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Tony Yayo ft ME & Joe - Curious
www.soundclick.com/madknight
top one^^^^ Intro - Tony Yayo Hook - Joe Verse 1 - Tony Yayo Hook - Joe Verse 2 - Me Hook- Joe Verse 3 - Tony Yayo |
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Pretty Good song wit Yayo and Joe, *waits for MadKnight to come in*....
Ight, your vocals should be turned up a little, they dont match the volume of Yayo. Who ever did the cutting of the instrumental and the real song, needed to take their time, because it was very poorly done. It sounds like you was just reading off a piece of paper, because you was stretching the sylabals in your lines in order to stay on point. Pretty good job, but you need to add more variety in your sentence structure. 7/10 - could have been better if you took your time cutting the instrumental and the song together...it was really choppy rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222546 |
thanx................uppin!
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your second link is invalid fix it
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well lets listen here...
i'm not a fan of yayo....he pauses to much and is a simpelton....but he doing his thing so i can disrespect...no homo second cat...flows pretty good...vocals and quality could be upped a bit to fit yayos......but its alright. the editing of the track cutting could be better done....but tats a mnor detail not a bad track...just upp vocal volume and quality for hte most part and your on your way feed used 2/19 "That Feeling" |
wow...not much to say
u elevated a LOT....flow is their.....voice is nice..quality not bad....Q say ur the UK version of him [he's chillin here w me] tight song bro props...... |
uppin !
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ah'ight quality could be upped...vocals kinda low....an not as clear as could be.......delivery was unchanging...coulda used more emotion an a general change up woulda really helped u......flow was decent but repetitive..needed to change rhythm up here & there an drag sum words out..emphasize certain words to really get ya point across......presence was missing.....jus didn't have enuff feeling/conviction behind ya words....if u dun sound like u feeling what u saying why would the listener? ya get me......overall it coulda been better son......but u getting better an better wit every track...the key is to not get frustrated an continue to improve with patience an dedication u def gon be ah'ight son..........1
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not that great but not bad.. i'd rather just litsten to tony and joe but its aight flow is on point quality sounds mad off compared to the originals on tha track.. vocals need to be upped just not my typa shit
7/10 |
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