Fly-E vs LPMNDCTE
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-30-09 at 04:47 PM

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LPMNDCTE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-09 04:48 PM.

Fly-E has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-09 11:13 PM.

Everything with periods around it is what the letters stand for and the stories behind them...Lets get it. Good luck fam.And im considerin that all one line shoot me i said it wit one breathe lol.


L.P.M.N.D.C.T.E....Let me tell you guys what that means

Its .Like. .postpartum. depression,

.Likes. .mens. circumcision sessions,

.licks. .nipples. is an obsession,

.likes. .dick. riding as profession,

.confession. of his .conception. .complextion. of a girl doc made a .correction.,

.likes. .tight. gay ass without protection,

.lookin. at fly-e with a massive .erection.

No need to hade the facts, rhymes leavin ya constricted, restriced, causin pain self-inflicted

No need to hide in the back, sonic snitched you out so i lifted the truth you aint admitted

Your equal to a fetus born in a fetal postion without a circumcission till scissors are on ur dick and slippin....ouchh

people lookin at you threw a peep hole seein my evil hangin you from a steeple on top of a cathedral

LP aint nothin i defined him and what i'll do to him, i'll commit sins on ur limbs and when they break repeat it again.

quick shit good luck.

RV knows I got this...anything you post's a tragedy
this battle being a toss up defies the laws of gravity
cuz the keys u'll dent mutants...& the movies been out
but u taking up X-causes is like seeing Wolverine sit out
so the record speaks for itself...1 n 0, view it clown
yours talks so much broken english thought ur new in town
& ya boyfriends a musty man...how prison life working?
only essay you'll write behind bars will be a gang version
dont take many words to declare how I bend you spine back
the leagues are gone now, & your verses arent far behind that

Uppin there are only two battles on this site lets vote em and be done.

Voted For: LPMNDCTE

ummm fly- e. what the fuck was that shit. LP, your first and last bars were good, the rest was filler, but didn't really matter. i would of gave it to you just for the first punch

vote- LP

This was feedback posted for Fly-E
 

polls.............................................

Voted For: Fly-E

i like dis verse came across alot harder and i like the way it was layed out... i just think the punchlines connected really well so dat is why im voting for this both pretty good but i just like dis better... other was good though

You need to be banned from this site for thinking fly-e won this battle.

Dawwg its a battle stop takin it serious lol^^^ get the fuck outta here.
32-23 thats not to impressive to be talkin shit right nowlll

This was feedback posted for Fly-E
 

Good play on the name i like that you had good structure kept everything in order...kept the same rhyme almost through out the whole battle good punches and wordplay.....kept the battle clean one thing i dont like is the last line....not really a fan of it i like the fetus line the that was pretty good there.........some what original



LP
Alright sounded good actually but not enough to knock your opponent out of the win ya see you had some decent lines in there punches didn't really hit to hard not alot of wordplay.....decent structure and all rhymes was kind of basic stuff nothing to impressive but for the most part it was alirght but i got to give this one to Fly e.....

Voted For: Fly-E

fly e gets my vote didnt quite get the period letter thing but ur verse flowed alot bettter and ur vocab was straight other bull just couldnt find the flow no metas no hard hittin shit all love no hatin fly e gets my vote

fly e

This was feedback posted for LPMNDCTE
 

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Voted For: Fly-E

....close battle this was nice......i liked both verses.....so im just going to have to break it down.....

first FLY-E.....

L.P.M.N.D.C.T.E....Let me tell you guys what that means

Its .Like. .postpartum. depression,

.Likes. .mens. circumcision sessions,

.licks. .nipples. is an obsession,

.likes. .dick. riding as profession,

.confession. of his .conception. .complextion. of a girl doc made a .correction.,

.likes. .tight. gay ass without protection,

.lookin. at fly-e with a massive .erection.

^^^^^^^^^^^ i see you tried to get creative with these lines...nice had me laughing LOL....still were a little choppy and could have been done different to make it better but good job at trying to be creative....

No need to hade the facts, rhymes leavin ya constricted, restriced, causin pain self-inflicted

No need to hide in the back, sonic snitched you out so i lifted the truth you aint admitted

Your equal to a fetus born in a fetal postion without a circumcission till scissors are on ur dick and slippin....ouchh

people lookin at you threw a peep hole seein my evil hangin you from a steeple on top of a cathedral

LP aint nothin i defined him and what i'll do to him, i'll commit sins on ur limbs and when they break repeat it again.

^^^^^^^^^^^^ these lines were a little choppy but came direct and i like the approach on them....

NEXT LP...


RV knows I got this...anything you post's a tragedy
this battle being a toss up defies the laws of gravity

^^^^^ not bad

cuz the keys u'll dent mutants...& the movies been out
but u taking up X-causes is like seeing Wolverine sit out

^^^^^^nice

so the record speaks for itself...1 n 0, view it clown
yours talks so much broken english thought ur new in town

^^^^^ehhhhh no

& ya boyfriends a musty man...how prison life working?
only essay you'll write behind bars will be a gang version

^^^^^ lol i get but could have been worded better

dont take many words to declare how I bend you spine back
the leagues are gone now, & your verses arent far behind that

^^^^not bad but could of been better

overall i like the fact that you came real smooth on your verse....it had alot more of a flow to it and wasn't choppy...but the punches could of been better....i like that one X one though that was my favorite....and it was creative....

overall nice battle...LP you should of had more direct punches or personnels and you would of had this one....but Fly E got a little more of the edge in that area....1

Goood loookin on the votess upppinnnnnnnnn for more.

This was feedback posted for LPMNDCTE
 

i can't even call it.... both verses were terrible... if i had to i'd call it a draw

Mods close this old battle please...

Fly-E Won this as he is ahead on votes...

Voted For: LPMNDCTE

dont feel like going into detail,but more creativity on the part of lpmndcte whatever that means,not sure what u were trying fly-e a some kind of accronem or however u spell it for his name but fails lpmndcte wins.fly e your shit was to simple....no hate....

noobs need to stop judging............................

but honestly not impressed with either....................................

I feel ya honest vote i think this battle is closed or somethin i appreciate a veteran vote though foreal.