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PoLiFicK 04-21-06 06:41 PM

Is this Life Or is it me
 

Intro
i dont even know what people to keep around me..
The Supposily friends-turn they back instead-and clown Me
then When i come About-they put they hand out-ready to pound me..
Maybe its Me Or all of us-maybe Just Becuz-I dont trust - No One Else..
But to be true- I dont know wut ill do-I dont even Trust My Self...
is This life or is It Just Me..
Its Like i take Four Steps-then its 2 Steps-When i Get knocked back..
after all the hopeing-i finally find a open-then it comes out as a trap..
Finally Get my hands on cash-Finally After the tax-im givin money right back.
maybe Its me-but It feels like i was put on earth to fail..
but To me-Its all still like my life aint better than people in jail
is This life or is it just Me
I Get the pen on my tips-when i write a lil bit-ill erase Maybe people a hate me.
But i listen to music clips-another rapper a say da same shit-and people go crazy..
Maybe cuz i aint on the radio-so people dont hear me tho-They wouldnt know how to Rate Me..
Maybe Its me-but the He said She said rumors and the lies..
Then u dont attack about it-till someone ask about it-u looked suprised..
then have to unfold that-Like who told u that- i dont even know that guy
is this life Or is it Just me
Inside im Tired of the Pimpin-Im tired of the Pigeons- i just wanna stop Creepin
but if Get Committed - Will My lady be with it- Dont have to think about her cheating..
but After i Look my parents not together-they loved eachother-but not together for Some reason..
maybe its Me Maybe Im not tryin 2 work it out enough
nah Maybe Its Life or maybe im thinking to much

The longer our relationship goes Its gets harder with u..
Alot Of girls Want a Man Like me,so y do i bother with you..
maybe its because everytime i wanna leave-
I remember the good Things-
and Im right Back To part With you...Cant Be Apart From You..
but Nah It Seems like Everyday Its Somthing New...
got to Deal with love if you Stick Around-
But if you go i dont kno if i want u to now-
Im Confused - you Confused...i Dont Know What To do..

my friends Suppose 2 love And feel me 2..
Once u get a ride to go-
-thats when yo phone blow-
thats when everybody wanna chill with you
u aint got no gas toatin
they just free Loading
all yall broke and yo bills is Do...
now You Stuck in the House Wit yo peoples..
Tellin u 2 get yo own place
frowning up yo face
like Son i dont wanna See You...
She want rent money just 2 stay in the room u was raised..
this Suppose 2 be yo moms But u gettin older at age..
thought u could sleep in
but u payin for the weekends..
car Stuck-Moms pissed and u and yo grl is beefin

GOT 2 BE LIFe






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Kawn Flixx 04-22-06 01:15 AM

damn homie your back again?..i was really feelin this you had nice emotinos and very good feeling in this drop..the only thing that could have been better was the structure but other then that it was a really good and solid drop..nice job..keep it up

PoLiFicK 04-22-06 01:58 PM

Yeah Got Bored Just Thought ill type Suttin

lil S 04-22-06 11:57 PM

damn hommie you must put alot of emotions into your work this shit was long had me feening to get done it was dope though don't get me wrong but shit was long like a book i give you a 8/10 keep dropping and i'll keep posting very good stuf though i felt it hey hit up my food posioning drop

Valor 04-23-06 02:52 AM

the emotion in this was great i felt but the format looked shitty...no beef man,
the imagery was decent though and i liked the concept alot man,the vocab was below average a bit but it doesnt really matter to me,the story line was nice also what you spoke is true in alot of ways....anyways no hate man i was just giving you the positives and negatives to help you out instead of beating around the bush...nice decent peice here.


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