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Ransum 03-21-08 06:22 PM

Ransum vs Da Problem Child
 
Battle Rules:

20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-24-08 at 06:22 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Win due to banning of Ransum

System 03-21-08 06:25 PM

Da Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-08 06:25 PM.

System 03-21-08 06:31 PM

Ransum has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-08 06:31 PM.

Da Problem Child 03-21-08 06:59 PM

dis nigga name ransum is just another meat beater
and behind closed doors he is a undercover skeet eater
any thing that u say im not sure that u write it
cuz this nigga stay bitin, like a fat bitch on a diet
and like a fat bitch on a diet, i get rid of the wieght
dis nigga go both ways itz no way he is straight
every time u rhyme it all sound da same
if this was jail he will be in the shower gettin banged like gangz
spend a day wit dis nigga u will see he on da faget shyt heavy
dis nigga hidin in da closet didnt u learn from r-kelly
u will neva buss a clip any time or any day
yea u a OG but that stands for originally gay
u nice, sike! being hot is what u lackin
u beatin me iz like shaq makin 3s it will neva happen
if u look at this nigga be expecting a wink
u can catch him at the bar wit t-pain buyin him drinkz
u will no that u stand no change against me onli if u listen
my bars are hard to break sumthin like prison
ransum iz a rookie im a billion dollar pro
his career iz goin down fast like a 5 dollar ho

Ransum 03-21-08 08:37 PM

had an open mic drop that may of had me bannd for biting...
but ya written couldnt look good if MTV pimp ya writting...
the nerve of him...like 'musem with painting' he'll never drop a MASTER PIECE...
claiming he's skills got 'NO LIMIT' like he down with MASTER P...
you imitate.. i'll end this fake.. he try to mimic..
so when i disintergrate.. we can litterally state the sky-the-limit...
this newbie claim he the illest rated...
so the mag i sport i'll leave him illustrated...(sport illustrated)
so when he realise he's going from top to bottom it aint no sex postion...
no film for this one... so when it comes to 'taking a shot' he'll get 2 pieces on'em like the swim suit edition...
get shot with and disposed of like kodak cams...
its ya moms jaw where my bozack lands...
you so wack fam.. so watch me take care of DA PROBLEM CHILD like a GROWN ASS MAN!...
so Are you Serious Brotha?!@!?....
Da Problem Child verse'll get ignored like kids in a candy store with an experience mother...
after a few lines you done and its simple...
its gonna be harder for you to get a hold of a W then buttery nipples...
skills like a sluttry nypho... cuz i've been around and still comeing hard...
i can jump from one place to the next like im monkeying with bars...
so with this last bar still going...
im a shot at the problem.. and leave the egale back like terell owens... MOTHER FUCKER....

Cola 03-22-08 08:10 PM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

You win, becuase Ransum is a fucking loser biter...LAME ASS BITTCCHHH

Da Problem Child 03-23-08 02:40 PM

look man dont vote for me cuz he is a biter
VOTE ON WHO REALLY WON DA BATTLE

Valiant 03-23-08 07:52 PM

This was feedback posted for Da Problem Child
 
polllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzz btw whats up ransum

Godz Child 03-24-08 11:29 AM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

ransumz shyt waz hot but Da Problem Child had a punchline every bar so i will go wit him

plus i heard ransum waz biting

Ransum 03-25-08 08:34 AM

i told you da problem what would happen with votes....

but these lame ass niggas only see me as a bitter since that open mic but would never see my originality with battles how dumb can ya be....

dont ya see the different in my open mic compare to my battles???

and on top of THAT IT WAS ONLY 1 time that i said fuck it since its dead let me try and make it seem more active around here but chea!! i took the wrong rout and now im paying for it...

but i dont give a flying fuck thou because on the pieces i do spend time on writing mother fuckers dont either see skills when its there or feel drop that are straight real no bullshit type of drop and all ya wanna say is : its more of a keystyle not a writting drop seem like i rushed it.... just because its online i gotta drop some-shit that look crazy instead of what really sells or what is really me??... shit fuck it.... its whatever... i aint going to keep on explaining mysellf....


nice drop thou da problem you got potential kid....
nice flow... some decent punches... and creativeness is decent...
alot better then i exspected.... 8/10 good drop...

but...

i think personally you just came up short honestly...
i thought my bars was slightly more creative and hard hitting...

then again thats just my personal view...
but props...

Cola 03-26-08 05:10 PM

dont you mean....someone else's bars were more creative and hard hitting...you fucking biter

KM 03-28-08 08:32 AM

Voted For: Ransum



just all around the better verse....structure is off .....but your lines were still better.....not your best though

childs verse seemed rushed and alot of lame punches....it could of been better.....

~1~

JTR 04-07-08 12:39 PM

Voted For: Ransum

Ok ransum you fucking suck, but not as bad at Da Problem child does.... with giants dicks mind you, so you get my vote

Lay. 04-08-08 07:04 PM

Voted For: Ransum

v/Ransum for havin a better verse..damn..seems like every battle i vote for the guy thats not Problem child..an im not doin it on purpose..just everyone does better than him. lol

Kirk 04-09-08 12:14 AM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

Both you guys suck but I chose randomly so he gets the win.


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