when u try to throw a punch, make sure it lands lol iight?.....

Originality:Phree had a better verse nice and fresh nothing played like peace back.....didnt like his at alll...................

V/PHREENAPDIZZLE

RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED

peace back to the taz... thanks for the review.. were looking for more votes n feed.. get at us

phree, you should win hands down, peace backs verse is lame

This was feedback posted for Peace Back
 

y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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