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J Summers 09-23-09 01:44 PM

You Don't Give A Fuck About Me
 
http://www.zshare.net/audio/6591174668ac36fb/
fuck you rv

J Summers 09-23-09 03:48 PM

okay jay z..............................

_Talksic_ 09-23-09 04:19 PM

auto tune is wack as fuck,and lyrics just werent there

Mad Dog 09-24-09 11:13 AM

how did you know? :huh:

JTR 09-24-09 06:53 PM

this wasnt good, you should rap more, do less of this stuff, you're good when you rap

M&rk 09-28-09 11:24 AM

kinda looks like you're sqeezing that black girls boob. this is a pretty creepy version. might wanna up the vocals a little or turn the highs down on the beat a little. POST MY HOOK ON JAMGLUE! if i had it i'd be able to spit to it. i like this hook and that little bridge further to the end. i hate that say cheesey bull crap hook though, gew

Young Kidd (LM) 09-29-09 03:48 AM

you puttin too much autotune on it.
turn it down a bit. cuz its hittin the high robot on that bitch and that shit isn't attractive.

otherwise i'm feeling it.


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