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Voted For: Fly-E

....close battle this was nice......i liked both verses.....so im just going to have to break it down.....

first FLY-E.....

L.P.M.N.D.C.T.E....Let me tell you guys what that means

Its .Like. .postpartum. depression,

.Likes. .mens. circumcision sessions,

.licks. .nipples. is an obsession,

.likes. .dick. riding as profession,

.confession. of his .conception. .complextion. of a girl doc made a .correction.,

.likes. .tight. gay ass without protection,

.lookin. at fly-e with a massive .erection.

^^^^^^^^^^^ i see you tried to get creative with these lines...nice had me laughing LOL....still were a little choppy and could have been done different to make it better but good job at trying to be creative....

No need to hade the facts, rhymes leavin ya constricted, restriced, causin pain self-inflicted

No need to hide in the back, sonic snitched you out so i lifted the truth you aint admitted

Your equal to a fetus born in a fetal postion without a circumcission till scissors are on ur dick and slippin....ouchh

people lookin at you threw a peep hole seein my evil hangin you from a steeple on top of a cathedral

LP aint nothin i defined him and what i'll do to him, i'll commit sins on ur limbs and when they break repeat it again.

^^^^^^^^^^^^ these lines were a little choppy but came direct and i like the approach on them....

NEXT LP...


RV knows I got this...anything you post's a tragedy
this battle being a toss up defies the laws of gravity

^^^^^ not bad

cuz the keys u'll dent mutants...& the movies been out
but u taking up X-causes is like seeing Wolverine sit out

^^^^^^nice

so the record speaks for itself...1 n 0, view it clown
yours talks so much broken english thought ur new in town

^^^^^ehhhhh no

& ya boyfriends a musty man...how prison life working?
only essay you'll write behind bars will be a gang version

^^^^^ lol i get but could have been worded better

dont take many words to declare how I bend you spine back
the leagues are gone now, & your verses arent far behind that

^^^^not bad but could of been better

overall i like the fact that you came real smooth on your verse....it had alot more of a flow to it and wasn't choppy...but the punches could of been better....i like that one X one though that was my favorite....and it was creative....

overall nice battle...LP you should of had more direct punches or personnels and you would of had this one....but Fly E got a little more of the edge in that area....1

Goood loookin on the votess upppinnnnnnnnn for more.

This was feedback posted for LPMNDCTE
 

i can't even call it.... both verses were terrible... if i had to i'd call it a draw

Mods close this old battle please...

Fly-E Won this as he is ahead on votes...

Voted For: LPMNDCTE

dont feel like going into detail,but more creativity on the part of lpmndcte whatever that means,not sure what u were trying fly-e a some kind of accronem or however u spell it for his name but fails lpmndcte wins.fly e your shit was to simple....no hate....

noobs need to stop judging............................

but honestly not impressed with either....................................

I feel ya honest vote i think this battle is closed or somethin i appreciate a veteran vote though foreal.