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bow down peasants the kings here and has made his presence/
into the room with the goons bout as cocky as a weapon/
step back for space dont make me have ta remind ya/
im takin all of the spot light over ya head like a visor/
closin yo eyes the bright-ness will seek through and blind ya/
and burn a hole in ya head like that thing used wit a vagina/
5th ave is where da killaz at thats where you can find us/
where da gunz blow ni**az and i aint talkin mariah/
im the rap messiah, rappers retire friends will find ya /
smoked from the rubberup like peeilin out on tires/
im tooo fabolous cant deny'em wish you try'em/
u have no heart u cowardly lion/
u aint no beast on these streets dog u bound to get hurt/
ill put the steel to ya tee like u ironed ur shirt/

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...687#post3200687

eh huh lol

funny

yo man that link is supposed to take me to a place where you left good feedback on someone else's open mic and showing you contributed to the form in which we want things done around here.

please go read the rules and do as I ask if you want me to allow another failure to abide by shit by you.

damn, im impressed...usually on this site if u got bad structure u suck haha. ur shit had nice rhyme scheme..flow was pretty dope...loving the wordplay pretty up to date shit man..keep droppin im lookin foward to readin some more shit from u.