Capitol State vs The Metaphor
 

aiight

10 lines
no d/r cv or biting
no feedin
blind spit
1 hour to spit after check in
good luck

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Dawg I Spit-Sick,You'll Get-Lit, Like Michael Jackson I "rip Kids"-
Flip-Script, Aint Talkin bout bananas when I Say "You'll Get-Split"-
Blast-Heat, Like Fat men In Narrow Hallways, You can't get passed-me-
Your Ass Cheats, Pop Bullets In Your Forhead, have it Look Like Ac-ny-
Kids Gotta Low Rate, Low Fate, Im Winnin' Theres No Debate-
Your trapped, No Gates, Rollin' to a Loss like a retard on roller skates-
Kids a Bitch!...Call My Boiz Up Tell Em That I Met-A-Whore-
Change your name kid, cause we both know you cant even write a metaphor-
You Wack,Get Clapped, Bitch Slapped, Knock out your contacts-
Your oFf Track, You Spit Jack, Leave you Cross-eyes Like Shaq


done...did that real quick...str8 freestyle

before u spit can u drop an honest vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131085 so i can get that shit closed

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you dont get the picture you cant beat me...you in the wrong frame of mind/
you should change you name to broken clock...cuase you a waste of time/
dog if you met-a-whore...it was only your long lost mom on the internet/
ima control this nigga in battle...like a fucken neopet/
you right dog there aint nothing to debate/
only way you win this battle is if we had a bizzare twist of fate/
in this battle ima own you...like a fucken slave/
you shook scared like osama...you better hit the caves/
we dont need to state the facts...cuase i capitalized this victory/
you should of wrote the bible nigga...just to say u was part of history

state capital. you won this hands down.
metaphor came good but you came even better.
your multis were fucking out this world. str8 up you fucking good man.
ive picked out what i thought were your best lines.

Dawg I Spit-Sick,You'll Get-Lit, Like Michael Jackson I "rip Kids"-
Flip-Script, Aint Talkin bout bananas when I Say "You'll Get-Split"-
(nice opener. ) multis hot & nice punch at end

Blast-Heat, Like Fat men In Narrow Hallways, You can't get passed-me-
Your Ass Cheats, Pop Bullets In Your Forhead, have it Look Like Ac-ny-
(jus thought that line was funny as fuck)

Kids a Bitch!...Call My Boiz Up Tell Em That I Met-A-Whore-
Change your name kid, cause we both know you cant even write a metaphor-
(ha.ha.ha. had me laughing. nice personal))
good battle dog.

uupppppppppin this shit...come on mayn lookin for votes

Flow- State
Punches- State
Metas- State
No need to explain anymore you still had a good verse meta but State came hard the whole time
Vote~ State Capitol

iight this battle agan was one sided...Sc did a great job with your flow and ur vocab..you lacked some metas..but you had mulits and some good punches that combined with ya personals..they were hott lines like this one..Kids a Bitch!...Call My Boiz Up Tell Em That I Met-A-Whore-
Change your name kid, cause we both know you cant even write a metaphor-

Metaphor..you need some haha..sorry kidd you just didnt cut it..you lacked the flow and vocab..though i did like this opener..you dont get the picture you cant beat me...you in the wrong frame of mind/
you should change you name to broken clock...cuase you a waste of time/...keep elevatin'

uppin this yal......................................

aiight

capitol: ur shit was sick..good multi's..and punches and personals...i was likin dis too da fullest...well it was aiight..ive seen better...good flow n structure...sick shit

meta: not too good it was too basic..keep elevatin mayn..

vote: cap

state: pretty good for a newb....it wasnt the best but it was good..u had sick multi's good personals and good punches...ur flow was aiight and ur structure was ill...good job kid

meta; WACK....ur punches were ughh and personals ugh...flow...ok..and structure..ugh

vote:meta

rtf