X2daJ vs (~*~Dj KiD~*~)
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-17-04 at 04:46 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

X2daJ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 04:17 PM.

(~*~Dj KiD~*~) has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 04:21 PM.

keying..............................
hurrry up homie

man ur wack u got no shit drop ur face in da mud pit
ryhmes r fucked up ur verse with no hit u fucking hipacrit

man u a ass with some fucked up name think u bad like game
thinking ur bad thinkin ur fame but u just a dumb ass fucking lame

dont touch me u gay ass wankin ya dad boasting glad
man u mad got no shit so u livin homeless crying like a sad-lad

uppin............................................. ....

Voted For: X2daJ

I'll call you maryjane, cuz I'm smoking you, herb
people aint feeling your shit if they replaced feces for nerves!!
^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCH NICE OPENER


You're a Damn Joke, bitch, are you [b]Kid[/n]ding?!
Did you eat a hammer, because it's "W(H)ACK" that you're spitting
^^^^^^^^^^ NICE WORDPLAY GOOD PUNCH


You're panicing, pounding pulsating penises, while I inflict harm
You play with more cock then a rooster breeding farm!!!!!
^^^^^^^^^^^^ MUWAHAHAHAHA GOOD CLOSA NICE PUNCH GOOD FLOW




X2DAJ- U HAD AN GOOD LIL SHORT VERSE GOOD PUNCHES AND U HAD WORDPLAY AND FLOW








man ur wack u got no shit drop ur face in da mud pit
ryhmes r fucked up ur verse with no hit u fucking hipacrit
^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" KINDA WEAK PUNCH


man u a ass with some fucked up name think u bad like game
thinking ur bad thinkin ur fame but u just a dumb ass fucking lame
^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD PUNCH


dont touch me u gay ass wankin ya dad boasting glad
man u mad got no shit so u livin homeless crying like a sad-lad
^^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK MAYNE NOT AN GOOD PUNCH


DJ-KID- U HAD AN WACK VERSE YA PUNCHES U LACKED IT WASNT HARD HITTIN AND U NEED TO ELEVATE

OVERALL= I THINK X2 GOT DIS HANDS DOWN CAUSE OF PUNCHES AND FLOW


WHY?

X2- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE LIL WORDPLAY IN THERE AND U HAD GOOD CREATIVE PUNCHES WHICH MADE ME LAUGH AND IT ENTERTAIN ME,

DJ- YA VERSE WAS TOOOOOO BASIC NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES AND USE PERSONALS

AND DONT STRETCH YA LINES TOO MUCH

DA REASON WHY I DIDNT VOTED FOR U

BECAUSE YA PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN AND TOO BASIC


..............WORD



RETURN AN FAV~!

uppin............................................. .......

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This was feedback posted for X2daJ
 

I proper liked this X2, cant vote for you tho. Damn shame!

Voted For: X2daJ

X2daJ punches were a lil more complex that DJ kid's....He had good wordplay and metaphors...DJ, word ya punches a lil differently and you'll be kew...but, X2daJ pulled this one out with a more creative, well arranged verse....He was thorough and consistent throughout....so he got my vote

vote= X2daJ

This was feedback posted for X2daJ
 

checkin polls............................................

Voted For: X2daJ

aight i gotta say x2daj took this one

openin verse- x2daj
structure- x2daj
personals- x2daj
punchlines- x2daj
metas- hmm....
multis- x2daj
over all- x2daj

no hate on this vote just sayin da facts

Voted For: X2daJ

nice job fam u got this one kid u hit him up with some hard punches bro keep em comin work on vocab a bit but u got this battle won man nice structue and flow tho nice man nice
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