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DaTrusHurtz 03-29-07 01:09 PM

17. Popcorn (1-2) vs. 18. GC (1-3)
 
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March Madness Battles

You will be assigned a school that participated in March Madness. The goal of this battle is to diss your opponent's school with basketball related punches. However, you may also throw non-basketball related punches at your opponent's school if you choose to. Good Luck.

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Popcorn - Purdue Boilermakers

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GC - Ohio State Buckeyes


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
Votes Due Wednesday Night
New Battles Up Thursday Morning
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Popcorn. 03-30-07 11:32 AM

Check.

BTW...
I should of been Ohio State seeing as how I am from Ohio. Lol. Naw it's cool thou man. Good luck homie.

Popcorn. 03-30-07 12:15 PM

F*ck out of here, I'll block every attempt when you tryin' to score.
Yeah you guys made it to the Final 4, but it all comes to an end at the Final 4.
Why do I got be lyin' for? Man seriously you full of luck, guys.
& yeah my punches fans of Ohio State, just watch as they proceed to Buck Eyes.
No need to bust nines, this isn't some gangster life, so chill.
& I really feel bad, so I'll sign my car over to you so you can see how a Title feel.
It's live, it's real. Now your team is going down to the floor, bruh.
Have fun in your match tomorrow when we get to see Georgetown Ho' ya'.
Now I know son, but tell me this, are you made at me? Honest?
B/c I've done keyed up 10 lines & left Buckeyes served like Anthony Thomas!




...10 lines, short & sweet. HOLLA!

GC 04-02-07 08:20 PM

We're a force you cant stop so of course you're goin down
But yall got a fighter's mentality
Sorta like Roy Jones' the way yall went down in the first 2 rounds
U wack at ball, so every thing u throw will always hit the rim
This aint a fetish
But Ima shake the D so I can drop the last drips of piss on him
Spending u life in the computer, its clear ur a loser dude
Might get lucky if ur shot goes swish
Cuz it'll be the only the net will ever talk back to you
U gonna be a bench warmer all ur life, u never gonna do shit
I do a crossover like The Answer
But u do crossovers as well..its just a drag to see u do it
Tally up another win for OSU, we're gonna be the champs my friend
& For u Gatorade won't be necessary
Cuz it'll fuck around n leave out of energy and beat u again

tiggobitties 04-02-07 10:33 PM

GC-okay opener and closer nothing special...verse was alrite technically (had good multies and flow) but it was offtopic and times and had way more self glorification and than dissin...alrite verse tho

popcorn-seems like you didnt go as hard as you couldve but i feel it was enough...some good punches and wordplay...i actually liked opebner and closer

v/popcorn

DaTrusHurtz 04-03-07 04:16 PM

Why do I got be lyin' for? Man seriously you full of luck, guys.
& yeah my punches fans of Ohio State, just watch as they proceed to Buck Eyes.
No need to bust nines, this isn't some gangster life, so chill.
& I really feel bad, so I'll sign my car over to you so you can see how a Title feel.

vs.

We're a force you cant stop so of course you're goin down
But yall got a fighter's mentality
Sorta like Roy Jones' the way yall went down in the first 2 rounds

Roy Jones line was the line of the battle here, that was hott, but GC, u didn't have much else. The rest wasn't bad or anything, but not very direct to Purdue and most of ur concepts I'd seen before. As for Popcorn, 2 solid quotables, Buck Eyes thing was obvious, but still effective and car line was cool. Closer wasn't bad either, only line I didn't like was that forced ass Hoya line. Decent battle here and kinda close, but I got Popcorn winnin'.

Vote - Popcorn

DiZzy 04-03-07 04:44 PM

Why do I got be lyin' for? Man seriously you full of luck, guys.
& yeah my punches fans of Ohio State, just watch as they proceed to Buck Eyes.

^This was good, could have had better wording. The Georgetown punch sucked because they beat the hoyas so that didn't connect. Opener didn't work because they got past the final 4. You could have been way more creative at the topic.

Vs.

Roy Jones line was your best and that was pretty weak. The 3 line punches don't really work to me because it makes your punches come of stretched but, I didn't judge on that. Most of your punches just reallly didn't hit.

v//Popcorn

Civil. 04-03-07 07:35 PM

eh kind of weak battle here.


Pop-nothing too special from you man. i've seen better. Your usually more focused then this. I liked the buck eyes line. worded pretty solid. The car/title line was good, was a different way of usin the concept, but you worded it poorly. overall 1 punch i'd quote from you.

GC-After readin pops verse i thought you'd win, but it didn't turn out that way. Overall real weak verse. That strucure doesn't work out for you man, neither does it work for anyone else. it throws off the whole line. This kind of structure is only good if only used in 1 or 2 bars at the most. Your opener had potential, but was worded poorly.



v/pop

Ventice 04-03-07 09:19 PM

popcorn get my vote....

Pop- came with the scheme of the sport, in other words he used the topic to his advantage.


GC-Came with a couple tight punches, like the crossover line. I thought that flew in the air though, since he said crossover twice. I liked how he compare the guy life to this shyt. It was a cool battle though keep up.

TonyTone 04-05-07 12:29 AM

Why do I got be lyin' for? Man seriously you full of luck, guys.
& yeah my punches fans of Ohio State, just watch as they proceed to Buck Eyes.
No need to bust nines, this isn't some gangster life, so chill.
& I really feel bad, so I'll sign my car over to you so you can see how a Title feel.

vs

nothing

bla battle. gc had nothin really, pop atleast had concepts but wording wasn't too good

v/ popcorn

Titan 04-05-07 01:31 AM

Why do I got be lyin' for? Man seriously you full of luck, guys.
& yeah my punches fans of Ohio State, just watch as they proceed to Buck Eyes.
No need to bust nines, this isn't some gangster life, so chill.
& I really feel bad, so I'll sign my car over to you so you can see how a Title feel.
^both were cool,but i liked that buck eyes line.

V$

We're a force you cant stop so of course you're goin down
But yall got a fighter's mentality
Sorta like Roy Jones' the way yall went down in the first 2 rounds
^this was ight,coulda been more baskitball based lol,but cool

just felt pop corn came a lil harder,GC had maybe 2 coo lines only 1 i really liked so based on that

\\v// popcorn

DaTrusHurtz 04-05-07 10:11 AM

Popcorn wins 7-0. Please post voting links even though I obviously know u voted.

Popcorn WINS 2-2
GC LOSES 1-4


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