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FlowIntelligent. 12-09-04 04:23 PM

16. Schema Vs. 49. Makaveli Trained
 
Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time

10 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

schema 12-10-04 05:37 PM

check...makaveli trained likes penis...

TonyTone 12-10-04 09:50 PM

check, schema still breast feed w/ his mom

TonyTone 12-11-04 06:05 PM

This dude reps SC n wonders y ppl say tha souf iz wak
Even Majic Johnson refused 2 purchase ya A-Tracks
Im lethal wit verbs, wont hesitate ta give this dude a beating
Its 2 bad that ya Ghost-writers went out Trick-or-Treating
U’d think I hate Art tha way I damage ya Frame
Start bitin raps, cuz I cant Picture u ill, all I c iz Poor-Traits
Ya Shoulderz iz Cracked, now im leavin ya Head on ya Back
Ur Under fire so how u gone take Over tha match
Ur Underarms like Deodorant, u aint potent, jus ass
Like havin Sex n tha Dumpster, this kids Fuking Trash

schema 12-14-04 08:57 PM

your fucked just resign...no punch in ya lines...
oh and heres a new concept...multiple rhymes...
want some advice? sound better...how you plan to sell records?
when you cant even figure out how to work the spell checker...
WErD I SkEEtZ on DEEz HOEZ...wow hes street! the shit shows!..
looks like he typed his whole fuckin verse with his nose...
damn...he must have chilled with some thugs at one point...
cause judgin by his verse he wrote every punch at gunpoint...
whyd you even sign up for this tourney...shits silly...
youre out round one like a wildcard team against philly...

4fil 12-15-04 03:05 AM

This dude reps SC n wonders y ppl say tha souf iz wak
Even Majic Johnson refused 2 purchase ya A-Tracks
^^^booooo, crowd isnt please by your opener.
Im lethal wit verbs, wont hesitate ta give this dude a beating
Its 2 bad that ya Ghost-writers went out Trick-or-Treating
^^^^rhymes was forced.. punch was alright... dont self glorify
U’d think I hate Art tha way I damage ya Frame
Start bitin raps, cuz I cant Picture u ill, all I c iz Poor-Traits
^^^an aight punch... very played
Ya Shoulderz iz Cracked, now im leavin ya Head on ya Back
Ur Under fire so how u gone take Over tha match
^^^.....mmmmm an alright punch, again heard it before
Ur Underarms like Deodorant, u aint potent, jus ass
Like havin Sex n tha Dumpster, this kids Fuking Trash
^^^heard itbefore
Didnt like your verse... it had no personals in it whatsoever.... some of the punches were bitten.... because i had heard most of them before... work on you personals


your fucked just resign...no punch in ya lines...
oh and heres a new concept...multiple rhymes...
^^lol... good multies... nice opener
want some advice? sound better...how you plan to sell records?
when you cant even figure out how to work the spell checker...
^^^mmmm, an aight punch here
WErD I SkEEtZ on DEEz HOEZ...wow hes street! the shit shows!..
looks like he typed his whole fuckin verse with his nose...
^^^hahahahah nice
damn...he must have chilled with some thugs at one point...
cause judgin by his verse he wrote every punch at gunpoint...
^^meh.... its was alright
whyd you even sign up for this tourney...shits silly...
youre out round one like a wildcard team against philly...
^^^....average closer
pretty hard hitting verse here by schemer...

vote schema

FlowIntelligent. 12-16-04 05:11 PM

makaveli trained :

This dude reps SC n wonders y ppl say tha souf iz wak
Even Majic Johnson refused 2 purchase ya A-Tracks
^^wack 3/10
Im lethal wit verbs, wont hesitate ta give this dude a beating
Its 2 bad that ya Ghost-writers went out Trick-or-Treating
^^lmao dope 8/10
U’d think I hate Art tha way I damage ya Frame
Start bitin raps, cuz I cant Picture u ill, all I c iz Poor-Traits
^^dope fucking meta amazing lol 9/10
Ya Shoulderz iz Cracked, now im leavin ya Head on ya Back
Ur Under fire so how u gone take Over tha match
^^ehh wack and played 3/10
Ur Underarms like Deodorant, u aint potent, jus ass
Like havin Sex n tha Dumpster, this kids Fuking Trash
^^lol dope meta weak closer 5/10

overall : 28/50 (56%)

Schema:

your fucked just resign...no punch in ya lines...
oh and heres a new concept...multiple rhymes...
^^decent opener 5/10
want some advice? sound better...how you plan to sell records?
when you cant even figure out how to work the spell checker...
^^lmao dopest bar in this battle 10/10
WErD I SkEEtZ on DEEz HOEZ...wow hes street! the shit shows!..
looks like he typed his whole fuckin verse with his nose...
^^lmao dope consistent also 9/10
damn...he must have chilled with some thugs at one point...
cause judgin by his verse he wrote every punch at gunpoint...
^^lmao dope once again 8/10
whyd you even sign up for this tourney...shits silly...
youre out round one like a wildcard team against philly...
^^good meta weak closer 5/10

overall : 37/50 (74%)

vote: schema for obvious reasons

headgames 12-16-04 07:00 PM

This dude reps SC n wonders y ppl say tha souf iz wak
Even Majic Johnson refused 2 purchase ya A-Tracks
nah, aint feeling this
Im lethal wit verbs, wont hesitate ta give this dude a beating
Its 2 bad that ya Ghost-writers went out Trick-or-Treating
pretty good
U’d think I hate Art tha way I damage ya Frame
Start bitin raps, cuz I cant Picture u ill, all I c iz Poor-Traits
lmao nice meta man
Ya Shoulderz iz Cracked, now im leavin ya Head on ya Back
Ur Under fire so how u gone take Over tha match
why would you follow up those 2 lines with this?
Ur Underarms like Deodorant, u aint potent, jus ass
Like havin Sex n tha Dumpster, this kids Fuking Trash
lol nice meta, still, punch didn't hit hard

Shcema:
your fucked just resign...no punch in ya lines...
oh and heres a new concept...multiple rhymes...
blah
want some advice? sound better...how you plan to sell records?
when you cant even figure out how to work the spell checker...
lmao
WErD I SkEEtZ on DEEz HOEZ...wow hes street! the shit shows!..
looks like he typed his whole fuckin verse with his nose...
lol again[b]
damn...he must have chilled with some thugs at one point...
cause judgin by his verse he wrote every punch at gunpoint...
[b]straight fire

whyd you even sign up for this tourney...shits silly...
youre out round one like a wildcard team against philly...
please... wack

V/shcema for dropping better

FlowIntelligent. 12-16-04 09:30 PM

Voting Is Over... Schema Wins 3-0


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