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-   -   Lokeye -vs- iLLaMinTid (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=106567)

iLLaMinTid 01-13-04 03:57 PM

Lokeye -vs- iLLaMinTid
 
1 verse
5 bars/10 lines
No crew - No dick riding - No hate votes
No free posting - and all votes have to be explained
due date: Thursday 9 PM Central time
MUST CHECK IN BEFORE POSTIN YOUR VERSE!
Lokeye kicks it off first
get at me! blah! i'm outtie!

Lokeye 01-14-04 04:19 PM

I don't know how to check in, in less than fifty letters so, I'm checking in...
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Lokeye 01-14-04 04:44 PM

close your mouth illamintid, your breath just wreaks
you need an iller mint, the normal dose is too weak
your message gots a poster of your asshole getting worked
with your nickname illamintid cummed all over it in spurts

it just hurts to see an emcee on the net cold gettin' reamed
by now your black hole's loose enough to suck in-an-entire team
I pity-the-crew you run with, cause they dealin' wit your stench
plus you walkin' like your ass holdin' a 10lb. monkey wrench
you need to take a seat, because your asshole's getting rent
here's a washcloth so your ass don't drip all over the loser's bench

iLLaMinTid 01-14-04 04:52 PM

LMAO! yeah same here . . i'm checkin in . . aright LOKEYE . . start this off dawg . . remember verses are due by Thursday 9 PM central time . . and i'll get at it after you post . . lol get at me! blah! i'm outtie!
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lokeye
I don't know how to check in, in less than fifty letters so, I'm checking in...
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iLLaMinTid 01-15-04 08:37 AM

1. I’ma beat down this RAEKWON ~ with only a TROJAN CONDOM/
you must be a fag talking about DICKS ~ get off my LEX DIAMONDS//

2. You’re blinded fact I “LOCKED” your “EYES” down with your small INTESTINES/
KNOCKED your EYES out and CHALKED EM ~ then PAWNED EM in AUCTIONS//

3. This bitch has an eye in his name except HE can’t SEE ME/
ONLY possible thing HE can SEE is ME ATTRACTING the VICTORY//

4. This cat has zilch in his skull except four THICK HALLS/
my mind owns a bulldozer ~ demolishing his mind’s BRICK WALLS//

5. Don’t have POSSESSION of any spears but I still manage to put a hole in this AMATEUR/
blastin with a lyrical bazooka to his MIDSECTION ~ DISCORVERIN a Wu-Tang life SAVOR//


aright let's get these votes up and runnin . . get at me! blah! i'm outtie! uppin! (1)

Weezy Snypz 01-15-04 08:44 AM

yall both really lost me know my battles aint the best but.......
yeah imma go wit

lokeye cuz ill ya rhyme was ai but it seemed you didnt really give enough punches or anthing
5. Don’t have POSSESSION of any spears but I still manage to put a hole in this AMATEUR/
blastin with a lyrical bazooka to his MIDSECTION ~ DISCORVERIN a Wu-Tang life SAVOR//

i didnt get it,sorry i know others will think different though they always do!!

iLLaMinTid 01-15-04 09:48 AM

don't you get metaphors? look on his avatar . . he has Raekwon from Wu-tang dawg . . and a life savor has a hole dead in the middle . . you wack dawg! go to school more! may be you'll learn somethin good . . get at me! blah! i'm outtie!
Quote:
Originally Posted by Weezy Snypz
yall both really lost me know my battles aint the best but.......
yeah imma go wit

lokeye cuz ill ya rhyme was ai but it seemed you didnt really give enough punches or anthing
5. Don’t have POSSESSION of any spears but I still manage to put a hole in this AMATEUR/
blastin with a lyrical bazooka to his MIDSECTION ~ DISCORVERIN a Wu-Tang life SAVOR//

i didnt get it,sorry i know others will think different though they always do!!

Lokeye 01-16-04 12:31 AM

uppin for votes, nice verse illaminted, come up this wit me

iLLaMinTid 01-16-04 08:13 AM

heh! your shit wasn't at all bad either . . but it's obvious we both need elevation . . but aright . . get at us soon fellaz! blah! i'm outtie! UPPIN! (1)
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lokeye
uppin for votes, nice verse illamintid, come up this wit me

iLLaMinTid 01-16-04 07:41 PM

ayo . . can somebody tell me why it is so hard to get votes in here? lol get at me! blah! i'm outtie!

Chris Black 01-16-04 07:49 PM

ill gets my vote for at least attempted word play...
His first bar was the best of the battle...

Lok just talked about ill's asshole a lil' too much....mabe alot to much...

I dont have enough posts to poll vote, sorry fellas

Please vote on my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107351

-W1

Daz 01-16-04 08:10 PM

lokeye..nice verse i really liked this verse..illamintid i didnt see to much in ur verse that really attracted my attention..i think this battle goes with him..def nice punches from him..

v-lokeye

return da favor:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105765

HotBarz 01-17-04 01:34 AM

illamindtid...is garbage.......vote goes to the other cat he just merked illamindtid........1 holla...

iLLaMinTid 01-17-04 10:10 AM

psh! you suck dawg . . if you actually sit down to think about the metaphors i had in my verse . . you'd think it was hot . . Lokeye's was elementary . . no hate on yuh Lokeye . . but you's hella weak! get at me! blah! i'm outtie!
Quote:
Originally Posted by HotBarz
illamindtid...is garbage.......vote goes to the other cat he just merked illamindtid........1 holla...

iLLaMinTid 01-17-04 10:11 AM

HERE! ya'll see that shit! Lokeye stayed talkin about the ass! and yall call that fuckin rap? ya'll weak! again no hate on yuh Lokeye.. get at me! blah! i'm outtie!
Quote:
Originally Posted by W1CKED
ill gets my vote for at least attempted word play...
His first bar was the best of the battle...

Lok just talked about ill's asshole a lil' too much....mabe alot to much...

I dont have enough posts to poll vote, sorry fellas

Please vote on my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107351

-W1


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